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You've caught my interest. I quite enjoyed the detailed setup, gives me a good grasp of what's what. Looking forward to reading more. Also, for a first story it's very well written, nice job.
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Thank you for sharing this incredible story. This entire series of books has brought joy, comfort, sadness and laughter, lots of laughter as the Waters clan has navigated life's struggles and challenges. The best lesson taken from your words is that family is what you make and not necessarily what you are born to. Family is made with love and acceptance. It has been a real joy to have been invited into the lives of this wonderful loving family.
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Nope sorry disagree with above. It was a long time coming and he asked for it in spades. Also, it was Doug who hit his father-in-law for saying that shit about Blu not being born, etc. I agree violence should not be the first course of action at any time, this was one of those times a good punch in the nose was required. Besides, he'd been warned repeatedly. As for the kids, if they could have, they would have been in there themselves trying to get some. Even Levi commented they'd seen worse. The authors have my support to take down any fkr who messes with this family with extreme prejudice. Hope the hands ok daddy Doug?, you did good !!!
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Blu and Kyle really need to sort their shit, now's not the time to be arguing. The family is facing a potential threat so now more than ever they need to come together, not break apart. So sad to see them arguing, keep it up and neither of them will get the kids. Finally, Kyle, you're not Rudolph and you didn't put him where he is, he and Penn did all that. He deserves what he gets so none of it is on you. Write back and tell him so.
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I remember Kyle made a similar mistake earlier with the pool and house expansion plans, thought he would have learned from that. Not quite as bad as all the secrets James kept. Still, communication and trust being important in a relationship, I can't really understand Kyle making this major gaff. He's so lucky Blu loves him, but he really needs to quit putting that love to the test.
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Lily on the mend is the best news ever. Not sure why the kept the wedding secret from Blu. I didn't think it too bad a prank, many a Scotsman wear a kilt with pride. Congrats to Kaleb and Davis. Almost forgot, Charlie making a surprise appearance, I don't even remember anything about her and Liv breaking up. Brandon having served his country honorably and now home safe is good, their father the Colonel should just not have bothered turning up.
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Time for Remembrance and Celebration
Goodie commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time for Remembrance and Celebration
A lot of light-hearted moments helped with all the cwap that's going down. Some justice for Kyle and Blu after being falsely adjusted. Cody is definitely a Waters. Despite his being humiliated at being shown how to use a washing machine and despite being specifically reminded not to mix colours with whites, Kaleb still managed to mess it up, enjoy the pink uniforms. Always a delight to visit the Waters asylum, just need popcorn and my life is complete. -
Difficult chapter, well written. Hope springs eternal, so while there's breath there's life. Don't give up the fight.
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I was in fits of laughter but quickly sobered when I realised they'd gone too far and Nan was actually hurt. Nan is tough and will be ok, Levi and Link sleep with one eye open. We never did find out what the three were up to that morning when they tried sneaking in. The fact the boys felt genuine remorse about having to punish the twins just proves they are great and loving dads. Their handling of the situation was fair and reasonable and they have no need to feel bad.
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Lovely chapter. So many cute touches throughout. Bella deserves the best, such an angel, and she dropped the L word nearly making me cry. Maybe the judge could give the boys some advice about the upcoming adoptions. Can't get enough of this awesome story.
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Knew things were going too well. Blu and Kyle did good consoling the kids, Khan and Scarlett played their parts too. Should I be surprised Hisdick is part of a gay-hating religious group? All the ingredients are in place for some major drama ahead. Watch out all, when the family comes together to face these new challenges, the knockers better run for the hills if they know what's good for them.
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OMG best comment lmao As to the chapter, think Levi and Link can claim joint winners for their balloon gag. As for Blu and Kyle, I hope they made up. As far as I can remember I'm thinking this was their first real fight and probably the first time Blu wasn't prepared to let Kyle have his way just to make him happy. I know Blu has always had a thing about throwing money around and maybe Kyle should have thought of that too. Let's get back to happy families.
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What a great first family Xmas. Just love it when Link answers the door, he'd be great at getting rid of salesman and JW's. So much to love about this family and this chapter. I think the first tear started at the ice cream shop when they started calling Blu pop, it was a constant drizzle after that with the occasional chuckle. But I think for this chapter I'm going to give the best line award to Arabella..."You too Uncle Red Fuzzy Underpants".
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To family, and what a great family it is. It's not about blood, it's about the love they have in abundance and are willing to share. They have so much to be thankful for and they deserve every blessing they receive. Great chapter, love this story.
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Lily I think has found in Arabella someone to help fill that empty place in her heart at the loss of Rain, she is absolutely going to dote on her new granddaughter. We all knew the kids were going to be accepted immediately. Hopefully the kids, especially Levi, will fully come to accept their new family. I'm so glad Hisdick is gone, I can just imagine his reaction to Kyle and Blu having the kids and the cwap he would try and pull. I guess to we should be really thankful Liv was on hand to make all this possible. Loved this chapter.
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This was a very moving chapter. Whenever I read about kids in danger in need of rescuing my heart sobs. Thank God for Kyle and Blu and caring people everywhere, willing to put up their hand and do something to make a difference. I know it's a fictional story, but it's still a topic that touches me deeply.
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Glad Doug and Lily are going to get some time to themselves though I'm sure they'll be sorely missed. I suspect after their grand tour they'll likely buy a house near the rest of the family to settle down. I'm wondering if Arabella is the twins older sister and if they might actually be living on the streets somewhere. Eating scraps from the cafeteria and sneaking showers at school, alarm bells should be going off.
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Another fun chapter despite the whole Stanley episode. Then again, it was good to see him put in his place and not just by Blu and Kyle but other staff members as well. I do hope Blu and Kyle can get to the bottom of whats going on the the twins and the girl, something is definitely up there.
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Someone mentioned Lincoln and Levi becoming new additions to the family, I had similar thoughts. Anyways....greats chapters.
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Time Changes Everything~Epilogue
Goodie commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time Changes Everything~Epilogue
Sad for Beth even though I never really got to know her. Little Destiny and Kasey sound adorable. Jared is obviously straight and should remain so, bit creepy people trying to hook him up with the brother in law. -
Things are really looking up for everyone. I can understand Blu's reservations but he needs to understand that he and Kyle are deeply in love and share an equal relationship and money or lack of will never change that. So happy for Steph and Topher, the second baby ( let's not forget Khan ) in the family will bring great joy and excitement ( and a little stress to poor Chris, who, if he models himself on Doug, will make a great dad ) Good news about Kaleb and Davis tying the knot. Now we just need to find someone for the only single left.....Jared.
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Was a beautiful wedding. Don't know how the boys got through it without crying cause I certainly couldn't hold back. With the love and support of all their family and friends their future is assured. They are going to have a ball in Amsterdam and I hope to one day see a new baby brother or sister ( human kind ) for Khan. Congrats to Mr. and Mr. Waters.
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James and his secrets, what else has he got up his sleeves. Since Jared was with Ruby initially I just assumed he was straight, it would be one final nail in Rud's coffin if he produced three gay sons. Glad they could include Jared and Chris in the wedding party. I wonder if they end up asking the judge to marry them unless they've already sorted a celebrant. Should be a great occasion.
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Knowing what Rudpenny were capable of it's little wonder James was so protective of Jared. I'm sure once those two were finally dealt with and it was safe enough he would have revealed Jared, meantime he had a duty and obligation to protect his charge no matter what and he fulfilled that honorably. I'm just as surprised he was even subpoenaed, not sure what if anything he could have brought to the case. All that aside, the most important thing is RudPenny gonna get theirs. The now larger family is together and happy and can now move on and rebuild their lives. Assuming no more nasty surprises.
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Even locked up those two whackjobs are causing as much damage as when they were walking around. For the sake of everyone's sanity I can't wait till this is finally over.
