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Danilo Syrtis

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  1. Danilo Syrtis

    Chapter 15

    It's weird to read freezing chapter when you see that hot weather in july 😆 Still no romance between Bruce and Rosie ? 😝 excellent chapter 👍
  2. That's funny : the map looks a lot like China during the (3) Kingdoms Wars 😄
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    Chapter 14

    LOL i thought BOYsenberry pie was a pie or a huge cake where a Bo(y) was hidden 😂
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    Chapter 14

    i want to be waked up the same way ! 😝 i like apple pie a lot 😋 and manicottis too 😄 extraordinary xmas "yankee swap" 😆 ecellent chapter 👍
  5. i only wish a link from each story to the vote : i didn't know where i can vote, only see the 👍 or ❤️ i totally loved the flash fiction challenge idea :)
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    Chapter 13

    The vote link should be added for each story. i read stories but didn't know where to vote (now it is closed 😑. i only put a 👍 or a ❤️) excellent chapter btw 👍
  7. Danilo Syrtis

    Chapter 12

    hmm chapter starts with small Tupperwares and ends with a huge one 😂 excellent tupperware chapter 😆
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    Joe

    i think that the majority of us were hit by those words : ".. even if you're not sure, you just gotta dive in" ❤️ so true ! and add my vote for another chapter about Joe & Jake, another for Pete & Russell (yes i ask a lot 😆) may be the 4 of them would cross each other somewhere and have a nice beer 😉 awesome chapter 👍
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    Harry

    Same feeling 😉 excellent chapter 👍
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    Yonder

    lol Crazy ending but i love it !👍 i had a feeling that sooner or later, you need to send some characters away, because places inside the camp were limited. Besides, since it is a "camp Refuge", shelter is only temporary, until the broken are able to fly by their own. So Harlan is promoted to "angel" 😆 and we might have another spin off with Mamma G ? 😜 excellent chapter 👍
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    Over

    Yes the proposal was an awesome scene ❤️ Joseph-Orson scene was lovely and funny 😆 and the whole chapter was excellent 👍
  12. Danilo Syrtis

    Broken

    i can't have better words 😝 i'm just amazed and happy that Lee found finally the courage and the will to turn away from Eddie 🙂 hmm more angels for Lee : Mark and friends ❤️ awesome cliffhanging chapter ! 👍 (luckily, no need to wait 😂)
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    Nightfall

    what can i say that is not already said ? Awesome chapter 👍 even it is a sad one 🙈 and this is the kind of chapters where you see the writer's talent : to make you feel all the sadness (or the happiness) of his characters ❤️ and that there still have hope when everything was destroyed by the storm.
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    Escape?

    Well, readers are doing connections because some devious writer dropped hints 😝 that 1st scene with Anderson is just priceless 😂 and Avery is turning 😈 😆 bacon-cheese omelette with jam ?! 🤢 awesome chapter 👍
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    Keeper

    a double marriage coming ? Jeremy-Mason and Joseph-Orson 😍 Lot of sweet... for Avery ! 😝 As for the title, my 1st reaction was "for those who take care/protect" (Clay, Dr Wade, Mr Mercer) until Summerabbacat said "about those who keep away from" (Eddie) excellent chapter 👍
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    Outsider

    i have the same feeling 🙂 (lucky me, i won't have to wait "next week" 😝)
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    Outsider

    hmm yes i too could use some characters remindering 😜 had to check some old chapters to refresh my memory 😁
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    Outsider

    lol don't blame Wayne, because i remember you like doing the same 😝 hmm i love those "old characters appearances", it is like small "bites of chocolate" 😜 excellent chapter 👍
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    Rotten

    Comparing a bite of chocolate to a good piss ?! 🤢 definitly not for me 🙊😂 excellent chapter 👍
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    Bound

    lol i knew you posted but i was busy with some books then my tablet broke. i'm back because kbois mailed me about the "short stories" (and i finished the books 😉)
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    Bound

    Wow ! dark start indeed 🙈 i was almost starting to cry seeing Lee's life ! then angel Joseph shows ❤️ and that "... i didn't know it is full of cops !" changed my tears into 😂 and i know i will like this story 😜 great chapter 👍
  22. Yes that's why we do love stories 😉 : dreams can become true ❤️ excellent short story 👍
  23. Danilo Syrtis

    Chapter 1

    lol what a funny short story 😄 hmm wonder how you named your dogs 😝 ? Hades ? Cerberus ? 😂 (or Scooby ? lol ) and they whispered that veryyyyy old word "caliginosity" in your ears ? 😁 good job 👍
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    Why Pride?

    Awesome short story ! 👍 Yes, Myles is indeed a real good friend, especially for what he did the next day : joining Jace to the pride show how he valued their friendship ! ❤️
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    Chapter 11

    lol me too 😝
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