Krista

Glad you're back my dear.

This story is very hit and miss for me. I like some of the characters. My writing is very raw and unclean throughout this entire piece and the ending is vague. It is also very old, being my very first "fun" writing piece I ever attempted in High School dealing with this subject matter. Honestly, the only thing it really and truly showcases is my growth from SU to SIS, but even then - my best writing is probably not even coming yet. I've learned a lot since then. So hopefully you stick with me and read some of my better written stories like Shadows and Roommates.

Aww Steve Steven, I loves you.

Thank you for reviewing all those chapters and enjoying the story as a whole.

Nope.. poor Will is shell shocked most of the story.. lol

Yeah. The parents are eccentric and Brett and Kat are a bit wild too.. Will seems to be the only passive one. It's supposed to be a.. coming out comedy I think. It's been a bit since I read over it.

Wellll Corey is determined, but doesn't have a plan right at this moment. And you're not wrong, both Corey and Clinton have been pretty scared/angst-y over the last few chapters. We'll see if Clinton is worth it and all that good stuff in the next chapter or so...

Yep. Gave y'all two chapters. Corey is just tired, like you said. He wants to know where it all leads. He isn't thinking logically, he's thinking from his heart. He's given up a lot...

Lol.. yeah Jenny got a good hit in. And nooo.. Cj isn't named from our resident cliffhanging goat. Although that scene was intentionally CJ, but that's the only similarity. The goat, although evil with cliffhangers, isn't mean spirited like this story.

Thank you for leaving a review! Yes, they are very comfortable physically with one another... you'll see what I may be hinting at if you continue reading.

Lol. I don't know if Corey's best friends have it in them to take on Big bag Coach Lee Wells. Thanks for reading. I'm halfway through Chapter 29. Might finish it tonight. Right at this very second Corey is pretty determined to follow through, we'll see if that lasts.

Oh we have a determined Corey now, so. We'll see what sort of things he does next.

SIS 28 Waking up I looked down to see Trouble prancing around the bottom of the bed looking over the edge. Groaning, I sat up and rubbed the tiredness of my eyes. Seeing me awake she let out a bark, but kept pacing the edge of the bed. Standing I slid into a pair of shorts and scooped her into my arms and walked her out of the bedroom and down the narrow hallway to the front door. I glanced over at the table to see Mom sipping a cup of coffee. She gave me a smile as I opened the door and wa

Lol. You riled up seems exciting, glad I achieved it. The "on your period" is a pet peeve of mine. But I'm finding men and women both say it.. it is actually rare to hear the, 'having my period' comment. Although in the south it's just not discussed a whole lot unless some guy finds their woman bitchy.. lol. Clinton and Corey may not work out.. at this point there's not a lot of reason for it. Clinton doesn't deserve Corey.. a lot of things have to be done.. yes. I see Greg two ways.. apologetic and respectful and manipulative. A Greg that would allow Corey to seduce him, may actually be a nice change, at least he had the balls to come back and try to win back the person he wants.. And yes, Jenny should still go to the police, Cj pissing her off, she may still yet. She has ammo.. eight or nine little yipping bullets.. lol. Well until 'Friday.'

I never could get into soccer. It just seems too anti-climactic most of the time. They get all the way down towards the opponent's goal and one good kick sends the ball all the way back. Or they get an off-sides call. Although the shots on goal can be entertaining... Baseball is just as stagnant at times and anti-climactic, but I do watch baseball. Maybe it's just what I grew up being a part of. Soccer is just now being coached in our grade schools where I grew up for shits and giggles.. they hardly ever have a team large enough to fill all the required positions. It's just not here and likely never will be and that's a shame. Probably why I'm not a fan of hockey either - there's no coverage or nothing here. Although I think there is a minor-league hockey team in Kentucky - possibly? Baseball is the only professional sport I watch. I dislike the NBA and the NFL.

Lol. Well Greg is banking on Clinton royally messing things up, so he's just biding his time. The real question is, should he have taken the risk anyway? As for Clinton and Corey both, something needs to happen and it's not going to be easy for either of them.. can't be at this point.

Yeah, I agree, Greg and Corey may be too different to be a lasting couple.. but you have to wonder at this point if Clinton and Corey aren't too different either... I see Clinton denying it where Corey hasn't.. no one has asked him about being gay apart from Jenny.. and he came out to her. But, Clinton has shown himself a coward.. and Corey has shown himself a coward as well.. I knew that people may fall out of respect for both characters a little, but I think I overkilled it a little bit. We'll see if they finally stop.

Aww. I see where it is difficult to feel sorry for Clinton when he allows Cj to bash Corey the way that he does. Maybe he'll redeem himself.. and maybe not. Life is full of these chances and a lot of the time we don't take them. But it would be nice to see Clinton do it. As for Corey, he's never really been the violent type, but maybe... MAYBE.

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SIS 27 The sun was just beginning to set when I made my way out of town, casting shadows and an orange glow on everything. I almost turned around every chance I got. I didn’t want to see Clinton, not really. I had to know if I had reasons to doubt him though. All those things he did I’d forgiven him for, but should I have? He had pushed me into the river and broke my arm. He had talked badly about me and laughed along with Cj’s jabs. He never defended me. With all that how could he have mad

Welcome back Mr. Goat.

Sorry Louis..

Aww. I'm sorry.. If it wasn't an Anthology - it probably would have had a happier ending, or not.. but at least you liked the story, not all of them can be happy.

Aww Wow Louis. I had no idea you were doing a review. A very nice surprise. I enjoyed writing Roommates, I needed something to refresh me as far as writing was concerned so I started this story. Your review brought out depth in the characters that I probably overlooked as the author. I'll have to read it again for sure.

Yayyy!! Congratulations Graeme!