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  1. Krista

    Chapter 30

    Is it? Poor dears. Thanks for reading Menace! Only the Epilogue left.
  2. Krista

    Chapter 30

    Aww, I think Jenny will be ok on her own for a little while. She's found out that Cj is an ass and Corey's friends really aren't her type either.. lol. So she'll probably have a nice young man when school starts, but as far as now, no. And I touch on some of your questions with the Epilogue. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  3. Krista

    Chapter 30

    Thanks for reviewing like always Benji. Yeah I couldn't say much in my comments to you last review, because you seemed have guessed everything.. lmao. What I have left on the table with the epilogue will help you understand the rest of your questions.
  4. Aww, sad. RIP.
  5. SIS 30 “Your carport door was open,” Cj said, still looking between the two of us. “Did you hear me, what the fuck is going on?” “Nothing,” Clinton said as we stood in his bedroom. I was standing just in front of him. Cj hadn’t entered the bedroom, but the surprised look he first gave us was quickly turning into a disgusted scowl. “I knew it,” Cj hissed, stepping into the room. “So you’re both faggots?” “Shut up Cj,” I said when I saw Clinton shy away. “I always knew you
  6. I'll have a talk with Steven (Wildone) and then I can make my picks err...
  7. Krista

    Chapter 29

    Lol. Yeah, it could definitely go either way. Not trying to be evil, since I already know how it went, with the chapter being finished and ready for editing.. lol. Your scenario would totally suck. Definitely a fall out.
  8. Krista

    Chapter 29

    Lol. Hi Benji. I'm nearly finished with Chapter 30, so we shall see what about your predictions. I would like to think I will have this story nicely wrapped up and resolved soon. But yes, the bottom sort of fell out there towards the end, now you just have to wait and see how everyone reacts.
  9. Krista

    Chapter 29

    You are welcome. I'm glad you liked Trouble. The Epilogue will feature her a bit. And yes, cliffhanger.. ouch. I'm typically not that evil, but I needed something to make Chapter 30 more anticipated. lol. Very glad you liked my story.
  10. James, wow. Makes Monopoly look god awful in comparison. I do console, I have no desire to play games on anything else. Although, I don't play many or all that often at all. I will randomly sit down and start playing. My younger brother got me into it and after kicking his ass at Madden a few times (I mean really, all I had to do is pick a certain defense and on offense, run the ball) gave him fits. So when a game someone is playing looks interesting, I'll try it out. There are a few that I will go out and buy for myself though or the husband or brother so I can sneak and borrow it for a few days.. lol.
  11. You most certainly do not. You support the Reds! Don't let DDK corrupt you, there are just some things you cannot come back from and being a Cardinals fan is one of them. Dirty Cardinals.
  12. Mann, do not tell me you troll perfectly innocent college athletics websites for your.. motivations. tsk tsk tsk. Honestly though, the grappling and all that, it just isn't sexy to me. They may grab one another in odd places, but they get all funked over and such and I just don't see it. The whole thing is lost on me apart from it being probably the most physical contact sport there is.
  13. Krista

    Chapter 29

    Lol. Yes, why do they never lock the door? I'm sorry about the cliffhanger as well. There was just so much to cover and well really, a nice rounded story with 30 chapters looks better than '29.' You will - of course - how Clinton responds to being caught, it can definitely go two ways. I'll try not to be too evil on everyone, but I am not promising too much at this point. I will tell you though, a crap ton happens in the next chapter. I just hope y'all like how I end the story.
  14. Krista

    Chapter 29

    Lol. Aww. Yes the poor guys slipped up, I guess. Now they have to try and stem the tide a little.. but can the force of Cj be stopped? I'm nearly finished with Ch. 30, so maybe it won't be so long.
  15. SIS 29 After buying a bottle of water and a small milkshake I sat down and watched Andy and Keith fight over french fries as they ate. Rolling my eyes I poured some of the water into Trouble’s bowl and held her in my lap, not having her leash and being too close to the road had me worried that she’d get into trouble. The heat of the day was suffocating, even under the shade of the awning over the picnic table. Trouble’s fur was warm to the touch and she was panting, but the cold water in th
  16. Krista

    Left Behind

    Aww, thanks for liking the story. I don't know about a second part for an Anthology, I don't like time constraints.. lol. I have 40k part 1 to something I started for a recent Anthology. So maybe when I reread it and like the characters, I might possibly pick them.. no promises though.
  17. Krista

    Left Behind

    I'm open to suggestions for my after AYC2 project, so I might reread the story and see. I think I remember liking the 4 characters.
  18. Congrats.
  19. Krista

    Chapter 27

    Yeah, Greg isn't a snake in the grass. People seem to dislike him because they see him as, "in the way" or something like that. The "you don't get a second chance.." isn't fair, since Clinton has been given tons of chances.. if I was to ever rewrite this, Greg would have stayed put and it would have been a true love triangle, but eh.
  20. Kisses and hugs to Steve Steven (wildone) and Aj for putting up with me and making my writing and story-telling tons better and faster.
  21. Glad you're back my dear.
  22. This story is very hit and miss for me. I like some of the characters. My writing is very raw and unclean throughout this entire piece and the ending is vague. It is also very old, being my very first "fun" writing piece I ever attempted in High School dealing with this subject matter. Honestly, the only thing it really and truly showcases is my growth from SU to SIS, but even then - my best writing is probably not even coming yet. I've learned a lot since then. So hopefully you stick with me and read some of my better written stories like Shadows and Roommates.
  23. Krista

    Losing my fun Aunt

    Aww Steve Steven, I loves you.
  24. Krista

    Chapter 12

    Thank you for reviewing all those chapters and enjoying the story as a whole.
  25. Krista

    Chapter 7

    Nope.. poor Will is shell shocked most of the story.. lol
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