Danilo Syrtis

Wow over 2 months since the last chapter ! i was worried that the story might be abandoned (you need to stay safe in this time !) but the wait was worth : this chapter is just awesome !! 👍 this story could even have more than one book : all the characters are so complex and interesting 🙂 and the characters list is really welcome and a good add : please put the link in the head of each chapter 🙂 so lady baiza is about to make her next move and Jihan’s network is working nicely : now which side the silver shore people are going to stand ? 😉 and rashan finally call Jihan « papa » 👍 i have a question : how do you find your characters name ? because « Neith » is an egyptian goddess and « Ha » & « Bast » look like « Râ » & « Bastet » 2 other egyptian gods 😀 can’t wait the next chapter 😆

and even if you recovered from covid, keep your mask ! because there is no garanty you won’t have it a 2nd time ! 🙈 (there are people who got it twice though they are not many )

a shifter story ? i would love to read that 😆 because i’m a SF-fantasy lover 😉

Wow that was a really HOOOT chapter ! 😂

a very nice trip 🙂 the boys did great in planning trips according to both Josh and Jack’s tastes 👍 can’t wait the next chapter XD

it is good to know more about the trip to Atlanta 🙂 btw i don’t remember what’s Shannon’s job 🙈 but if Rick was promoted, then Shannon can try to start his business without too much worry in his mind : it is not like he is the only money provider in their couple 🙂 oh ! remember the nutmeg ? well it seems that nutmeg is in that cola secret formula 😆 « how could anyone treat other human beings like that ? » just check events in Minneapolis and Kenosha 🙈 there is indeed a long way to go ! 😞 excellent chapter 👍

nice chapter 👍 loved the 2 scenes with Pete & Aiden and then Bruce & Todd. ❤️

lol i just stopped temporarily because i was busy lately and the Curries got priority on Sword of King 😆 if you are trying nutmeg, you don’t need to put much : the aroma is strong and it is toxic if you put too much (but don’t worry you will never use that much 🙂 )

one of my friends taught me to grate some nutmeg on the mashed potatoes 🙂 yes we are going to have some news from jeff ❤️ excellent chapter 👍

oops my bad 😂 i should have checked first my dictionary. in french we spell that word « ustensiles » 🤣 it seems that the french word has evolved (by adding an « s » after the « u ») 🙈

hmm i was thinking that Brittany might become more than a friend for Ryan or Noah 😬 Wow , so Aunt Sally had some personal problems. Are we going to know more about ? i hope so : she is almost family to the Curries 🙂 lol about time that Vinnie/Kevin think about adopting a boy 😆 btw i found a typo : « We’d brought it outside so we could set the plates, utensils, and food on it,.. » excellent chapter 👍

i have read McCaffrey, Asimov, Bradbury, Clark, Lewis, Rowlings.i tried Brooks and Tolkien but i have problems with their writing (but i liked the films XD). same for Herbert (Dune) : too much philosophical for my taste XD. Did you try MZ Bradley and Mercedes Lackey ? Both have gay and lesbian main characters. some authors here wrote using Mercedes Lackey universe, but i would advice you to read Lackey before or you will be lost 🙂

D. Eddings (1931-2009) is a famous fantasy writer. if you like fantasy, i’m sure you will love him 🙂 « the Belgariad » is imo his best cycle. if you like it, you can continue with « the Malloreon » & then «Belgarath » and « Polgara » (better read the 2 prequels after 😬) . there is one last book « the Rivan codex » after all these i haven’t read it yet.

lol « no pain, no gain » is the right conclusion for this great chapter 👍

Kieren reminds me of Belgarion in the Belgariad from D. Eddings : always asking « why me ? » 😂 so the mercenary Kieren met in a previous chapter was the one who hired the spies ? excellent chapter 👍

yes this chapter reminds me of the « fellowship of the ring » as well 🙂 excellent chapter 👍

lol that was a funny way to describe ancient version of toilets 😂 i’m just surprised that the castle builders didn’t find a way to make pipes and taps 🤣 excellent chapter 👍

so the mercenary is a threat or a future friend ? i will be more inclined to think it is a future friend 🙂 very interesting chapter 👍

excellent chapter 👍 could the nightmare be some precognition ?

and i hope you stay safe as well 🥰

excellent chapter 😀 the little ones comments are still so innocent and genuine ! 😆 they always make me laugh ! 😂

lol i feel like reading one of the Castaway Hotel chapter 😂 excellent chapter 👍

excellent chapter where we learn more about the story background 👍

lol i was wondering as well when we would have the first sexual scene 😆 excellent chapter 👍

excellent chapter 👍 so the journey to fight the evil is beginning. characters are introduced and ready to go ❤️