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Everything posted by weinerdog
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This may be a comment for another chapter but I don't think it's fair to blow up somebody's wedding to solve your problems. Of course the timing would have to be right. Would it be before the wedding? Or after at the reception? But if they don't then no s__t hits the fanwhat would a @mastershakeme be without that?🤔
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My Bad
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Of course in that town I bet everyone had thrown a phone at somebody at least once
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I like everyone else took a deep breath and was so relieved it wasn't one of the seahorses.The family of the boy don't know this but he helped save a life today....Owen's. I wonder if the dislike of Margot will lessen now.Yeah she was still stubbornly committed to the plan but today's conversation showed that she had misgivings in the back of her mind. Since no one yet had mentioned this (yet)Ryder and Owen will watch Colin's practice from a distance but that doesn't mean Colin won't see them out of the corner of his eye and perhaps after practice run them down.That could be an interesting scene in it's own right. Not that I'm telling @mastershakeme what to write
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Uh.....wouldn't matter to me.
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I was getting worried about this posting it was getting late.I thought perhaps did this time you pressed "delete" instead of the 'Publish" button
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The "Gay House" could have only come from adults the parents of 'The arseholes" otherwise how the hell do they know where a new kid on his first day live? I was sort of surprised by the Churchie comments.When I was in public school I heard all the inappropriate slurs their really wasn't all that much hate confrontations but we were all casual about using those words in jokes etc. and it ws wrong of course.But Churchie or anything like that was something that would never occur to anybody back then.Not because we were enlighten(We were not) but because it wasn't a big deal to anybody.Our student body has a lot of Latinos and Filipinos a high percentage Catholic group so perhaps thats why.Could it be a more Europe or Australia thing @Mark Ponyboy Peters? Or did all the religious scandals over the years cause that? There was one minor exception but these 3 students were extreme.They constantly preached and it seemed try to recruit people almost like a cult would.I don't think they could even say "pass the salt please" with invoking the name of God.Remember the police show The Mod Squad? It was a white male ,a black male and a woman as the squad.Well this was the make up of these three people so whenever people would see them coming someone would say "Oh look here comes The GOD squad" Get it?🙄
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Chapter Eight: The Kitchen Table
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Eight: The Kitchen Table
The what do you want question Caleb asked Billy and Billy saying I want you to know who you are? I'm thinking Billy and Caleb were intimate and Caleb doesn't remember. -
Hey @Summerabbacat interesting on @Mark Ponyboy Peters story we were talking about Taco Bell. (eerie music)
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Well Owen thinking of being a teacher and if he marries Ryder he could use the name Novak so.... COMING THIS FALL ON THE CW,,,A remake of Mr Novak
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Colin Novak. Novak. Ryder’s last name was Novak. And it only took 24 chapters to find out
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I suspect Lothar in a rage will do something ill advised
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You should have hadinstead
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
Well then Tyler's dad would have had to help he's the only one in town that looks like he could afford a butler -
Oh trust me she'll find lots of reason to spank you
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When @kbois messes up she blames it on her editors or beta readers so since you don't have editors for this you "accidentally" pressed the publish buttonGreat chapter regardless
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
I like your spec. This chapter cleared the EVIL Diana Holloway IMO because I don't think she's smart enough to have Chloe guessing. (they can still get Diana for abuse though) Elena IS smart enough but I hope it isn;t her -
But tomorrow was the Fourth of July. And Ryder was waiting in Youngstown. So this story is almost in real time. The Forth of July weekend was last weekend. Excuse me let me check the police blotter for crimes in the state of Ohio for the previous week....... Okay no public meltdowns leading to arrests of anyone named Donnelly and no arrests of anyone who has a first name of Ryder (we still don't know his last name) OK they haven't found out yet
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“Sounds like a good plan,” Gerald said. “It’ll keep him focused,” Mom added, in the voice she used when she was supporting Dad’s decisions regardless of whether she’d been consulted on them. “Structure is good for young men. That sounds so much like a corporate meeting room where everyone is kissing the Boss ass. "Great idea Boss" "BRILLANT" Owen: learned about casket pricing tiers Ryder: there are TIERS? Owen: bronze, copper, steel, hardwood, and then there’s a premium line with custom interiors I don't think it matters to the deceased what the fricken casket is made out of “See how that works? The key is empathy. You listen first, suggest second. EMPATHY!!!???? Oh yeah that's the Donnelly family all right🙄 so tell me Mr. Donnelly and Eric can tot emphasize with what Owen is feeling now?........Uh Mr Donnelly?....Eric? Aren't you going to answer the question?
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Only you can come up with a scenario where an avalanche is a good thing
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Now HOW would you know that? Unless you wear one during the night and.........Never mind don't answer that
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There are five of them who's the other one?......Do they know that are going to have their own TV show
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"I am not saying we all get into a romantic pile on the bed.......uh and the problem would be.....what? You will not breathe without my permission!" While you're sleeping and they can't get your permission what happens then?
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Yoder would have gone for this anyway but does knowing this would affect Taggert in a negative way make Yoder want it even more? This is 100% wishful thinking on my part and I don't expect this to happen but perhaps Grandpa told Taggert of some deep dark secrets Yoder has or Taggert is aware of inconvenient info that could stop Yoder from getting the ranch
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The kitchen smelled like coffee, bacon grease, toast, and leather. The first three items are perfect after a night with the fourth item doing..........Uh I'll stop it here
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