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  1. That's exactly what I had done until last weekend. The game really opens up from there!
  2. Thanks! It’s definitely going to be my next project. A bit of a different direction than my current work.
  3. I wanted to give a shoutout to a game I’ve been playing lately. I bought Greedfall last November on Black Friday, and this is the first chance I’ve had to really sink some time into it. It reminds me a lot of old school BioWare RPGs, and it has a really interesting fantasy 17th Century colonial vibe. (Think throwing magic spells while wearing Spanish armor and tricorn hats!) If you are a fan of story and character driven RPGs, I recommend checking it out! You also get to romance a handsome pirate which is a nice bonus.
  4. How have you been liking it?! I saw it on Xbox and have it downloading now.
  5. Taran soared through the air in the giddiest of moods. The lights from the city down below glittered like stars, while the warm summer air brought in a melody of peaceful sounds. It was looking to be another quiet evening on patrol, which was almost disappointing. Every nerve in Taran's body felt charged. He needed to find a way to burn off this energy, to do something useful. With an eye on the city center, he rocketed higher into the sky. The winds buffeted around him, responding to his will w
  6. It’s been a rough couple of weeks, mentally. I’m not in the right headspace to get any writing/editing done, so I apologize for that. That being said, the stay at home order had me itching to put my brain to use, so I recently started a Udemy class on character art. Drawing is always something I wished I could do, and I’m really impressed with my progress so far. I like doing the assignments, and it feels like a formal online class. Pretty much the exact kind of distraction in need right now. In order to make things more worthwhile, I have been sketching out Syndicate characters in the hopes of really nailing down how they look in my head. I’ve also got some pretty critical costume scenes coming up, and it’s as good a time as any to decide how those super suits should look! I’m not going to post any spoilers, but there’s one costume that’s already been described in the story. So here’s Silver Cyclone!
  7. Great question! Taran rhymes with Karen.
  8. Happy Sunday, Everyone! I hope everyone is staying healthy and safe. The weather is starting to get really nice here, which is going to make staying at home more challenging. I moved some of my plants outside to the balcony now that it’s warm enough, and even got a little bit of outside writing time in! The Syndicate is still coming along. I have just about everything plotted out how I want to, so now it’s just a matter of getting there. I have a personal goal of getting it finished by the end of the summer, and it looks like I might make it! In addition to Taran & Ronnie’s adventure, I’ve been working on a fantasy story. This actually predates Syndicate by a little bit, at least in the sense that I’ve had a lot of world notes in an old notebook for some time. As pressure to write superheroes mounted, I found myself getting drawn back to mages (isn’t that always how it goes?) The first chapter is still a little rough, but I wanted to post it here. I probably won’t start formally posting it on GA until I get Syndicate finished. ***************** “Your Highness, I really must insist that you wake up this instant!” The voice behind the heavy oak door was muffled, but the panic still seeped through. “Her Majesty has made it very clear that you are to be ready by the time Master Dryden arrives for the ceremony rehearsal!” Grayson did his best to ignore the voice. Perhaps if he stayed silent it would stop. Another call was followed by rapid knocking, and he opened his eyes with resignation. His room was dark save for a sliver of light that shone through a crack in the window shutters. Grayson rose from his bed and opened the wooden slats. A cool breeze swept through the room, and rustled parchment strewn across his nearby desk. The sun had just begun to rise above the Far East wall of the grounds, piercing through the last remaining shadows of night. It was far too early for Grayson’s taste. He normally wouldn’t be stirring for hours. The knocking at the door resumed. With it crept a wave of emotion that made Grayson shudder the moment it was registered. “For Mythra’s sake calm down, Digby. I can feel you having a fit all the way from here.” Another emotion crashed over the first, embarrassment washing away anxiety. “Come in Digby, but only after you’ve gotten a hold of yourself.” The door creaked open to reveal a short, plump man carrying a wash basin and linens. His downward gaze betrayed the bald spot at the back of his thin, straw-colored hair. “I don’t mean to be such a mess, Your Highness, but you do know what an important day it is.” Grayson looked back from his place at the window and gently took the wash basin. Digby had been in the service of the royal family for the entirety of Grayson’s life, with nearly all of that time as his personal attendant. He was a constant positive, if not always calming source of guidance, and despite his tendency of being overbearing, Grayson really was quite fond of him. He closed his eyes and drew up happy, peaceful emotions from his memories. They wavered in the air around him, a subtle shimmer in his vision. With a mental nudge, Grayson pushed them outward into the room. Digby visibly centered himself. “Oh. Thank you, Your Highness. I must admit I rather needed that.” Digby sighed and began to rummage through Grayson’s tall oaken wardrobe. “It’s just that you and the others have worked so very hard. It is only fitting that everything goes perfectly today.” “I appreciate that, Digby,” Grayson glanced across the room at his empty bed before turning once again towards the window. It was indeed an important day, but he wasn’t sure that Digby understood just how much of his life had been leading up to the ceremony. Like any other mage child, Grayson began to demonstrate magical abilities at a very young age. Typically, a Master from one of the five magical colleges would have been fetched to access his abilities for placement in the appropriate school. In Grayson’s case, there had been no need. In the midst of a temper tantrum, he had convinced his nursemaid that her dress was on fire, and she had to be stopped from throwing herself off a balcony into one of the garden pools. The prince was obviously destined for the College of Mind. After the dust settled, the King and Queen urgently placed their son into formal training, as there are few things more disastrous than a four-year-old who can enter the minds of those around them. Once assessed, the majority of mage children were sent from their homes to attend classes with their respective college in Eglium, the capital city of Oprana. The Five Colleges each fostered a school of magic and sought to engender a sense of societal duty in their students. Founded on the belief that magic was a tool for good, the Colleges attracted students from all over the country. Noble families, on the other hand, elected to hire private tutors, sending for a Master to reside in the family estate. As many of these noble families also descended from renowned lines of magic, it allowed for siblings to stay together through their magical education. Grayson, his younger sister Rowan, and best friend and family ward Damien Otterridge were all taught by their respective Masters within the palace walls. Queen Celesta had found it more appropriate for the Prince and Princess to see private tutelage after their royal status proved to be too much of a distraction for other classmates. So for twelve long years, Grayson learned under the watchful eye of Master Dryden. It was during these lessons that he learned to better control his abilities, no longer letting his emotions harm those around him. Master Dryden also oversaw many non-magical aspects of his education, from the history of the Old Kingdoms to ethical applications of his abilities. For a Mind mage in particular, who could so easily influence the thoughts and feelings of others, it was especially important to have an upstanding moral code. Grayson had been instilled with a great sense of right and wrong and knew that the use of his magic for dubious pursuits would have dire consequences from the College. The Council of Five, governors of the magical Colleges, would not tolerate what they called a Mindreaver, a Mind mage who used their abilities to donate and instill terror in the Kingdom. And now, after much hard work and dedication, Grayson was preparing for the ceremony to complete his studies. By the time the week was over, he, Damien, and Rowan would stand before the Royal Council as full mages. “Your Highness, if you would be so kind?” Digby’s voice brought Grayson back to the present. He turned from the window to see that a black outfit had been placed on the bed before him. On the chest the three Suns of Brightmore were stitched in gold thread. The dark sleeves were light enough to still be suitable for the warm spring air. Digby handed him a warm cloth and helped him wash up. He began to talk once more. “We are all so proud of the three of you,” Digby beamed. “It is a joy to celebrate the completion of any mage’s Sixth Phase, but to honor your Royal sister and Lord Otterridge as well… it will make for a happy time in the castle indeed,” Grayson smiled at Digby, and was about to reply when a sudden dizzy spell struck him. He closed his eyes and tried to steel himself, pushing the feeling away with a steady focus. The moment did not escape Digby’s attention. “Your Highness, are you alright?” He eyed the prince with genuine concern. “Yes, there’s no problem,” Grayson replied, recovering from the spell. He reached for the cloth in the basin when the room spun once again. Grayson staggered forward, much to Digby’s alarm. “Prince Grayson!” He cried, stepping forward to steady him. “I’m fine, I’m fine,” Grayson replied, but still reached out to grip his attendant’s arm. He worked to shake his head clear once more. “I’m just lightheaded. Probably just nerves before the ceremony. Would you be so kind as to fetch me some tea? I’m sure I’ll feel much better after I drink something.” Digby paused for only a moment, still concerned. “As you wish, Your Highness. But wouldn’t you like me to help you dress first?” “I can manage that, thank you Digby. That will be all,” The prince’s voice shifted. He wasn’t making a suggestion, but giving a royal order. Digby bowed and shuffled out of the room. Grayson followed him to the door and latched it shut behind the attendant. He rested his forehead on the cool wood and took a deep breath. As he exhaled, the world around him became lighter and dissolved away. He turned back to his bed. The room was no longer the orderly chamber that Digby had seen. A trail of clothes led from the middle of the room to the large canopy bed. A white linen shirt was thrown over a chair. Two pairs of leather boots and leggings strewn across the floor. Grayson’s eyes followed the trail until they landed on the naked figure in his bed. “And just what was all that about?” He asked the young man. “I’m sorry, Your Highness,” the man said, still struggling to untangle himself from the layers of bed linens. “When I woke and saw your attendant at the foot of the bed, I shouted in shock.” “And after you discovered he couldn’t see you, then what?” Grayson’s serious tone was betrayed by his grin, “The more active a person is, the more difficult it becomes to make others believe he isn’t there. It was hard enough calming Digby down while masking you, and that was before you started jumping around the bed.” Grayson finished washing up at the basin and began to pull on the trousers that Digby had laid out. “Next time, I’ll have a much easier time at it if you just stay put, understood, Jayson?” “Jordan…” the voice behind him replied. Grayson closed his eyes with a grimace. The spring’s class of royal cadets had been particularly attractive, and this one wasn’t his first. But they all looked the same in their training uniform. “Yes, Jordan, of course,” Grayson turned to him and flashed the princely smile that was beginning to earn him a reputation with the young men at court whose tastes aligned with his. He had inherited Queen Celesta’s yellow hair and sparkling blue eyes, while being gifted with King Arturo’s stature and ability to put anyone at ease. Even had he not been a mind mage, Prince Grayson Brightmore still would have been a formidable presence. His abilities merely allowed him to better gauge a suitor’s interest, as well as avoid any awkward confrontations the next morning. Cadet Jordan’s eyes lit up at the prince’s smile. He sauntered out of bed, the sheets falling from his tall frame. As he approached, Grayson was hit with a strong, animalistic wave of emotion. He didn’t need to be an empath to know what the soldier was thinking. He had eyes, after all. “Well, we are alone again,” Jordan whispered as he pulled on the trouser strings that Grayson had just tied. “Your attendant won’t be back with that tea for a while,” He pulled the prince closer and began to land kisses on his neck and shoulders. Grayson closed his eyes, and was about to return the favor when the cry of a bird floated in through the open window. He froze as if listening carefully, and then lept towards the sound. “What?! He’s not supposed to be back until tonight!” Leaning out the window, Grayson saw a lone red hawk circling overhead. He whistled to it and the hawk swooped low to the window, crying out again. Grayson turned to the other boy with excitement in his eyes. “Put your pants on, Cadet Jordan, and hurry down to the training ground. You aren’t going to soon forget what you’re about to see!”
  9. I have a lot of little bits and pieces like that. Might be worth sharing here. 😊
  10. Ronnie leaned over the sink rinsing off the last of the dinner dishes. His father was in the living room watching a sitcom on TV, and the laugh track bled into the kitchen under the clatter of plates being stood up in the rack to dry. It had been a quiet evening at the Nolan house. Greg was having an okay day pain-wise, and Ronnie came home to find him firing up the small charcoal grill in the backyard. It had been a pleasant dinner, even as Ronnie wolfed down several burgers, inexplicably famis
  11. It’s no different than the rating systems used in any other form of media. I like to know what I’m getting into when I start a new story, and there is some content that I’m frankly not interested in exploring some times. GA as a whole is pretty good about keeping the super-gross stuff away entirely, so it’s much less of an issue here.
  12. I hope everyone's having a nice weekend. It's been beautiful today, so I made sure to get out for some social distancing-approved fresh air. I've also been working on the next Syndicate chapter. This one was originally written during a NaNoWriMo sprint and hoo boy, does it show. A lot of repeated words and weak adjectives. There's also been some story changes along the way, so I made sure to account for those as well. Hopefully, that will be posted tonight! I post this story on a couple other sites (none of them nearly as fun as this one), and so I also worked on my book cover a bit this weekend. I use Canva, which has an entire suite of book cover templates and royalty-free images. Anyway, here's the old cover. This was done entirely in Canva, and I've never been completely satisfied with it: And the new one! It's a little more dramatic and closer to what I've been envisioning. I drew the mask on Procreate using an image as a reference. I'm very, very new to digital drawing, but pretty tickled as to how that came out. Shading in particular is something that I can manage when I have a reference, but cannot get right on my own. I want to take some online classes so I can work on composing my own drawings. Take care and stay safe, everyone!
  13. (It’s important that you read the title of this blog post like Obi-Wan Kenobi) I’ve been debating whether starting a writing blog was a worthwhile endeavor. On one hand, I think it could be a fulfilling way to share some different aspects on the stuff I’m writing. On the other, perhaps it’s just another hobby that fizzles out the instant life gets busy. Why write this when I should be finishing the book, you know? Being back on this site has been pretty nice so far. I was here back in 2007-2010(ish?) A lot has changed, but there are a lot of things that have stayed the same. It’s sort of incredible how many usernames I recognize from those days. My writing has changed. Back in college it was mostly fanfic (AU Hogwarts Harry/Draco/OC love triangle, woo!) It was fun, and a good way to flex some creative muscles. HP was a nice sandbox to play in, as there’s a lot of things to explore. I also had a couple of half-baked fantasy posts, one of which even featured a boy who could make force fields... how familiar! Now I’m focusing on my silly superhero story, and I’ve been really geeked out by the comments and interactions it’s getting. I’ve been posting on another (non-LGBT specific) site, and the only people commenting there are my IRL friends. My target audience is definitely here. I should have known I’d be back. As of today, I’ve posted just over 39,000 words for The Syndicate. My draft chapters, which gets polished/reworked/discombobulated before landing here, currently sits at 67k. Taking a total shot in the dark, I expect the entire story to clock in around 90K worlds. I’m already taking notes on a potential second story. Ideas for posts: Character timelines (moments mentioned in the book, birthdays, etc) Character Profiles/Visual Guides/Costume Breakdowns Location Inspirations So... yeah! If that seems like something you’re interested in, stick around.
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  15. I have a number of little scenes with the Warren family stashed away in a Word doc. I wrote them pretty early on as to get a better feel for how each family member fit in the unit. There’s a history there that we probably won’t be diving into too much in this story, but I hope I’m doing a good job implying the relationships. Warren is a complicated figure, and we WILL be seeing more of that. Certainly not an evil man, but not the best parent. He’s loving the family the best way he knows how, but it’s clearly not enough.
  16. Nothing new here, unfortunately. Taran used to have a bit of a dad-buffer with Collin, but now he’s dealing with this all on his own.
  17. "What did you two get up to last night, anyway?" Maya asked. Taran shrugged. "Oh, not too much. We ended up getting dinner and exploring the city a bit." "Oh, REALLY?!" "Jesus, calm down." "And how did that go?" Maya crossed her arms and looked expectantly. Taran cleared his mind and thought of television static. The buzzing nothingness helped to block any emotions that might seep over into Maya's awareness. It was an old trick he had learned when they were children, back whe
  18. BKWildenberg

    Five Steps

    *sigh* this was beautiful. Also relatable.
  19. 🔔🔔🔔 I think you can expect that conversation to happen in the very near future. Must be tough to be best friends with an empath...
  20. You might be on to something...
  21. You're too sweet. Thanks again for following along!
  22. Thanks for the note! I’m fairly new to writing more action-y chapters, so I’m really glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the comment about the powers. It was important for me to show Ronnie’s progression compared to others in his group. He’ll be learning and growing as we move forward.
  23. The alarm on Ronnie's phone blared an annoyingly cheerful song. He reached towards the noise with a groan, blindly slapping at the screen until it stopped. Ronnie rolled onto his back and gazed at the ceiling, blinking the sleep from his eyes. As the room came into focus, a wave of excitement rose in his chest. It was time to get back to the Syndicate for more training, and more importantly, back to Taran. The rest of their date had passed quickly. The two remained up in the dome of the old
  24. Thanks so much! A couple fun facts: Visual cues/inspirations for the locations from this chapter come from a couple places. The biggest one being Bascom Hill in Madison, WI, where I live. It’s a downtown landmark, and Bascom Hall used to have a dome on top that was destroyed in a fire back in 1916. The hill is not fun to climb! (https://images.app.goo.gl/XFnN4CxzHxhDZQXb7) The gold dome and lantern cupola take inspiration from lots of different places I like, but accurate interpretation would be the Massachusetts State House. It would be a great place to hang out on a first date ❤️ (https://images.app.goo.gl/TXAVVVcfUvQoL8uw8)
  25. They both have journeys they need to make, and that's what the rest of this story is all about 😊
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