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Hi @Mrsgnomie must be a seasonal thing, lol. Needed a good laugh, cry and tons of smiles, an amazing story, love it, I hope we get to see some of your writing again soon- being totally selfish here, but. anyways. Thank you again for sharing Nash, Penn and the rest of the village with us, hands down my favourite read.

And back again for another read, needed something that took me away, made me laugh, cry, smile, curse and revel in utter happiness, thank you. (BTW, Ryan Knott, is the unsung hero, he never wavered in helping his little brother get what his heart desired, love you too Ry.)

A very sweet story, lifelong friends ….. awesome

This is my absolute favourite story here, I’ve read it a number of times and love it more each time if that is possible. Your writing is amazing, I hope you will write again soon. again from the bottom of my heart, thank you for sharing Nash and Penn with us, loved it.

What starts out as an idilc life for our characters spins around, from moments of utter d’impair, laughter, loss and longing, the authors skill, story telling are on full display. In my top 3 stories across the site, 10/10

I’ve read a number of stories by MrsGnomie, this by far is a stand out for me. Having read and re-read it a number of times, it just gets better. If you enjoy reading where , the main characters struggle and are relatable in many ways strap yourself self in you’re gonna love this. Each chapter left me wanting more, I can’t wait for the next adventure the author shares with us. Enjoy !

Thank you … so much, I’m deeply humbled by you @mfa607and the rest of the guys who’ve stuck with me and commented, inspired me and supported too, thank you for the bottom of my heart. I hope y’all will enjoy the epilogue, it was a lot of fun to write for y’all.

Thanks Mike, for your feedback and kind words too… I hope y’all will enjoy the epilogue, again thank you so much .

Thanks James, I was in some ways struggling to let them go, it’s been such fun to write and interact with y’all to. I’m hoping y’all will enjoy the epilogue , and look forward to your comments , thanks again,

Thank you for your kind words and also following the story along, I’ve really enjoyed the feedback from you and everyone, thank you so much.

Heading out of our room - cleaned up, but in the same clothes - we headed out the back door a few seconds apart. Lucas turned around and looked between us both, pointing. "Wow don't y’all look freshly fucked." Hailey's head almost snapped off sideways as she hit him in the arm. “Lucas, your mouth.” Her eyes were about to sprout lasers or something and burn clean through him. He jumped to his feet. “And that’s my signal to get us all some drinks before I die! This is all your fault, J

Wow…. What a great story, after reading the list I couldn’t put this down. Thank you loved it

Wow, what a chapter. On so many levels I think our boy (Corbin) has grown a little and learned a lot. And Mike…. I’ve always been on team Mike, except when I was a short term defect to team Nick. Pete’s a good guy, but Mike is where it’s at. Thanks for an brilliant story, Loki g forward to the next.

I love Mike and Corbin toghther, he (Mike) is amazing on so many levels , great character development

I’ve enjoyed this story, at times it’s felt like watching a train crash in that you can’t tear your eyes away from it, I’m not sure though on how I am with what he did to Nick Persons, moreover I’m still a little upside down over Mike Vmeee too, the guy said he’d try with Corbin, like mate, what do you want… Pete is an ass, sometimes the good guys have to win, because we don’t often, the assholes do. I hope as I read on Corbin has the biggest come to the mountain moment… before it’s too late.

Hi @Job thanks for your kind words, no still more to come. I’ve been working away on another chapter , so hold in there … again thanks so much .

Hey no not at all, the last few chapters subtly jumps forward in time, it was something I was trying out. Hope that helps tho, hope you’re enjoying the story, thanks for messaging too. 😊

I truly laughed, cried, held my breath, rocked back and forth a few times also, but overall happiness… all the way through this chapter, thank you ! For mine, this screen is the other side of that mirror, what I see, what we see, is beautiful, smart , loved and loving, intelligent and above all gifted… The symbolism of the “C” is not lost on me/us and thank you for sharing this incredible story with us, it is an A+ Honestly all your works are an A+ and we are privileged that you share yourself/it with us, thank you from the bottom of my heart, thank you. To quote an amazing author , “I...I won. I beat him. His voice is still in the back of my mind but...I figured out his trick now. I'm worthy. I'm sane. And I am loved. So loved. I never thought I'd be standing here...looking at my own reflection...and be satisfied with what I saw looking back at me. It's...beautiful. Dear God...it's so” because you won!

Absolutely loved this chapter… who am I kidding, I’ve loved the entire story. I sat reading this chapter, smiling as we all watched Zach make - take , some enormous steps on so many levels, wow…. Just wow. Keep the momentum going Zack and Brodie, we’re all here cheering you on, you’re such a brave, sweet boy…

I finished this chapter 40minutes ago, and sat there staring across the room. I understand Kevin so much more now, I so want him, his life to turn so he doesn’t have to run from it, but toward it. I always wanted him and Becker to get back together when / if Kevin returns stateside and to Toluene but I just don’t see Becker making that enormous leap that he’d need too, sadly. Overall Kevin deserves happiness and as we read on let’s hope it finds him. I guess I still have questions about Kevin, Matt etc and closure between them, if you find the inspiration to write about that would love to read it, but happy with where you’ve bought Kevin too now. thanks for writing such an amazing story, hopefully we will be reading another chapter soon, again thanks so much .

The soft warm morning sun showered us in its glow, making bed so damn comfortable, enveloped in golden goodness of the morning sunshine coupled with an occasional gentle warm breeze floating in made for a lovely morning to lay with this, my sexy guy. I lazily ran my finger along his outstretched arm draped across my chest, as he often does, occasionally - subconsciously - Ben’s finger would rub my nipple. It was-kinda, well, very cute – ok, a bit of a turn on too. All the while his sleepy

It fits perfectly, after reading your note about the song, I listened to it for the first time in a while…. OMG yes it does, and that caused me to re-read the last 6 chapters, I’ve had the immense pleasure of reading nearly all of your stories, - and by the way…. You’re amazing. - but for some reason this one just hit the spot for me, although still love Jett and April. Again thank you for sharing you’re amazing skill with us, thank you .

Fantastic loved the style also, only at the end did I fully understand the connection, awesome

With a contented sigh…. Smile, we say good bye to Carter, Aron , And their sweet kids. Thank you for giving them such a beautiful ending… FTBOMH

I have absolutely loved this story, I did struggle a little at the start for no real reason, I’m just needed to get the vibe I guess . But loved it, loved Carter’s quirkiness , Arons straight down the line no b-s approach, but moreover how they truly love each other, like deeply and totally , just beautiful really. I was hand on mouth when Carter took the mint, I was hoping that Mark wasn’t going to wipe away what they now had. Thank you he didn’t, I did also note that Carter’s inner voice (brain) was silent after the mint, maybe now he will talk to Aron, rather than himself more when conflicted, or struggling. Thanks again absolutely loved it, damn you’re an awesome author …. 100/10