Gary L
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Max’s behaviour is a perfect example of righteous anger …….
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And in large part due to the amazing author, no? Ok this chp actually did make my eyes glisten, just a little of course…
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I agree with other comments here, and in your other stories about the authenticity of language and scenes. I felt as if I were in the MRI (the hospital not a scan machine!) with all its great points and systemic weaknesses. Reading this story at Christmas on a visit to Birmingham has got me thinking a lot. Thank you and may your stories reach more people in 2024. un abrazo 🤗
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100%. In agreement. Can’t wait to see what happens in London
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Totally agree. 2023 has been a good year for @chris191070 well done!
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The county where I was born!
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Totally agree!! happy Christmas 🎅
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Happy Christmas! You have spoilt us rotten over the last few months. As my old tutor once told me, “Celebrate well, but wisely!” 🍷
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Another good installment. Deidre’s character is fleshing out a bit more which adds some subtlety. Brian and Gordon need to chill out a bit. They are providing what any emotionally messed about teenager needs: security and certainty of being loved. At the same time they are on a huge learning curve themselves. Life serving the emir seems a long time ago. thanks, Robert and wishing you a peaceful (but creative!!!) holiday. As for me B97 here I come!
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A great summary and observation. Well said. And now we wait……….
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Never have I ever been to an IKEA store…..
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A generous, beefy chapter! V enjoyable, Robert. Thank you 🙏
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God, this would have been such a story! The glimpses, echoes, possibilities…… but we have much to treasure from the Master of the Harley D.. 🤗
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But remember the poor slave girl is being tortured whilst the fat guy sings ….. oh and Mimi dies…..
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“It was an old place, recently done up in a modern style that aimed to emulate what might have once been here.” The prose is a sheer delight to read showing off the wealth of language we have. Bravo!
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It’s hard to imagine that the author could follow up “Good guys don’t date bad boys” with such originality at the same time as connecting with the first. But she does it in spades. Whilst full of comedy and student dramas, the story also explores the emotional development of the protagonists. easily a 5 ***** read. ps. It’s also “muy picante” 🌶️ hee
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Always! 🤗
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But he isn’t? If he were…..
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Eating ice cream as I reached the end of the installment! Robert, this is such an enjoyable story. It makes me miss the uk and then I look out of the open windows with 30° on our little balcony …….. great work, and thank you 🙏
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Beautifully put!
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Thank you Mark.. a great start to the day 🤩 just a small cliffhanger this morning…….
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Excellent! You have impatient followers - it’s the price of your talent, Lee, night night from Spain x
