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Well it's one hell of a ride, starts with an unconventional confession scene, were you can almost taste and smell what Adam is experiencing at the end. An abrupt change of the mood in the next part and a very intriguing ending......... Promises, promises for what's coming next, I hope. Great start!
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Your mid is absolutely correct, he is in his mid twenties 25 . He was 15 in okt 1791.
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Everyone has a different Zach or Travis or Will in his head and not one is an exact replica to the one in Mark's head. That's why the book is always better than the film....
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Happy Christmas Robert and fellow readers, love the way the relationships are building up. Mmm jockstrap, something looking forward too 😉.
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Great chapter, good for Jake, revenge in the nick of time. Now the circus starts. My money is on Miranda......
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Well a couple of chapters ago Mark said" next story" when I asked if there was an infusion of Wade and Matt into this story. I have a weak spot for Wade😉. Maybe Curtis is going to be Elizabeth Danfields personal vallet as a punishment ... just a suggestion.
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Well, what about the trust for Jake, I keep wondering if there is a surprise hidden in that.... Maybe something that will help in the ripping and pissing part?
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Thanks for this epic book, George had quite the ride and came out stronger. The ride with his mother did a lot to explain the Bridgemont family dynamics and the hidden message from lady Kendal. The hidden message from Francis was very loud and hopefully enough for George to squelch his anguish about the depth of love Francis has for him. ( As Winkler says George is at his happiest when he is with Francis) Can't wait for another book , so maybe you can start dillydallying a bit with Will and Travis and give our beloved sailor boy priority? Have a great Sunday y'all.- 57 comments
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How graceful of you to let someone else shine, I salute you and hope you have a great weekend. Thanks Mark for the start of it. Intriguing as always, but I guess we see a "I have told you so , it's not Jake" comment in the foreseeable future.
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Wanna be first again? 😉
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Don't wanna spoil too much of a great story, but be ready for many didn't see that one coming plot turn moments. And it only builds up. So start reading , the proof of the pudding is in the eating, I am confident you'll love it.
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Damn you sure know how to build up a story, with all the u turns in it!. Thanks, can't wait for part two. It's one roller coaster ride, with many what the fuck ? moments in it. Love auntie by the way 😉
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Do you mean Mouse?
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That got me thinking again that we are assuming that Curtis is his puppet master, but is he? 🤔
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Loved it, very intriguing...... 👌🧐
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I looked up and saw this guy walking toward us, and chuckled. “See that dude coming our way?” I asked, using this encounter to bring us back to the original topic. “Yeah?” “When we got to Rome, my guard looked like him,” I said. “Dude looks like a mobster,” Travis said, then we said nothing as we jogged by him. To stay true to Captain Pike " Red Alert "
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Why does this happy interlude make me nervous? It's all too comfortable.... mmmm thanks Mark, I guess 😉
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Well that certainly was worth the wait. Great chapter, love Brad when he gets into power mode. But still there are some days left until Travis his birthday....
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Yeah Wednesday, half way through this agonizing wait.😉
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Who's behind that unknown investors group? Great chapter, possible fathers group down to 2, if there are no further surprises....
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Maybe an unholy alliance with her former suppressor? She has access to money thanks to Brad. 2 scheming brains are better than one, it would give them both influence again....
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Even after the xth time rereading this chapter, the Landon search gives me a raging bodily response 😉. The gold is nice but the thorough search is nicer.
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Yup, guess there's been a lot of rereading of man in motion recently 😁
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I would like some Wade and Matt infused into this , so Mark???😉
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Couldn't agree more, sitting here smiling like a Cheshire cat, this really is the way to start the weekend. Thanks Mark.
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