No kidding. Luckily I do have the story in my head! I actually have had it for a while, I just didn’t think I would write it. Now I have the first chapter finished. It really shouldn’t take too long, it’s all there, in my head!
I didn’t think Cyn would ask to go but now that he has, I’m very curious how it will go. He’s timid n many ways but his whole life has been spent in the woods. He actually has a bit of confidence out there. He knows he’s fast and he has a strong nose. He could definitely be an asset.
I don’t think they would, but they *could* use Cyn as bait…
It’s getting interesting. I can’t wait to see who the alpha has in mind. I’m drawing a blank. Maybe someone who doesn’t want the job? Their residence would be fun to watch.
Eeek.
I really like how Cyn has the rationale of a wild animal. He doesn’t reason like humans do, it’s not how he was raised.
I think Shea has an uphill battle when it comes to convincing Cyn of his value.
This article is spot on. I don’t do a lot of thing well as a writer, but I work hard to do this. A mediocre story can be great if you get your readers invested in the characters lol
Damn, Poor Elijah couldn't even get 100 words into the first chapter without the anvil dropping on him. Sign of a ruthless author, no doubt.
But then he gets tackled by a sexy dark mysterious man.
Ruthless I tell you. Ruthless.
In my head, yes, they did. I'm just not creative enough to have actually come up with anything good enough to share in the story. But we know Loren would have, and did, nail it.
I can't even believe it. 115?! Never did I ever...
Just know that I saw the notification the other day, when you 'liked' the chapter. I waited and waited and waited for your beloved comment to come through. I even messaged @kbois and said "wait for it! It's coming!"
It never came. I slouched over the table and cried, wondering what I did wrong. Did the story not live up? "WHY GOD?! WHY DIDN'T @Hellsheild COME THROUGH?!"