You absolutely NAILED it.
It was worth waiting the extra day for you to polish it up.
You wanted to portray emotion? You did that perfectly.
You wanted to describe the indescribable? Not many authors can do that, but you grabbed that keyboard and ran with it. Without a shadow of a doubt you brought feelings to this chapter with perfection.
Congratulations. It's the best chapter and also one of the best I've ever read.
Now.... about that epilogue.
Tomorrow, right? 😉
I liked this chapter because it demonstrated how a plan can come together cohesively. Atticus and John know exactly what needs to be done and they do it.
Also... just out of curiosity. Do none of these men know what a condom is? I mean... if you know there's a super worm out there that's sexually transmitted wouldn't you insist on using them even if your cairnmates are screened? Or can the worm burrow through latex?
I'll drop the next one either Friday or Saturday.
My money is on Thursday. 😆
But nature is not so easily leashed.
Neither is the desire to post another chapter lol.
This is a good one. It emphasizes the human need to connect with others.
And the plot thickens. Mwahaha.
On your mark.
Get set.
GO!!!
Off to another great start Mr. Gray.
Gotta love it when those ideas grab hold tighter than a pit bull on a raw steak. All you can do is say to hell with work and write!
Creepy worms? Eh, I guess we're gonna ride this coaster and see how many loops you bring us through.
I'm with tim... you've got a winner here!
I've never denied reverting to a 13 or old when circumstance call for it. Hot shirtless men qualify.
As for the drool... reserved for said hot shirtless men... and donuts.
As observed by the expert in drool.
Jeeezus... just no.
For the 100th time.... SHE'S NOT MY CAT!!
I merely house the beast.
Besides... mustard? 🤮
Coffee.... ummmm...IV infusion please.
Eggs gotta have a runny yolk... over medium.