What an absolute treat! Cannot wait to get going on this story again and to see where it will go. Nice summary and set up for additional intrigue . . .
So excellent. I was required to get an HIV test every year in the military and was always so nervous until it came back negative. That and the fear of being discovered and getting in trouble were big. This trilogy of friends from youth and moving forward in life together has been a very satisfying read. I bet there's a lot of truth and personal history in this.
Refreshing without resorting to stereotypes. @John Henry has been raised by addicts. That must be tough - something I have no experience with, so I guess it's nice to read something informed by someone else's life experiences.
So happy to see this here! I remember reading this as a single shot chapter some time ago. It was so well written, I especially liked the sex scene corresponding to the train passing by. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes now!
Great story so far. I think we've got Nathan pretty well characterized at this point and have a good idea where the story is going. Corey is still a mystery, like why he participated in the behavior to start with? What is his interest in Nathan? It will be fun to read and find out.
Wonderful as always. I fear that you shall one day leave us for bigger and bolder things than this forum, yet I will be happy for you. Good luck to you in your studies this semester.
This is a great story worth reading, starting with well crafted characters that the reader can get into. There area wide range of characters in this story. The concept of animal revenge and the communing with nature were really different for gay literature. The romance was beautiful and smile provoking. I really don't care about the animal angle in the story but it was a great mechanism to create something different. Biff has a real way of giving his stories very unique names as well. I highly recommend this one!
Nicely done. Great progression. I'm curious as to where this will go. Although I'd like to read some gay content in this story, i'm pleased that most of the people in it, like the real world, are heterosexual. It makes the story seem more credible.
It's too bad this is on long term hold. It left me hanging. . . This was a very well written story and could be one of the better ones on GA if it completed.
Viktor's dad was a pleasant surprise. I have been reading a lot of axes to grind here against religion and religious people and it seems to me to be just another bigotry just like those the author wails against. Too bad he was blind to it. He's entitled to his opinions as I am mine.
So Wes has a really cool nice accepting Dad who stayed married to a completely evil witch, then Seamus' love of his life is a kid who he just met and whose house he went to the first time when this event happened. Do I have that right? I want to enjoy the story but maybe a little subtlety or relationship progression might have made it even better?