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Great story! Short and Sweet in perfect proportions. I would have loved to see what happens as this relationship progresses, i was fully expecting the dryad to offer some kind of option for our visitor to stay with him forever to get away from his less than ideal home life. I was sure these headaches were the result of some kind of Druidic powers that had once been dormant were now starting to manifest due to his age.
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I loved this story and the world you've created around your characters was fabulous. A story of love blossoming in the most unlikely of circumstances and the incredible sacrifice that follows. I would love to see what drake and alec are up to a few years down the road and how they're getting along together.
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Great story! I loved the characters and the build up, the ending was beautiful. I just wish seeon's poor sisters could have been avenged and that despicable excuse for a priest could have been crucified slowly with dull rusty spikes. I personally would have liked to see some more growth from seeon before the closing. Such as embracing his manhood again, a freaking haircut, maybe taking up combat and self defense training, a physique update with some new muscles, things like that. Thinking seeon will never fully recover from his horrible childhood makes me sad. Anywho, i really enjoyed the story and I'm happy i was able to read it 👍
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I absolutely love age regression stories, where people get second chances to do what they never could the first time around. I gotta say younger scott definitely got my motor running 🥵😅🙈 Excellent job i had a great time following along, although at times i wanted to smack scott cause he can be a bit of a blockhead 😂
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Great story, lots of crossing over and intersecting, it was fun. Unfortunately there's lots of stuff going on behind the scenes that's prudent to the story's plot line that's getting left out i think. Lots of povs had me guessing without naming them person at the beginning of the chapter though. I liked the ending, it really would have sucked for rayne to die after finally reuniting with matt, or if matt died, or even if they both did. Seth was a good father to rayne in the end and sacrificed ever moving on ao that rayne would live, even though she'd never remember him. The fact that he was there on her wedding day was beautiful.
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What a great story! Beautiful characters and i instantly thought of "The Witcher" series! There's enough similarities to grab your attention but not so much that it's a remake of something else. A great fantasy tale involving adventure, love, heartache and hardships, and magic. I could not put this down once i started reading it and i would love to see what keter and stravor are up to in a few years.
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Loved the concept as I'm a huge fan of worlds like this, writing was good but i feel like the story was dreadfully short and details about the characters were sorely lacking. The sequel to this story kind of stopped dead after two chapters and hasn't been touched since. I would personally love to see more adventures involving Hope and Elliun and to see their relationship flourish and develop.
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Talk about a rollercoaster! So many twists and turns and bumps along the way. Really an excellent job writing and really ties all three books together nicely. Lots of pain and suffering here, especially for a certain someone. The ending to the story was really beautiful, i can think of several authors who would have done a full 180 and i never like endings like that. I loved following along with these amazing characters through their journey and i can't wait to see more of your work!
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Such a beautiful story of love and hope, overcoming adversity and breaking down barriers. There is so much heartache and pain throughout this installment but the power of love manages to outshine it all.
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Absolutely amazing start to a thrilling trilogy! I absolutely love the sanctuary and all the creatures there 😊 luno is so cute and adorable i want to hug the stuffing out of him! Tobias is gruff and mean on the outside but on the inside i think he just wants to feel loved for once in his long lonely existence.
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Awwwww Rafe and Andre sitting in a tree....lol looks like Rafe may be letting his feelings for the little omè shine through a little. They're so cute
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Awesome! I'm ashamed to say i kinda forgot about young Bernie 🙈 I had assumed your next book was going to be either about Mathias, Ezekiel, or possibly chronicling the lives of the various ancients so we can find out where they're all hiding and what kind of lives they lead in their younger years before the great disappearing. Great work as always, you're one of my favourite authors!
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The Netflix series i just started watching has a guardian of hell called squatterbloat 😂 bazzelthorpe made me think of him lol same general description too lol
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I think we just found the key to fulfilling Mira's wish for having a family 😱 Ellia and Mira are two halves of the same soul, I can't see something NOT happening between them and Shay. I'd give it a chapter or two before she moves into their room.
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I wanna see andre's reading 👀 i bet it's stupid high, for no other reason than just because 😂 Andre is so freaking cute, his and rafe's puppy love (hehe see what i did there) is slowly developing into something a little extra and more meaningful. Frodd is cool, i think rafe made his first new friend outside of the guys. Can't wait to see what's next.
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I like it so far, i like several of your stories, glad to see you back at it.
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When i think about mekaias dancing I can't help but picture a shirtless and sweaty neko doing Zumba 😂🙈🥵🤤
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I really wish rafe had of put a condition on andre joining, like he doesn't have to fight but has to do all the training and participate in sparring while he's not being the water boy/cheerleader. I wanna see andre kick some booty
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1. I'd suggest an editor, not a ding at you but i know first hand what it's like in a whirlwind of writing trying to get everything down that's flowing through your head, lots of mistakes can be left behind if you're not careful. 2. MOREEEE!!!!
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A Different World: Part 1 - The Siege of Penthorpe Keep
Frost reviewed ValentineDavis21's story in Fiction
I loved skold in your first telling of his story, I'm so glad you went back in time to give us more insight into this poor tortured and terrifying soul. I'm so drawn to him i can't explain it, i want to know everything about the guy and what makes him tick. I'd love to see more of him in the future -
I loved this short little story, it was a rush from start to finish with lots of sweet tender moments scattered throughout. I love friggy and jewl, i know you don't normally dip into this genre but i have to say you knocked it outta the park. I would love to see more of them but you tied up all the loose ends nicely without leaving the readers pulling their hair out and grasping at straws wondering what happens next. A thrilling yet heart warming fantasy tale chalk full of warm fuzzies.
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The fact that jonas literally teleported to his mother's grave and back and summoned pudding from an empty bowl but it's the talking sword that cracks him is freaking hilarious 🤣🤣🤣
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I love the progress Alec and Finn are making and how they're seemingly unconsciously cementing their rekindled romance without even trying. Also.....Herky! 😍
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I'm cheering for Andre! I really hope he takes some valuable skills from this class and learns how to defend himself, I'm surprised rafe has any hair left lol
