Jkeeletupelo
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Jesus, man, this one is DARK. I love it - don't change a thing! More please!
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I like it so far - I've always been a sucker for the underdog, though! It's really good to see another long story from you. I've missed your character style and your humor!
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"No Time But Eternity" (Part 2)
Jkeeletupelo commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "No Time But Eternity" (Part 2)
Man, I don't know what to say. I'm sitting in my car, in the parking lot at my office, just weeping over the ending to this story. Absolutely beautiful. Completely amazing. I'm beyond grateful for having read it. Thank you. -
"No Time But Eternity" (Part 1)
Jkeeletupelo commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "No Time But Eternity" (Part 1)
Holy shit, man! To put it as plainly as possible, this is the best imagery, the best, most detailed descriptive, the most heartbreaking scene... You are an amazing writer, sir. Truly amazing. -
“The Devil’s at the Door”
Jkeeletupelo commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Devil’s at the Door”
For me, it's the description, the depth, I guess you'd call it, that he gives a scene. I've always had a vivid imagination, but the way he describes a room, or a scene, or even a conversation, I can picture it, as clearly as if it were happening right in front of me. And to answer your question, so far I've read it twice, but I will continue to read this for years to come, I'm pretty sure. -
“The Devil’s at the Door”
Jkeeletupelo commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Devil’s at the Door”
Once again, you leave me sitting on the edge of my bed, gripping my phone so hard It may shatter... Truly excellent writing! I can not wait to see how it ends!- 15 comments
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I feel like we're building to a conclusion - very exciting!!
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"The Drowning City"
Jkeeletupelo commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Drowning City"
Man, I gotta tell you, I fall more in love with this story every chapter that publishes...it really is amazing work. Thank you so much for sharing! -
Barnaby makes me laugh like I haven't in a while - thank you! As always, he is right on time....
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I'm completely in love with this story. The way it's presented, the imagery you use, is amazing. Thank you!
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MORE, MORE, MORE!! A great new chapter, sir. Thank you!
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God damn, dude. Wow. That was rough. Amazing, for sure. But rough.
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I'm beginning to think you just like making me cry!
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Chapter 10 - Our Story
Jkeeletupelo commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Our Story
This story, while a tough read, is one of the best I've read this year. Like, seriously, top 5. Sounds kinda, meh, I know, but for context, my current reading list is 5 other serials that I stalk relentlessly for new content, 2 ebooks on my Kindle app, a deep rabbit hole on wire-wrap jewelry techniques (it's my fidget spinner) and re-reading the Bleach manga. All of that to say this - your words have meaning, to me. Your stories are worthy of a place of priority in the very, very chaotic and unruly mind that I am stuck with. I am able to immerse myself in your characters in a way that calms me for a brief time. Thank you. -
I've been a member for a long while now, and I have to say, I'm grateful for everything you guys do to make this site better, easier to access and more widely available to all who wish to join, read or write. Keep up the good work!
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This was very moving, a little sad, and a little bit dark, but what else could it be? It's a lovely interpretation, whatever the lore behind it, and a very well written tale.
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Ok, so first things first - I LOVED this story. I remember way back in the way back, when Someday, Out of the Blue was first published, and I was blown away then as I am now. Your style and your humor and your realism are what have kept me coming back, and what immediately hooked me on this one. I'm so glad to see that you've come back to us - the world needs more talent like yours!
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Well, you definitely won the internet today...that was the strangest, funniest, most ridiculous thing I've read in years. Thank you so much for the constant laughs today!
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I absolutely love that you didn't end this here definitively. I am very much hoping that you'll continue it! Very well done!
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Well, Dudette, that was one hell of a twist - I loved it! Such a unique perspective for this genre, and very well written. The characters were honest, open and believable, but for me Wolf & Farley definitely stole the show!
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You made me cry, dammit! Several times! Bah! Ok, this was a great story, and it made me miss my dog from when I was a kid.
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Ok, so, wow...this was pretty dark, man. It was amazing, don't get me wrong. I loved the whole thing, start to finish, and I love that Manny had the balls to let himself go for his principles and for his love. But still, dark.
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I love this! Reading felt like watching myself try to write something - anything - the anxiety and second guessing, and you totally nailed the humor! Brilliant!
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Wow - that was great! I can definitely see a whole bunch more of this in my head - very powerful imagery - thank you for sharing it!
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