Laura S. Fox
-
Posts
7,548 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Gallery
Help
Articles
Events
Everything posted by Laura S. Fox
-
You know me - when there's banter and peace... something's cooking!
-
The two aren't related!
-
For now, Jack sees glimpses of what happened. His intelligence and good instincts will help him understand the past.
-
Oh, definitely! He can really use some!
-
Chapter Twenty-Three – The Glitter of Hope Theodore felt the change as soon as he stepped outside. However, instead of rushing back in, he decided to inspect their surroundings as he had promised. As expected, whoever or whatever was behind the attack on Jack had conjured the area out of its own mind, because now they were back at the same altitude as before. If he needed any confirmation of that being the case, he only had to check their bags for their contents. They were all there, left i
- 13 comments
-
- 44
-
-
-
-
-
Well said!
-
They will be put to the test again. And again. And again. Did I mention this is an adventure?
-
These are all valid questions. And the heroes will find the answers - promise.
-
Yep, and he is
-
Oh, there is hope for him indeed... and hope is a beautiful word and feeling. Theodore wouldn't mind putting his tongue to work, lol.
-
Jack is on his way to become an even better seer, so yes, he will question what he saw.
-
The mystery of what happened will be revealed at the right moment. I have it all planned out!
-
He's in much need of those! Breakthroughs, I mean.
-
That is, in the nutshell, what this story is trying to say...
-
Chapter Twenty-Two – Clever Seer After the whole kidnapping thing and bad visions and all, Jack expected sleep to take him in one fell swoop, but that didn’t happen. His back pressed against Theo’s hard and warm body, he lay on one side, ready to slip into the world of dreams. Still, his eyes were wide open and his mind was as fresh as if he’d just woken up after a restful sleep. Vee was on his back and snoring softly. Jack would normally pester him with questions and pleas to tell him
- 22 comments
-
- 39
-
-
-
-
-
Oh, gawd, Maestro, I'm really getting goosebumps reading this final analysis. Yes, Lyn the absolutist. Alexander didn't call him Bernardo Gui by accident... Alexander saw that in Lyn, too, and maybe that made his initial infatuation grow into something far more solid. Also, yes, Lyn the lawyer! He'll always protect those he cares about. And in his case, this need to protect goes deep, and it will never go away. Let's not picture anyone ever daring to mess with his and Alexander's little girl...
-
Thank you so much! Full disclosure - sorry for making people cry! But I did sniffle as well while writing this, so there's that
-
I strived to navigate a complicated invisible line between the characters - all three of them. Your comment makes me think that I nailed it, Maestro! And yep - little Alex does borrow a few traits from his godfather whom he admires. But he'll be happier than Alexander was while growing up for sure.
-
You're more than welcome, Chris!
-
He-he, I do need a little break from posting while I focus on the new story...
-
Thank you! They will always be best friends.
-
Glad to hear I managed to create something that went higher on your list That one is also a very personal favorite of mine.
-
Thank you! I will be back!
-
The story is over, but I appreciate the sentiment!
