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I know he feels sorry that Nathan is being left out of the trip but honestly I think he should have told him Daniel was going along. Daniel is his cousin/future brother and if he was honest to Nathan about inviting him along because they still don’t really know each other that well he’d understand plus he requested his brother be allowed to tag along when he wasn’t initially invited so Nathan would understand that it would be weird to request he get to come to as he isn’t Rory’s friend. There’s also the fact Nathan might like to know that Robbie won’t be spending a lot of alone time with Rory or as alone as they could be with his dad around as having Daniel around helps insure that on the off chance Rory is gay that Robbie won’t have a chance to give into temptation.
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Chapter 37 Tossing and Turning
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 37 Tossing and Turning
Wow Robbie is so naive when he says he’s sure Fran knows it’s over because I’m really sure she doesn’t. He needs to break up with her as whether she realizes it’s because he’s gay or whether she thinks it’s over a girl shouldn’t matter as long as it’s over as she can believe what she wants. Rory gave off some vibes he might be gay but Robbie doesn’t have the best sense when it comes to identifying other closeted gay guys so he could be straight. Still, I hope if he is gay that Robbie doesn’t end up having sex with him as he should be able to hold onto his hormones long enough to finally start dating Nathan not that he seems to be able to control himself around Fran so...I’m not optimistic about his self control with a cute boy like Rory if he is gay. I also hope that Nathan doesn’t get jealous when he finds out about the trip though hopefully he won’t have anything to get jealous about. -
I’m confused as I expected Robbie to be single and available to date Nathan if in secret yet it sounds like he’s still dating Fran after coming out to her. Also while I know he’s a horny teenager he planned to come out to her and I thought end things yet sat their letting her give him a blowjob after telling her he was gay. I don’t think Fran believes he’s gay especially considering all the sex they had and she’s definitely not interested in giving him up. Honestly sexual orientations can be confusing but considering he couldn’t keep his hands off her I don’t know if he’s 100% gay...though the whole wanting to throw up while trying to eat her out is kinda the definition of being gay 😂 as just a closeup image of that area when I was a teen helped me realize my sexuality 😉. He needs to man up and break things off with her for good because he’s never going to love her.
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Chapter 33 The First Day of Summer
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 33 The First Day of Summer
Yes! I love the fact that Nathan & Robbie seem to have a potential future together and that Nathan let him know he’d have to dump Fran to be with him. Hopefully he’s going to wake up and go after what and who he really wants. I know Fran will be upset but I hope she doesn’t out him to anybody if he tells her he’s gay. -
Things are looking up but drama is bound to ensue so what goes up must come crashing down.
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Chapter 30 Drugs, Sex and Rock and Roll
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 30 Drugs, Sex and Rock and Roll
I can’t believe Robbie gave into peer pressure especially mild peer pressure like that as he went from saying no to the drugs to not wanting to miss out on the fun in a matter of minutes. Then before he even really realized the effect of the first pill he downed a second one without thinking and overall it didn’t seem like a positive experience for him drug wise nor sex wise in the end. I’m guessing Alex planned it out hoping the drugs and alcohol would keep Robbie from saying no to anal sex. Alex is an admitted user who just wants Robbie as a living sex toy and is clearly someone to be avoided if Robbie wants to truly be happy. Alex himself is going to end up with a horrible future if he stays on his current path as hard drugs, random sex, etc...tend result in bad outcomes. -
I love Nathan’s personality and know he would be a great boyfriend for Robbie. Robbie isn’t your typically confused boy as Nathan thinks he’s primarily straight and is confused about liking boys yet for Robbie it’s the opposite as he’s a primarily gay boy who is confused about liking girls. I get that he wants to be bi so he can actually pretend to be straight and it sounds like he is bi yet he needs to end this relationship sooner rather than later as it’s just going to hurt Fran not to mention cause a lot of drama when the truth comes out. Nathan is sweet though I suppose he’s a typical horndog as he’s made it clear he’d be happy to have sex with Robbie despite the fact Robbie is in a relationship. I don’t support cheating so I wish Nathan would have said he’d like to be more than friends if Robbie was single but they are horny teenage boys so morality goes out the window when it comes to getting laid.
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Robbie Robbie I guess you’re being a typical guy so it’s hard to blame you for your decisions. I mean you enjoy sex with Fran but you don’t seem emotionally invested in the relationship so you are in the end likely more worried about giving into your gay side and ruining your attempt to pretend to be straight by having sex with Alex than really feeling guilty over cheating on her as you are thinking with your little Robbie. You likely aren’t pursuing Nathan because you’re afraid as unlike Fran & Alex Nathan actually poses the possibility of an actual emotional relationship rather than a purely sexual one which can be frightening considering how the last relationship with Tom ended. Then there’s the chance Rory is gay considering some of the vibes he gives off but once again any relationship that forms will likely be a purely sex driven one. Alex is domineering and despite claiming to love his girlfriend is very willing to cheat on her so I don’t think he’s the type you want in your life. I have a feeling if Robbie ever angered him he’d have no qualms about outing him to the entire school and he made some comment about how this would be their last time having sex yet I seriously doubt he has any intention of that being true. Robbie has very few friends and has no one to confide in sadly as he needs some advice. I doubt he’s even told Tom about how far thing have gone with Fran and he’s definitely not going to tell him about Alex not that Tom has a lot of experience in situations like these himself.
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I love the lines like “Well this morning I heard someone screaming and it sounded like it was coming from your house. It frightened the life out of me and I nearly called the Police.” and “Here,” said Philippe. “Hold onto my rod for a minute while I grab that beer.” 😂. On one hand Robbie seems to really enjoying sex with Fran yet at one point he was saying something like he’d have to make do with her after lusting after/ogling Philippe as his gay side was shining through. There were a few moments where he still sounds like he’s not too enamored with the female body as a whole despite enjoying sex with her plus that moment when he mentioned Fran looked a bit like a boy because of the way she dressed so eh I’m still not sure if he’s bisexual exactly though the label is kind of pointless as we are all unique. I’d say he doesn’t really have feelings for Fran beyond sex and definitely prefers guys as he’d leave her for Nathan or even her own brother in a heartbeat 😂 so it would be best if he got the courage to date Nathan as he’d be much happier in the long run. Still, I get his reluctance to embrace his attraction to guys out of fear of what that entails.
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Chapter 26 The Easter Weekend Part 2
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 26 The Easter Weekend Part 2
He’s right in the fact Fran seemed to have everything planned down to the letter which made it seemed like if we didn’t know better we’d doubt she was a virgin from the way she acted. Maybe he meant because he had been worried about his performance yet despite saying it was the best orgasm he’d ever had his first thoughts after having sex were that he enjoyed it but was glad it was over. He’s only ever bottomed and it wasn’t clear if he actually enjoyed that part with Tom as it was just mentioned multiple times that he was sore afterward which while normal for a person’s first time it just gave me the feeling it wasn’t the best experience for him. My point being is whether he’s bi or whatever his time with Fran is his first time penetrating any gender so of course it’s his best sexual experience to date. I’m not certain if he’s outright bisexual or if Fran is to him the way he was to Tom where she’s a rare exception. -
Chapter 25 The Easter Weekend Part 1
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 25 The Easter Weekend Part 1
Wow I’m wondering if there is going to be a plot twist where Nicola is bi or a closeted lesbian because of her comment about him not deserving Fran. It either makes me think she likes Fran or that she doesn’t like the fact he’s leading Fran on as maybe Nicola has realized he’s gay. I mean she’s right about Robbie not having any balls because if he did he’d be going at what and who he really wants. -
Ok, so far while I don’t see this ending well at least it looks like I was being paranoid when I thought this was a trap. I mean Alex seems legitimately interested in him and there wasn’t an ambush waiting for Robbie so that’s good. I’m going to cross my fingers that this doesn’t turn out too badly.
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Chapter 22 The Guessing Game
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 22 The Guessing Game
“Alex” remarked that he has PE with Robbie and Robbie remembers him from there...but does Robbie remember having homeroom with him like Boy X originally claimed? If the going school gossip is Alex has a big “package” it would be smart for someone to choose his name as a fake identity to entrap a horny gay boy. I still feel like this is a trap though it’s possible this Alex could be actually in on the trap rather than just a name drop as he could be friends with Doug as I still think if this is a trap that Doug is in on it. I’m 99% certain it’s a trap at this point but who knows. -
I think if Rory was Boy X he might have hinted at what went on at the mall as more evidence of Robbie being gay or bi yet no remote mentioning of that. I’m very concerned this is a trap to out him as gay. I’m guessing it’s Doug and he’s going to send him a text that will lead him into an ambush or possibly just an embarrassing scene where he has Daniel there to show him his cousin/brother is gay. This is just too convoluted and complex to be legit I think like they’re trying to build up the expense to humiliate him even more when he realizes it’s a trick.
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Yeah Robbie would never try to find the G-Spot I’m sure 😂. Fran went from I’m not ready for sex to I’m taking the pill so we can have sex pretty fast. Robbie needs to check his priorities because Fran says she’s falling for him and he’s not feeling the same way about her. She’s going to end up hurt if he keeps leading her on.
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I’m a little conflicted about Robbie’s decision to be straight and everything because he seemed ok with his sexuality for the most part until he moved to Canada plus he repeatedly said it would have been easier in England. I know being gay in a small town that isn’t very accepting is harder but I don’t see him doing a 180 in his acceptance of his sexuality primarily because of location. I mean he’s majorly in denial and this is just sad. Admittedly I was in denial too at his age but I oddly labeled myself bisexual accepting that I liked guys because you know while that may not be the norm it felt more normal than being gay plus I just couldn’t deny my attraction to men. I’m also worried that he’s being setup by this letter as it could be someone like Doug attempting to prove he’s gay especially as Doug wanted to date Fran so he’s jealous plus already told Daniel he thought Robbie was gay. At one point there seemed to be some attraction towards Fran so I supported the experimentation so he could figure out his sexual orientation for certain yet it’s clear his mind focusing on guys pretty much 24/7 so I think it’s time to end this facade. He has a chance at a relationship with Nathan and a chance with Boy X if it isn’t a trap/trick so he should embrace who he is though I’m not suggesting he come out to the world as gay.
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Robbie has an overactive imagination automatically imagining Fran’s family could be part of the mafia because they’re Italian. He’s watched way too many movies 😂. I am curious why Fran never mentioned her older brother Philippe to Robbie as she had mentioned her younger siblings. Part of me imagined it was because she didn’t like him possibly because, considering the theme of this story, she was homophobic and he was maybe gay yet she wanted to introduce Robbie to him which she wouldn’t have if she didn’t like her brother. I don’t like the fact Robbie is lying to himself and everyone else yet I don’t know if I can condemn him for dating Fran as it doesn’t seem like he’s just using her. Maybe he’s bi or just not 100% gay as he does seem attracted to Fran to some extent yet considering his mind primarily focuses on guys he’s definitely more gay than straight. I do hats the fact that he’s in denial and is trying to become straight as if being gay is a phase. He’s going to end up hurting people with his lies.
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Chapter 14 Is this Nathan?
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 14 Is this Nathan?
Ok, on one hand I don’t like the idea of Robbie pretending to be straight for appearances sake and just using a girl yet at the same time he seems to feel an actual sexual attraction towards Fran which if real is something he should explore. I still kind of feel sorry for him as he’s still hiding who he is even if he is attracted to Fran and I kind of feel sorry for Nathan assuming he was getting vibes that Robbie liked him as I’m sure that he was interested in Robbie. -
I’m disappointed because I was hoping this family would show signs of being open minded and Robbie could come out to them yet based on what Don said it doesn’t appear to be so. Not certain Don would react too negatively but he doesn’t look open to the idea. Then you’ve got Nicola trying to get him laid and will probably help put him on the track to dating girls so he can pretend to be straight. I’m hoping he meets Nathan, Nathan gets interested in him, and he ends up in a relationship with a guy even if it’s a hidden one as the idea to date girls is a bad one. For one he’ll just be using them and that’s just not right so I’m hoping if he ends up in a relationship with someone like maybe Nathan he’ll just continue not to publicly date rather than pretending to like girls. Still, the plot does look like it’s leading to him dating some girl but I hope it’s not Fran as that would ruin their friendship.
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Chapter 8 First Day of School
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 8 First Day of School
I love the line ‘How can anyone who’s named after a potato chip expect to be taken seriously’ and she is definitely one rude woman. I am worried that his choice of locker code is a bit revealing because he’s afraid of anyone finding out he’s gay yet the school will have that code on file which somebody like Miss Pringle could leak as she wouldn’t be beyond gossip with the other employees. I mean choosing the word/phrase G-A-Y-1 could just be seen as a kid trying to annoy an authority figure like Miss Pringle yet I’d still be too paranoid to use something like that if I didn’t want anyone to suspect I was gay. -
Chapter 4 Getting To Know Me
NimirRaj commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 4 Getting To Know Me
On one hand it sounds like Daniel might be ok with Robbie being gay yet I’m not certain. I mean he says he didn’t want to drop Nathan as a friend, still hung out with him, etc...but he also says they don’t hangout like they used to plus there’s a difference between a gay friend who has slept over before and a gay roommate. Daniel might not be comfortable sharing a bedroom with a gay guy and things may get tense for a bit even if he’s ok with it. I mean it would make most straight guys uncomfortable with the idea that their roommate might be checking them out. -
😑 As soon as I saw who it was from and that it was labeled a memento of his father I never would have opened it. I didn’t know what it was going to be but there’s no way it was going to be anything positive. That women may not be physically abusing him but she’s still abusing him in her own way. It was bad enough when she didn’t protect him like a mother should but now she’s trying to harm him herself though so far it’s verbal & psychological rather than physical. She’s definitely mother of the year.
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I think he meant by the statement they didn’t beat him was that they didn’t break his spirit or defeat him not that they didn’t abuse him/physically beat him.
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With this story essentially over I’m a little surprised at what happened with Berto’s uncle, which is nothing. I mean once Carl & Dan’s dad was dead he was just never mentioned again and Ian Carson was sure he’d leave them alone as he wasn’t going to get paid anymore. I can understand him not going after Carl & Dan anymore because he was paid to do that but he had a personal grudge against Berto so I expected him to continue to threaten his life. I know not every criminal gets caught but it’s more the fact he gave up on killing his nephew rather than the fact he was never caught that leaves the story feeling unresolved.
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I don’t really agree that Cam & Kevin were being too hard on William because they were just joking like they do with all the guys and William gives as good as he gets. Just seems a little silly that it would get pointed out that they were supposedly being extra hard on him and that they’d start feeling guilty about it when they haven’t acted any worse than normal as far as I can tell.
