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Very interesting to see Perry was struck by Kyan the first moment he laid eyes on him way back when. So Jessica knows? And it seems like she against the idea. As an aside the timing of this chapter is very unfortunate givin what is happening over there now.There was no way you could have known that when you wrote that chapter. Speaking of unusual happenings here in San Diego yesterday had its first hurricane since 1939. We got off pretty cheap considering but other parts of the state got hit hard.Did Oregon get any bad weather from that @Mrsgnomie

You're telling your beta reader to Re read it 🤔

Now you can still say technically @kbois was the first chapter comment

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As soon as Josh said "It's a long story " I thought to myself chapters almost over so we won't know anything until chapter two.But you did set the stage well .Things must have been really tense for Josh if he just out of the blue stopped talking to Ethan. So Grandpa has no phone? Pretty sure there is no TV or internet either and this talk of the woodshed? Sounds old school.Is this set in the past? Nothing has been revealed yet but I'm guessing being gay is part of the issue and this guy he mentioned Mike has something to do with things

I sure hope Bruce Jr. either has misinterpreted things or he has another reason to say to Matt what he said. It's pretty harsh if the parents really blame him 11 years old at the time for his brother death

Spitakchching- Giggling and chucking while doing a spit take

First a couple of thoughts Kristin messaged me today, showing me an ink-wash she just completed. It was pretty freaking awesome! She drew a wolf laying in a forest. Is Kristin one of @kbois younger relatives. Gavin wanted to share a shower stall at the gym? Wow gutsy especially considering it was Alabama. That Christmas may never be topped. Very well done @astone2292

Are you nuts? The whole time they are at college until they graduate. And @astone2292 can take as many stories as he needs to do that

I knew there would be culture shock for Charles. But not to that degree he'll soon learn he's in the best place possible

I think Bryan explained it as well as he's capable of .Kenny should try to have empathy for Bryan's unique situation.

I'm worried now that Ant connection to Uncle Marco and the arrest might spook Atlantic records perhaps they will insist that they get a replacement for Ant hope I'm wrong🤞I can think of some other possible fall outs . You don't mess around Mick Jones???? There is a Mick Jones in the band The Clash thats who this dumb ass thought of at first. So that added "Flirtin With Disaster" I don't think that was because I mentioned it but still cool

Hope you reconsider because this is a good story.Lots of stories ,TV shows ,movies etc. use this fast forward technique I don't know why that upsets you

What you didn't see or something?I'm looking at it now

“You can't talk to me like that. I'm your father.” How delusional is Calvin that he thinks he deserves any kind of respect. Bryan should talk to Diego or even Steve about it but two people who should know nothing about it is Caleb and Luis.Caleb only because height tell Luis and Luis shouldn't know because of his temper he might track down and beat the crap out of Calvin .Calvin could then have some kind of leverage such as if he can talk to Brayan he won't press charges against Luis etc.

Did the Facebook request from Calvin come before or after the encounter at the hotel? You broke the third wall again funny stuff.But I wonder how TPTB at GA will feel about being referred to as an obscure website😄

HEY ARE YOU SAYING @kbois IS DAFFY?????..........ok

oops smartphone again

Why did Armand deny that was him in the newspaper? Was he afraid that guy was going to talk his ear off or something?

"Great minds "work" alike" Especially when you're the same person

@kbois wasn't the first comment on page 3. She's probably pissed now.

Boy so much to talk about here before I say anything else I have to say I was impressed with Blake on one thing. I thought a fight would break out when a member of the football team and his girlfriend danced up beside us. He leaned over and snarled, “Fags!” I had to grab Blake and hold him back. “Mother fucker,” he muttered. “I’ll show you what fags can do to pussies like you.” “Bring it on,” challenged the boy. People around us stopped dancing. Mr. Stevenson walked up and asked if anything was wrong. The boy walked away, and Roni assured him that everything was okay. Blake showed me some guts there As for the rest of it I predicted the dance was going to be a doozy but it was the afterparty instead. Blake and Craig acted so reckless .First Blake making Seth go into the poolside bathroom with him where Craig could easily see them and then Craig making the same mistake moments later by going in there where Stacy can see him. Craig was drunk obviously because Seth could smell the alcohol. Blake had to be drunk also because just a few chapters ago he refused to make love too Seth. Seth had said Jerry snuck alcohol in at the dance Blake must have had some then it would explain him trying to give Seth head while he was driving(BTW I guess Blake never saw the movie The World According To Garp anybody who saw that would know what I'm referring to). While Stacy had a right to be upset she didn't have the right to scream at the top of her lungs what they were doing so all the crowd would hear outing them in the process sure she was drunk also but I think she would have done that anyway.( I almost wished Craig had hit Stacy with his car as they were driving away....almost) I really was worried that Craig was going to crash the car @Ronyx had done this kind of thing before in previous stories .Thankfully Seth talked him down. Now comes dealing with the fall out but there could be one more explosive incident to come.Seth and Craig are at Blake's secret place so it's quite possible if not probable that Blake will be going there walking in on them

Wow is the Earth still on its axis?

I bet when @FanLit posted comment number 24 @kbois went " Hey If I post the next two comment I'll be first on page 2.She's on a roll .Page 3 anyone?

Take this with a grain of salt this is coming from someone who's made every mistake a person can make (Yeah I know big surprise) But why not just tell Max. I guess Kyan doesn't want to hurt him but it's either hurt him now or hurt him later and this lie makes it worse. Am I missing something? What Perry says about the friends part makes sense but I'm afraid he has doubts