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As Thema Houston sings, "Don't Leave Me This Way." What a cliffhanger.

More, please.

Mfa607, I love these guys, also. They are way cool. Thanks for being a faithful reader. Mac

Tonyr, Thanks for the compliment. Mac

Brilliant! Thank you.

I am loving this story. Great storyline and writing.

I am crying in both pain and joy. Thank you for a beautiful chapter. Mac

Looking forward to another chapter.

Storm clouds on the horizon for sure.

Wayne, I thought that was a new scene. Thanks for adding that scene because it does help build the inter-relatedness of the characters. Small town life....what can I say....LOL. I hope you will provide the readers of this site your stories about Camp Refuge. I am enjoying your newest story on storylover. Mac

Each time I read this story (I think this is time 6), I get caught up in the dramatics as if it was the first time I had read about Corbin and Paul. You have excellent story telling skills. I am eagerly waiting to read the next chapter. I think a sequel would be GREAT.

Beautiful, bittersweet story.

What a wonderful story. I am glad that I stumbled upon it. As a semi-invalid after a broken back it gives me hope. I have to use a cane to walk. Beautiful writing, believable characters and great story telling. I look forward to more.

Great chapter. Fine writing that kept the tension real and palpable. Then the hot shower scene was the perfect ending. Thanks for giving us another chapter of Brady and Ember.

Great story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.