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  1. Peterlefun
    Never pegged you for a private school preppy. 🙀
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    You never did answer my Q about how well you play the piano? 😁
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    Happy early birthday Julian. Sounds great, but I’ll go one Better for you - I have a springform pan and make my own - they are so good homemade, but I’ve had them fall on me a couple times and that is a bit disappointing... being French, you should try it. 😋 Although baking your own birthday pie might be going too far...
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    Great chapter, where domI even start??? It was so cute the way you wrote about Salem calling Johnny “babe”. I can’t wait to hear that someday as well. The way you described Johnny’s thought about discovering how talented Salem is, was terrific. Then the cheesecake — when you first wrote cherry I thought about the gross canned red cherry pie filling plopped on top, but then you redeemed yourself with the description of the black cherry... it seems like Salem, with Johnny’s help, is finally putting his life on track. are you that good at playing the piano?
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    The Warrior II

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in The Warrior II

    Post more poems please - especially since you said you already wrote them...😁😁
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    Depression

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Depression

    ...been doing just what is described at the end of this poem - pulling the trigger soon to live a happy and open life. I can’t wait.
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    Why wait for tomorrow; they have the rest of the night with no bedtime....
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    Spies With Eyes

    Peterlefun commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Spies With Eyes

    Wow! This chapter started off so dark, but Johnny seemed to rally himself at the end - with Salem’s help... As always, your poetry was beautiful - you have a gift. Keep the chapters coming.
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    Great story so far with a truly unique plot. I really enjoy how you are developing the characters of Matan and Yonatan. I look forward to connecting the dots as the story unfolds.
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    Ah, the dance continues. The ladder scene was great!
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    It’s about damn time that they both grew a pair. Finally!!. Nice plot twist with Heath’s eccentric family and twin brother, ... can’t wait to read what you have in store for them next and what Aiden’s boss says when he calls in sick, right after getting a promotion.
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    OK, I now believe that Don has no redeeming qualities at all. I really hope he is divorced from the picture before he does any more damage to the kids. I really like playful atmosphere and how you portray Daniel and robbie’s relationship. Daniel is a great brother to Robbie.
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    Chapter 20

    Peterlefun commented on JacobMillerTex's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Ok, now Martha needs to go too. How about a murder / suicide with her and Elizabeth?
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    Chapter 18

    Peterlefun commented on JacobMillerTex's story chapter in Chapter 18

    What an Ass Chris is - why doesn’t he stop and think about what he is showing in regards to his character and how Josh is going to think about that instead of just going off half cocked? If he does this, he’s lost Josh forever
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    Chapter 14

    Peterlefun commented on JacobMillerTex's story chapter in Chapter 14

    There in NO way he can take his wife back - she is evil and he knows it. He has to protect all of his kids from her influence.
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    Chapter 13

    Peterlefun commented on JacobMillerTex's story chapter in Chapter 13

    I can’t fathom a parent ever treating anyone much less their own child like that. There is a special place in hell for them, I can’t imagine how much it would tear up a child to be treated like that by Those who are supposed to love and be supportive of he / she. the story is starting to heat up and I can’t put it down.
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    Chapter 51

    Peterlefun commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 51

    Another great chapter - I will be sorry to see the story end, but please tell me they decide to burn the letter..... I can’t think of any good that would come from their mother,,,
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    Read Luiz’ other story to learn more about Peter - it fills in all the gaps
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    Either Peter isn’t as straight as he thinks he is, or he is the most understanding straight teenage boy alive....
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    I was so hoping Peter would console Chris after finding out about his mom, then have that lead in to a passionate kiss... instead, Chris runs away again. So frustrating...
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    High Five!

    Peterlefun commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in High Five!

    It will be interesting to see how Aidan reacts once he finds out Heathcliff secured his promotion for him. Great scene with Heathcliff finally giving into Aiden’s desires, but It’s frustrating to see the two of them dance around their feelings for one another without being honest.
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    Very odd and uncomfortable scene. While it’s great the boys have developed a trusting relationship with Josh, this seems unrealistic for any teenager to do and a little creepy; especially given Josh is their principal too.
  23. Peterlefun
    The many faces of rain Rain is sometimes slow and easy Rain is sometimes calm and serene Rain is sometimes fast and heavy Rain is sometimes frantic and hard Rain is varying Rain has power to cleanse and renew Rain has power to grow and flower Rain has power to wear and rot Rain has power to mud and flood Rain has power Rain sounds soft and tranquil Rain sounds like pitter patter Rain sounds loud and angry Rain sounds viole
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    Individual poems for each chapter from a new writer who has recently found a love of reading, writing and poetry.
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    Chapter 50

    Peterlefun commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 50

    Even though he is hurting, Amara showed how strong he is by recognizing what he needs and asking for help. It’s been great to see all these relationships develop. While it does seem like the story is coming to an end point, I’ll miss it. Another great chapter,
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