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The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
He-he, it's like a TV series! Vince and Jack will reunite! Theo will learn new things... -
The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Theo has never stopped being brave -
The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Thank you so much Theo is going to find out new things - well, not new, but things he couldn't remember - and the past will become clearer and clearer. They will all learn about the fate of the pack and what truly happened. -
The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Vince, Jack and Skarg will become a little team! Theo is facing the past, and learns things he couldn't remember before. -
The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Jack has a knack for that! Good attracts good, I suppose. Vince will discover things about himself, while Theo has to relive the painful past. -
The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
They both needed to have 'spirit animals' - though Jack might be more surprised to hear that than Vince! -
Chapter Forty-One – A Matter of Perspective The house was collapsing. The earth roared underneath Theodore’s paws, and the tremors intensified. Behind him, the cries of terror from the cubs faded away. It took him but a moment to realize what was happening. He was falling through the floor, still battling the branches of the evil tree that was attacking them. Using all he knew, all the muscles and sinews in his body, he started jumping from one curled undergrown root to another, while
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Oh, yes... a very dangerous place. But fear not, Lawrence believes in his role as an investigator the most!
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I know I'm asking you guys to basically take notes... Rest assured - and hopefully vindicated - that while I'm writing this, I'm basically like
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So many people say the same thing!
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My stories seeping into each other, now that would be so crazy! It does look like what you infer... and Lawrence will look into it!
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Ha-ha, I doubt someone would put so much into... a stupid thing!
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Take of it what you will
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Chapter Twelve – Achilles’s Heel “Quick,” Anton ordered, just as they got out of the water. People were waiting for them, ready to act. “You, no need to be modest. Undress.” It took Lawrence a good moment to understand he was the one being ordered around. But he obeyed, because Anton’s words made sense. Felix grabbed his robe as soon he was naked and with the help of another student began to wring it. Bastien pushed him behind a large rock, away from the wind and removed his robe
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Jack knows a joke never hurt anyone! He's just... sunshine all around
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Thank you so much! I appreciate it - since I put quite a bit of work in these stories.
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And that is what they will do!
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They will all find their ways out! Gosh, it feels a little like a video game...
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I've always loved this song - as for them tripping... oh, lol, if I ever do that to you guys, feel free to grab 'em pitches and forks!
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Well, you're not far from the truth...
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I truly understand... the story will have a happy end - and that happy end will stretch over several chapters to compensate for all the pain!
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They are counting on the 'no hurting' rule! I read quickly and in my mind the nickname was 'three branches for brain rot', lol.
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Chapter Forty – The Future Alpha of Whiteflame Jack could read the pain in Vince’s eyes as the lava from the ceiling kept pouring onto his back. What were they going to do? Even a strong guardian like Vince couldn’t withstand such suffering for a long time. “Moon,” Jack whispered, his eyes stinging with tears he didn’t want to shed, “you said I’d never be alone. Please, just one time, send someone.” He squeezed his eyes shut, so Vince couldn’t read what he was feeling and thinkin
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Consider Lawrence distracted!
