Gary L
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An interesting chp in two parts, very different but v enjoyable. Awaiting the swimming party 😃
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When I was a headmaster in Elche, I once got a new student thanks to the cleaners - “ this is the cleanest school we have visited, our children are coming here.” I totally agree with you, everyone is a player in the success of an enterprise.
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We can forgive you…… if we try hard! Have a good week, gary x
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They are back together. Let’s see if Winkler’s prediction in an earlier book is correct.So far so good….😊 Thank you Mark
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Like many of us!!
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Define “fun”! Not sure Jamie will be having much. Another v good chp.
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This is a very detailed reflection on what is promising to be a popular story. And is written with honesty. As one quoted above, I too was thrown by the paranormal aspect, although it is there from the start in the summary. Finally, I decided to stay and have enjoyed so much about this story that I’m with it until the end, but can certainly understand that it’s not for everyone. regards
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A spot-on analysis.
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Another ace chp. The skill with which action and emotions are blended into a coherent whole is first class. I may not be so into “special powers” as others, but I am certainly into special writing. Another great Saturday morning read thanks to the unstoppable @lawfulneutralmage. Greetings from Valencia in Fallas!
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Yes, @lawfulneutralmage is the new @Mrsgnomie… as it were! ( for his ability to get readers involved and invested)
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Hi, I have just reread this story and if I could I would change my review substantially. I now do “get it” and it deserves more stars. ⭐️
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Not sure what I can add to the fulsome, and deserved, praise given above but adding a click doesn’t seem to justice. So, many thanks, indeed for another great story which is getting ever deeper. ps, any news on the famous “balcony garden”, likely?
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Another death-packed chapter. Blink and another one is down. I look forward to how this will be resolved. It’s really good, Chris.
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Many apologies to @Sherye Story Reader for the offense caused by my ironical, but to her, mystifying, comment. I had confused her with a very sharp and excellent beta reader and entered in the type of comments familiar to those who have read those of @Mrsgnomieand @kbois and their readers. I can’t delete the comment but I certainly apologize for the error.
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Chris, many congratulations on your transformation into a v popular and prolific author. I’m so jealous! Well done 👍
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Me too. Though short, Robert’s chps punch above their length, as it were. Great stuff continues to be delivered to us.
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If you like murder mysteries then this is for you!
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I just get the feeling she is someone to fear……
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I suspect that @Sherye Story Reader is a demanding ….😰
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I totally agree. Not only for the great storytelling, which Mark also shows in the CAP series, but for the incidental historical details and research. This is a series which just gets better and better.
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Managed to post this before the ship is out of range of cell service !!!!!! thank you Mark for the perfectly timed update. As Tina says, “Simply the best, …..”
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So, there is a reward for lying in bed on a Sunday morning having woken, as usually during the week at 05.30. THANK YOU! Glad the story premise is out and coherent. Intriguing stuff, @lawfulneutralmage!
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Ummmm. He will definitely have an opinion!!
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I looked this am for same reasons…. Even though I think I have ever agreed with him once, his comments are sharp!
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A Lifechanging Encounter
Gary L commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in A Lifechanging Encounter
You are cleverer than me. I should have looked!- 39 comments
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