Sometimes negative feedback is negative so much as "emotional" feedback. Especially with hard cliffhangers when readers are attached to characters.
Glad your back and hope to see some continuation on your story
This was a really great story! It has everything you want in a thriller. Nothing is given away too easily, it's well paced, lots of twists, with a perfectly satisfying end. A definite read.
Much deserved promotion. I think it's funny that as Shea gets promoted, Cyn is more terrified, while Shea's feelings grow more intense. The irony. I love it. It makes sense. Still funny!
Yessss. Be jealous wolves, the deer is taller. I suppose it's different when you're hunting them and you feel superior as a species, but now they're just counterparts. It must drive them crazy to be inferior in size. I love it.
Me thinks Cyn is maybe showing off a little for shea...I hope he struts his little deer behind. He probably wont because he doesn't even know what it means to flirt...but maybe it comes instinctually.
Hey, it doesn’t matter what makes him brave. I actually think that his attachment to Shea, and how it’s pushing him outside his bounds, is adorable.
now I’m really stressed…
I thought this chapter was very sweet. Cyn is so very brave! We’re expecting Cyn to forget YEARS (decades? I don’t know how old he is) of biological training in a matter of hours, days. That’s no easy feat. He has spent his entire life being hunted by wolves and watching his herd be killed. I know he’s going to go with Shea, I’m sure it will do fine, but I am STRESSED about it lol.
I think it’s pretty damn sweet that Alpha is going. True leadership right there.