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  1. Now I know who inspires your bad guys characters @Lee Wilson....YOU!
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    Chapter 13

    Lilith, who had been watching her brother's face flicker through expressions that weren't quite his, snorted. "He's staying, isn't he? The idiot's gone domestic." Well I would stay also if I had the chance. I'm certain Simon cuter than I so I would win out there........If I (Simon) walks out of the shower and I look at myself(Simon) in the mirror that's not perving is it?......I would need to have a talk with Charlie I guess.
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    Chapter 5

    So Wylan is a Lord and nobody really knows what he's done. I compare it to today's Paris Hilton if you ask anyone what her talent is nobody knows. But the big difference of course is Wyland is WAY smarter
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    Chapter 20

    Are you thinking of Ed Sullivan by any chance
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    Chapter 20

    You don't want to watch Lawrence Welk again do you?
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    The Afterglow

    When both Matt and Kitt talked about their past it explained a lot about why they acted the way they did around each other.
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    Chapter 4

    coffee grounds?🤔........I must sometimes put too much in it would explain why occasionally my coffee tastes like mud
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    Chapter 20

    That very similar to a weekly TV show. If the lead actor/actress is in danger we always said you know he/she will get out of it otherwise there would be no more TV show
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    Chapter 3

    If Miss Carlton decides to go with the kissing scene (And she just might be enough of a rebel to do so) Then Brayden would get the part opposite of Charlie by default I would think. ‘Geez, it sure looks like you,’ I heard Danny Southwell ‘Nope. Not me,’ Charlie tried to assure us, but I could see the doubt in the eyes of everyone nearby, who all seemed to do a double-take. We Charlie meet this person on the poster? And I have to wonder could this be a separated at birth thing?
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    Chapter 19

    I guess I was right about the Warlord's contributions
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    Chapter 12

    "Davies, write it up as a gas leak. Multiple gas leaks. With... romantic complications." Okay fine.........Uh how do gas leaks cause people to be naked?🤔
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    Chapter 12

    There are two people with glasses the one with the hair sticking up is Simon.Who's the other? The anti-vegan? You got to narrow it down that describes too many right-winger in the U.S.
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    Chapter 12

    I think I saw that on Food Network. Was it Emeril? Bobby Flay?
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    Chapter 20

    Well I was wrong (again) but it was an awesome scene just the same.And I agree with @Joseph OHara comment on the cliffhanger. I guess the scream will be somebody who has already appeared in the story I can't wait to hear who @Summerabbacat HOPES it is 😄. One thing Killian should take from this walk with Fletcher and Jacy is they might be the perfect people to speak with about Seth. "Wait!" I called frantically. "Do you know who the killer is?" He didn't answer, just continued to fade. "Who is stealing from you? Who is disturbing your graves?" Just like all other scenes I've read or watched involving supernatural communications.These spirts are ALWAYS vague. You came from another dimension to speak with me just tell me already
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    Chapter 20

    I stopped at this point in the chapter to make one of my lame predictions I asked if you had plans for this evening," Fletcher explained with a patient smile. "No, not really." "Then maybe you'd like to accompany me on my after-dinner walk. As much as I enjoy my solitary strolls, I'd enjoy your company even more." I grinned. "That would be wonderful. I could really use some more relaxation time. Things have been pretty hectic lately. But should you be out walking?" Fletcher chuckled. "Do you think this bunch would let me out of their sight if I wasn't? My cardiologist has granted his permission for me to start my evening walks once again." He turned to Jacy. "And what about you? Would you care to join us?" Jacy had been watching us blankly, but at his grandfather's invitation, his expression turned to relief. "Sure." His tone was carefully casual, but I could tell he'd felt left out for a few seconds. My first thought is Fletcher may make a subtle (or not so subtle) comment about perhaps Killian and Jacy being right for each other.Probably just wishful thinking on my part.Now to finish the chapter to if I'm close or most likely wayyyyy far off
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    Chapter 4

    I suspect my coffee cup is just like yours judging by how my kitchen floor and counters look
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    The Call

    But tonight the fear came from somewhere deeper — a fear of what he might become if he ever let desperation take over. I think that reaction was because of what Andy said. Andy may not know it but he did good tonight. I wish him well also. Is the college he attends the same one Kitt and Matt want to attend?
  18. Good for Logan and perhaps even good for Ollie also “I’m probably the only Arlen in this school. You aren’t very bright, are you?” I knew only one Arlen in HS also. Ollie is doing pretty good with his studies but he still has his clueless moments. And while Arlen's comment may be accurate it was rude considering they don't really know each other. “That Kalos guy,” Liam ran a hand through his shaggy blond hair. “He’s a bit of a player with the gay guys on campus.” Exactly the kind who would make a play for Ollie. And if that did happen I could picture Dylan accusing Ollie of something
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    Interlude

    Remember this from last chapter? So the very idea he could think, even for a moment, that Tom would turn on him made him nauseous. It was a feeling he never wanted to feel again. Now that we know of Tom's money problems maybe what happened previously was a false flag operation by Tom (not sure I used the right word) Perhaps Gabriel should still be in the back of his mind wary of him But as Gabriel helped him to his feet, he saw the inside of Gabriel’s suite. “What happened here?” I bet Sergio would have suspected the rock bank in the hotel of doing that (Ala Keith Moon or Joe Walsh) But not Gabriel
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    Interlude

    So we are marching towards Gabriel and Sean's date. But something came up and I had to add a bit of an interlude. Oh you just HAD to🙄
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    Chapter 11

    When I saw the title of the chapter I almost didn't want to read it. But since you have other books already written I guess All is NOT lost. Simon the unlikely hero will find something. "Oh God, this is really good. Is this ganache? This is definitely ganache. High-quality ganache. Where did she get high-quality ganache during an apocalypse? This is artisanal. I can taste the cocoa nibs. There's a hint of raspberry. Raspberry! In an apocalypse! Who's supplying her? Is there a chocolate fairy?" "It's really good chocolate. Like, really good. I think this is single-origin. Maybe Madagascar. There's a slight berry note. A very sophisticated berry note. Whoever sourced this knew what they were doing. This is award-winning chocolate. I've read about this brand. It's won prizes." Can Morgan McNutjob (Not her real name) do that with pizza also?🤔.....If she can she can take over my town
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    Chapter 3

    It keeps you from going insane.........But not your stories
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    Chapter 3

    The two of them had abandoned the top bunk idea after the first night, when the half rotten bunk had threatened to collapse under Darien. And if they squeezed, the bottom bunk made do. Much to Sir Val’s ever growing amusement at catching them sharing every morning. BUT IT"S NOT LIKE THAT
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    Chapter 3

    So that's how you get both stories posted without a hitch
  25. Sounds like Susan and Stephen are going to give Kitt time.But Kitt did make one small mistake wouldn't the postcard be marked Riverbend? He could have had Tom mail it from another location.
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