Damn, Poor Elijah couldn't even get 100 words into the first chapter without the anvil dropping on him. Sign of a ruthless author, no doubt.
But then he gets tackled by a sexy dark mysterious man.
Ruthless I tell you. Ruthless.
In my head, yes, they did. I'm just not creative enough to have actually come up with anything good enough to share in the story. But we know Loren would have, and did, nail it.
I can't even believe it. 115?! Never did I ever...
Just know that I saw the notification the other day, when you 'liked' the chapter. I waited and waited and waited for your beloved comment to come through. I even messaged @kbois and said "wait for it! It's coming!"
It never came. I slouched over the table and cried, wondering what I did wrong. Did the story not live up? "WHY GOD?! WHY DIDN'T @Hellsheild COME THROUGH?!"
Loved this chapter. Lots of great detail about life not on Earth.
It’s ugh, the moment he found out that Chris didn’t swing his way. It’s never gets easier. Hopefully they still have a great friendship.
looking forward to the next chapter.