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Happy Birthday Steven!
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Happy Birthday! Have a great one.
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Happy Birthday!
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Hope you have a great Birthday. Even though you are a Cardinals fan.
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A picture of youthful joy, taken in remembrance of his.
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Thanks for enjoying this! I let the characters drive my stories.. only a few times have I looked back and changed entire portions of story based on what a character has said/done. So I'm glad you found the interaction/conversation and the ending cute. I wanted it to be. It probably was a little rushed, but I wanted it to be out there in one piece. Like I told Columbus, I'll have to wait and see what the prompts are like. I probably won't go out of my way to expand on these characters otherwise.
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Thanks for enjoying the story. There are always moments you look back on with regrets or happiness. I wanted the story to be more than just the tag-line for the prompt.. as it should be. I didn't think it would be as long or as large. If I was going to do a part 2, it would have to depend on the later Prompts.. if they're close to where I left off.. I may pull the trigger on a sequel.
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Prompt 352 – Creative Tag – First Line “I can’t believe you asked him that... “I can’t believe you asked him that!” Janelle screeched once the door closed behind us. Every day I walked home from school with her. She lived only a driveway and a fence away. I had been mean to her when we were little until I figured out that girls could get me out of trouble better than myself. They just seemed to believe her side of the story better than mine. As we grew older, she remained my best fr
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Happy Birthday! I hope you have a great one.
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Lol.. yeah.. got out of control.
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This story is older. So it does have some undesired flaws. Rereading it, I felt that it was pretty hypocritical and selfish for Christian's Mother to drag them to church. Then my Beta, and I tend to agree with him now, that she did so to earn the trust of the people that will be paying her for her services. If she created such a big rift now, in the early stages of her relocation - that she wouldn't have many people coming to her. So she had to sacrifice a little to keep food on the table so to speak. Although, it wasn't ever explained, but I can see where that would be plausible. I'm glad you started this story, I hope you continued reading it. Like I said, it is older.. and I needed a better handle on writing, so there are rough spots.
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Thanks for reading! Lol.. Andy did have quite the second wind it seems.. but I don't know if I have it in me. I do have other things already in motion, but I'm not promising one way or the other.
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Thanks for liking the story and reading! Yeah, I could have went on and on.. I had a lot of ideas swirling around my head that I would have liked covered.. but I decided to make the story a bit more linear and focus on Corey/Clinton a bit more towards the end. I don't make promises though. New rule of mine.
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Lol.. well. I think Corey's Dad would have checked in on them anyway. He didn't want to agree to the plan to begin with, but ended up doing so. Rule No. 1 of sneaking around on parents.. is that you cover your asses.. Andy, Corey, and Keith did, until Andy invited the girls. Girls are trouble. T-r-o-u-b-l-e. So of course they got caught. They'll learn. Thank you for putting up with me, Benji! You were there five years ago on Day 1.. and suffered since. I appreciate you a ton for doing so. I'm glad you liked it and saw the ending finally.
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Thanks for liking the story. I enjoyed writing the characters, later on especially. After introducing Amber, Keith, and Andy into the mix more frequently - I think, really added to my over all enjoyment of the story. I would like to think that Corey has enough support to get him through the inevitable bumps his Senior year will have. I believe he does.
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Lol.. with Andy, Amber, and Keith, you had to know about every damn rule was about to be broken. Consequences for those are what makes it all the more fun at times. I played a few rounds of strip poker... in my day. I must say, I wasn't all that good at it either. And the sleeping bag thing? I didn't think I used Sleeping bags, woops if I did. Like always Benji, thanks for reading!
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Lol.. with Andy, Amber, and Keith, you had to know about every damn rule was about to be broken. Consequences for those are what makes it all the more fun at times. I played a few rounds of strip poker... in my day. I must say, I wasn't all that good at it either. And the sleeping bag thing? I didn't think I used Sleeping bags, woops if I did. Like always Benji, thanks for reading!
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Thanks! Yes, that scene, the build up and to it as Corey worked through his feelings.. was probably the hardest and most rewarding part of this chapter for me to write. Feeling something for someone.. and having the nerve to call it love.. is a difficult distinction to make. Glad he did it, at least. On his terms.
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Aww Benji! I miss seeing you bounce around Chat and the forums! I hope all is wellwith you. I'm glad I can call you a reader, even though I torture you with my delays and procrastinating. Yeah, of course there would have been girls.. teenage rebellion all over the place.
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Lol. Thank you for reading and sticking with the story. And reviewing, always good to read reviews. I'm glad you liked the ending. I hope it was a fun read at the very least.
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Yeah, I wish I had a place like that to retreat to away from people and parents.. although, my mother never would have allowed it at their age.. lol. And I was a good girl. I tend to be sneaky sometimes and post chapters, but yes, the other one and the epilogue are posted. So I hope you enjoy those as well.
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SIS Epilogue Our fun was short lived. After Mom went to work Dad ran into Amber’s Mom at the bank. Being a progressive parent, she let it slip that Amber was up at a cabin staying with some friends. Dad easily linked her to Jenny and Katy. So when Dad’s voice growled on the other side of the door my eyes shot open and I heard Clinton groan when I pulled away from him to sit up in bed. I knew the sound of his pounding fist all too well by now. “Clinton,” I whispered, shaking him. “Hide!
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SIS 37 Looking up at the sky, the blue was beginning to turn to shades of pink and orange as the sun began to set. I was laying on my back, the cold water splashing against my lower back and ass. I was used to it now though. Jenny had dived under the water after she got in past her waist, but now most everyone was enjoying the last hours of summer sun. Andy and Keith had stopped sneaking up on people and dunking them. Even I had been a victim, thankfully the tape and plastic had held. Now w
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You did good Steven.
