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The background operations are as integral to the story as the events happening in the foreground, it's been interesting to write about and I'm happy that you are still enjoying it. Jacob is a good man, he may feature in a future story, but it is not guaranteed. I'm glad that you acknowledge and appreciate @raven1's part, his help is invaluable.
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Good luck in getting a pay out for it, lol.
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What is being done to honour Manny's memory is remarkable and willingly carried out by people with great skill.
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It is a complicated and sensitive process, it is also very mentally taxing for Tom. Tom is one of the best at this type of operation and thrives on the types of challenges he faced in Israel, it inspires him to be better. The pups will remain with Aaron and Asher, regardless of what happens, they have chosen each other. Ariel may join Benjamin in the UK in the future if it is possible, otherwise her future will be in Israel with her pups and their charges.
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March Signature Feature: Puzzles Pieces by Mrsgnomie
Mancunian commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I've read this before and used this as an opportunity to read it again. Guess what? It was just as good as the first time. It's a sweet tale of confession and acceptance that brings out a warm fuzzy feeling. -
Work in the back offices of Associated Executive Car Services continued. It was a twenty-four-hour operation. Tom and Dick, the UK operatives, worked diligently with their Israeli counterparts. Dick spent most of his time out in the field. Accompanying a courier, he dropped off and picked up many small, essential packages, discretion being paramount. Tom's skills were best used sitting in front of a computer. Most called him a computer hacker. Tom hated that phrase. He associated hacking wi
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Techsperts, I like that, have you created a new word? They have done a great job for Joseph, but let's not ask how. Benjamin's conversation in the previous chapter was with Jacob, at this point he believes he is the only one who knows the truth and is unaware of Ben's conversation with John. This is where Benjamin comes clean with everybody about his age and his circumstances, previously a few only suspected. I should have made this more clear in the story, sorry.
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I love the warning sign, Doc. Let's hope your hunch is right and it does get resolved.
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Aloha Albert
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Benjamin is yet another lost soul who will benefit from Manny's legacy. We don't know yet how he will benefit, but I think it is safe to say he will be looked after as there appears to be no shortage of people who may step forward to protect him and guarantee his future.
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If you're saying you want more from Tom and Dick, I may be able to arrange it. 🤔 This one is out of my hands, I can't do anything.
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Yep, Joseph has a better outlook for the future, as for Benjamin, I guess we have to wait and see. I'd say it's in the lap of the gods but the reality is, it's in the fingers of Tom and the Israeli tech guys.
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Yes, it looks like Joseph's future is secure, but as we all know when you sort out one problem another one rears its ugly head (no I'm not saying Benjamin is ugly, so don't misquote me). The pups have their guardian angels in the form of Aaron and Asher, I'm sure they will be well looked after.
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Wow, talk about starting a story with an impact! So we have some action, three men are shot, and murdered it's a fact we can believe. And then we have revelations, confessions of love and longing. Unsolicited protection being given and then alibi's being given and believed, but should we believe the alibi's, or the confessions of love or even the declaration of protection being given? Only time will tell, and I'm keeping notes. ✍️
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As strong as Kevin is, there are times he is also a bit 'highly strung'. It's a good thing that Ian is there to reign him in. It is possible that Ian thought of kissing Kevin to shut him up, maybe he didn't want to chance having his lips chewed off if he wasn't successful, lol. Manny's do appear to have come through, don't they? I'm guessing their motto is something like, 'Miracles we can perform immediately, the impossible takes just a little longer'. Let's hope it's only a spanner and not the whole toolbox! Can Manny's friends, with Tom's help, do anything? I'm guessing the GIF of Tom's coder dance tells us he likes a challenge.
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Isaac retrieved his briefcase from his car and sat with Ben, Ian and Kevin at the table. As he sat, Ben received a call which caused him to step away from the table. The call appeared to be very one-sided as Ben nodded, even though his nods could not be seen, and the occasional reply of “Yes,” “I see,” and “I understand.” The call ended when Ben answered, “I'll let you know within the next sixty to ninety minutes.” “Sorry about that. Isaac would you like to continue.” Ben retook his seat at
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We will have to wait to see what happens and hope this new complication doesn't scupper any plans. 🤞
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She was trying to knock some sense in, but unfortunately, she failed.
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Aloha Albert
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Benjamin had a good life until the Israeli conflict tore his family apart. Can he be happy again? Is Joseph the catalyst that changes his future prospects? Only time will tell. It is possible to relocate a dog from Israel to the UK, but it's not easy and is time-consuming. There are regulations to follow to avoid the pitfalls.
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I can honestly say that I was emotional as this was written. Benjamin is a good boy with a good heart and he needs some good luck before his circumstances adversely change him. Can his new friends be that good luck? We will find out soon.
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Shamira was up at seven thirty the following morning. After dressing, she collected the dogs from the twins’ room, and let them out in the garden. After starting the coffee maker she poured herself a glass of orange juice. Joseph and Benjamin soon joined her. As they sat beside each other, she noticed that Benjamin and Joseph appeared closer in age and build than she first thought. Her 'women's intuition' told her there was more to Benjamin's story than he let on. If she was right, he needed hel
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Thank you for your very touching comments. They are comments that I will treasure.
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A nicely written and intriguing whodunnit thriller. I can't tell you whodunnit or Chris would have me clapped in handcuffs, so you will just have to read and find out. I promise you will enjoy it. A great read that is worthy of the five-star rating.
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I'm definitely not a good detective, I may worked out who the murderer was in the end but I lost too many victims. That damn woman! Nice job Chris I enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to Ken's next case.
