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  1. Peterlefun
    Interesting twist - surprised that his mom was out of the picture if she has this strong a bond / connection with Salem. ... look forward to reading about a happier Salem and seeing how he and Johnny’s relationship develops.
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    A very different read from the other chapters - it’s nice to get more insights into Johnny’s thoughts. Hope he can pull Salem out of his funk once and for all,
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    I surly didn’t see that coming. Please tell me we won’t end up with a bun in the oven from their fun filled night?? The last thing Robbie needs is more complications in his life. Although, I can imagine the look on Don’s face, which might be worth it....
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    Sad one this time. I guess they all can’t be uplifting. Well written as always. 😁
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    Plans

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Plans

    Another great poem - love the way you write so that it is easy to apply to the readers own life.
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    Failure III

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Failure III

    Another great poem! Keep posting please...
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    Wow! Salem is certainly fighting some demons. I don’t blame Johnny for running away, but can’t help but worry how Salem is going to cope without his influence.
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    Epilogue

    Peterlefun commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    Wow! Great piece of writing and many thanks. I forgive you for making us suffer through all the twists and turns in their relationship before they finally pulled their collective heads out of their butts and made it happen..🙄😁😁.
  9. Peterlefun
    Very well written and a great spot for an ending. Thanks for the enjoyment!
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    The Gift

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in The Gift

    Your poetry is food for the soul. Beautifully written as always,
  11. Peterlefun
    So happy to see another chapter of Jesse 101!😁. I hope Scottie doesn’t get his heart broken when he realizes what Tristen is up to...
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    Required

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Required

    Peace... nicely written as always. I found myself reading this a couple times before it sunk in.
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    I sure hope that means Sue put her foot down with Don and he is gone from the house for good, but I have a feeling that it won’t be that easy. I hope Robbie .relaxes and gets to have fun Christmas night...
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    Awesome - been waiting for this.... 😁😁😃😄I’ll comment again after I read it.
  15. Peterlefun
    What a great chapter. Between the lessons in understanding and forgiveness to the incredibly sweet and romantic promposal - awesome!!!
  16. Peterlefun
    Hot!!! I’m glad they told the DA to shove that ridiculous plea. It’s nice to see the boys have other piers to hang around and feel comfortable with. —- also a great response from the church - wish that was the norm.
  17. Peterlefun
    Wow! That scene with the squad showing up had me in tears. To see the support and love come from their friends makes me have hope that each generation continues to grow and learn to be tolerant of others. Great job
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    Chapter 19

    Peterlefun commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 19

    The way Liam brought levity to such a dark situation was great. Hopefully his perseverance and Jarren’s Love will be all that Nash needs. I have a feeling that Jarren’s Mom will already have lodging figured out - can’t see her trying to get Jarren back north.
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    Chapter 18

    Peterlefun commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Great story so far - put the self doubt out of your head and keep going. It would be nice to read more about their friends and family as the story continues to develop.
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    Chapter 17

    Peterlefun commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Well you got your wish with Dorian - thank goodness we didn’t get what the Bahamas did. Hoping the guys r ok from their accident..
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    Chapter 15

    Peterlefun commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 15

    OK as far as dirty dishes go, i’m Guilty. ... but on to the good stuff: you are doing a great job developing their relationship - comes across as so natural. ... and do I see foster parent titles in their future.
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    Vienna

    Peterlefun commented on Mac Rountree's story chapter in Vienna

    So the plot starts to unfold... will be interesting to see if it is greed that pushed someone to try and kill them.
  23. Peterlefun
    Another great chapter with it’s twists and turns. It’s amazing to see Aiden and Heathcliff still so far apart. It seems Aid n’s Younger age and inexperience are not helping him cut through to what is important. I thought for sure Aiden’s mom was going to go after Heathcliff when she met him, but it seems even she is star struck. Can’t wait to see how they work through all their open issues.
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    Addiction II

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Addiction II

    I can’t believe that missed this post. Awesome writing and great symbolism. I’ll say it again - I really enjoy reading your poetry and it was needed tonight. Thanks
  25. Peterlefun
    Much better,
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