Krista
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Happy Birthday! I hope you have a great one.
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Lol.. yeah.. got out of control.
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This story is older. So it does have some undesired flaws. Rereading it, I felt that it was pretty hypocritical and selfish for Christian's Mother to drag them to church. Then my Beta, and I tend to agree with him now, that she did so to earn the trust of the people that will be paying her for her services. If she created such a big rift now, in the early stages of her relocation - that she wouldn't have many people coming to her. So she had to sacrifice a little to keep food on the table so to speak. Although, it wasn't ever explained, but I can see where that would be plausible. I'm glad you started this story, I hope you continued reading it. Like I said, it is older.. and I needed a better handle on writing, so there are rough spots.
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Thanks for reading! Lol.. Andy did have quite the second wind it seems.. but I don't know if I have it in me. I do have other things already in motion, but I'm not promising one way or the other.
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Thanks for liking the story and reading! Yeah, I could have went on and on.. I had a lot of ideas swirling around my head that I would have liked covered.. but I decided to make the story a bit more linear and focus on Corey/Clinton a bit more towards the end. I don't make promises though. New rule of mine.
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Lol.. well. I think Corey's Dad would have checked in on them anyway. He didn't want to agree to the plan to begin with, but ended up doing so. Rule No. 1 of sneaking around on parents.. is that you cover your asses.. Andy, Corey, and Keith did, until Andy invited the girls. Girls are trouble. T-r-o-u-b-l-e. So of course they got caught. They'll learn. Thank you for putting up with me, Benji! You were there five years ago on Day 1.. and suffered since. I appreciate you a ton for doing so. I'm glad you liked it and saw the ending finally.
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Thanks for liking the story. I enjoyed writing the characters, later on especially. After introducing Amber, Keith, and Andy into the mix more frequently - I think, really added to my over all enjoyment of the story. I would like to think that Corey has enough support to get him through the inevitable bumps his Senior year will have. I believe he does.
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Lol.. with Andy, Amber, and Keith, you had to know about every damn rule was about to be broken. Consequences for those are what makes it all the more fun at times. I played a few rounds of strip poker... in my day. I must say, I wasn't all that good at it either. And the sleeping bag thing? I didn't think I used Sleeping bags, woops if I did. Like always Benji, thanks for reading!
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Lol.. with Andy, Amber, and Keith, you had to know about every damn rule was about to be broken. Consequences for those are what makes it all the more fun at times. I played a few rounds of strip poker... in my day. I must say, I wasn't all that good at it either. And the sleeping bag thing? I didn't think I used Sleeping bags, woops if I did. Like always Benji, thanks for reading!
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Thanks! Yes, that scene, the build up and to it as Corey worked through his feelings.. was probably the hardest and most rewarding part of this chapter for me to write. Feeling something for someone.. and having the nerve to call it love.. is a difficult distinction to make. Glad he did it, at least. On his terms.
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Aww Benji! I miss seeing you bounce around Chat and the forums! I hope all is wellwith you. I'm glad I can call you a reader, even though I torture you with my delays and procrastinating. Yeah, of course there would have been girls.. teenage rebellion all over the place.
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Lol. Thank you for reading and sticking with the story. And reviewing, always good to read reviews. I'm glad you liked the ending. I hope it was a fun read at the very least.
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Yeah, I wish I had a place like that to retreat to away from people and parents.. although, my mother never would have allowed it at their age.. lol. And I was a good girl. I tend to be sneaky sometimes and post chapters, but yes, the other one and the epilogue are posted. So I hope you enjoy those as well.
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SIS Epilogue Our fun was short lived. After Mom went to work Dad ran into Amber’s Mom at the bank. Being a progressive parent, she let it slip that Amber was up at a cabin staying with some friends. Dad easily linked her to Jenny and Katy. So when Dad’s voice growled on the other side of the door my eyes shot open and I heard Clinton groan when I pulled away from him to sit up in bed. I knew the sound of his pounding fist all too well by now. “Clinton,” I whispered, shaking him. “Hide!
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SIS 37 Looking up at the sky, the blue was beginning to turn to shades of pink and orange as the sun began to set. I was laying on my back, the cold water splashing against my lower back and ass. I was used to it now though. Jenny had dived under the water after she got in past her waist, but now most everyone was enjoying the last hours of summer sun. Andy and Keith had stopped sneaking up on people and dunking them. Even I had been a victim, thankfully the tape and plastic had held. Now w
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You did good Steven.
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Yes, she needs to find someone. Cj turned out to be an ass. Corey turned out to be gay. So, maybe when school starts she'll be able to fine someone for her. And yeah, that many loose ends.. it would be easy for them to be busted.. Especially since Andy is the ring leader.. lol. Thanks for reading Lisa!
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Thanks for liking it! It's sort of a play on a Novel I like.
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Prompt 350: Use the following in a story – farmer, bluebells, a toad, a pond, and a book. Abigail snuck away from her afternoon chores. Clearing the rocks from the plowed field and dumping them into the hollow. Tomorrow the family would be planting the garden and corn to feed them and their livestock through the winter. She had wanted a break, her feet were sore, tired, and dirty. So she found herself at her favorite place on their three hundred acre homestead. A pond shaded on one side
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My Five: The Bible Infernal Devices Trilogy - Cassandra Clare Hunter's Horn - Harriett Simpson Arnowe - Local Author, I read the story every fall. Catcher in the Rye - J.D Salinger Pride and Prejudice - Jane Austen
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Aww. Thanks for reading the story! I've done that more than a few times on here myself. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Fireworks, big boats? Hmm.. lol. Guess you'll have to wait and see. Jenny is trying to find herself.. and I think people are wanting her to be and act a certain way. I guess if I ever done a sequel it would focus on her.. she seems to be the only one with a lot of unfinished business. People just don't find themselves in High School though.. I know I didn't.
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Aww why can't people take her at her word? It's difficult to see someone always defending her friendship with someone. I know when I stayed friends with some of my exes, people would ask if it was innocent or not.. lol. So although there are hints, you have to respect her enough to think that she will behave herself and she isn't stupid, she knows it isn't an offer Corey can make her. Thanks for reading and replying! Keith and Andy are great characters.. I like writing such free and unrestrained characters, it's always a breath of fresh air.
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SIS 36 Looking around my room, I wondered if I packed enough clothes. Going to Andy’s cabin had been a rare thing for me growing up. Mom would convince Dad to let me go only a handful of times and I always went with him, Keith, and his parents. Not having any adult supervision this time sent a small thrill through me. Being only the people I trusted most, made it easy as well. I was only slightly worried about how Keith and Andy would act around Clinton and I for the three days that we were
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