I think @akascrubber thought about informing Chistian about everything is a good idea. The fact that the bad guys knew about the cottage implies to me someone in that group is from from France.As awful as this is to say could it be someone with a connection to Armand and Colin's circle of friends who was privy to conversations about stuff going on thier lives and their kids lives?
I loved the chapter. I have no idea which direction you went in this story needless to say but my gut feel tells me that Orson is going to be an asset to the visiting kids
No IMO you didn't telegraph it. It was a good thing Lacey wanted Dylan to stay instead of taking Dominic somewhere.
Does Microsoft really pay that much???
In San Diego there is literally only one Bowling alley in town(Way back when there used to be quite a few )and I guess that Bowling alley may still have leagues but needless to say it's not too common around here. Judging by your chapter Bowling Alleys are more popular in other parts of the country.
I almost forgot about this .The families that delayed bringing thier pups to Asa. What the hell can be more important than getting your pups cured??????( Just had a horrible thought is Huntington somehow responsible for that?)
Even without @Mrsgnomie spoilerish comment I knew something was going to happen things were going WAYYYYY!!!! to good can't have that in a @kbois story can we?
Well I think this proves there is a Huntington mole either in Giles pack or Sebastian's pack or maybe both.
I literally saw the the notifcation just pop up and immediately four comments from the dynamic duo (Or is it the Omnipotent One) I bet they'll be four more comments after I post this
Very interesting group of kids. You said one of them will be featured heavily in upcoming chapters.i'll take a guess (I'm usually wrong) I'm going to say it's Elias
All great points by @Anton_Cloche I would add that it probably had nothing to do with who Sébastien dad is for they let him off at the hospital Airport security cams usually cover everything so this was either a blind spot or a cam was disabled.Other wise there would be a lead they can follow.Still checking hospitals for unidentified children you would think would be something they would do.
Jordan wasn't shy but William was stuck up does he think it's gay to see a boy naked? I wonder if thats going to be an issue with them in the future
I wasn't sure whether to leave a love reaction or a tear reaction . I'll will be interested is to see your take on what the protagonist is thinking throughout the story
How can I be jealous of a humble guy like you. BTW not only did you do countdowns before @chris191070 you also used the exact same GIF he used when he was First on a page........coincidence?????🤔
Sort of a cliffhanger Alone in the house waiting for Pierre to wake up. With nobody but Armand around perhaps Pierre will open up as to what happen but maybe after the hangover
When I first heard the title of the chapter I was worried it had something to do do with Robbie's inheritance I was relieved that wasn't case. I am thinking he might have to somehow access some of that money to help Sue out .I don't buy Dan's BS of no money. He is being a deadbeat dad.
It sounds like Rory is giving some hints but is stopping short of what he really wants to say.