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Oh that's @kbois communicating with her editors

And I suspect you don't mean nuts as in crazy

That's two

We boring Yanks call them popsicles

"Orange," I said immediately. "Anyone who chooses Lemon-Lime is a psychopath." Hey Jimmy I'll have you know I like Lemom-Lime....AND I"M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!(disclaimer: joke)

When I read the synopsis me being a Yank I had no idea what frozen lollies meant.....And no I'm not going to say what I thought it was

I'm only part way through the chapter but the way you described the bus ride I had to turn on the fan

One thing to consider .Yes Levi should own up to his part but perhaps not mentioned the others involved that could lead to retribution. Also speak to his friends (his real friends) first before Matt

Quite the cliffhanger @Mark Ponyboy Peters have you've taking @kbois lessons.....Or does she take lessons from you?

No you didn't of it....... You already wrote it a chapter huh?(Or @Mrsgnomie put it in there while you weren't looking)

Deniability of what?

It's a good thing Cal (in a legal sense)has control over Orion because Orion telling Julian this would have been risky. If it ever got to legal action a good lawyer could argue that one of Halcyon former properties influenced Julian wouldn't that be some kind of legal precedent. The main threat is Ben's family especially his Mom. If she even HINTS at filing any kind of complaint if I'm Ben I would tell her if you do this we're through and bring up what happened with Brandon at the same time.

Hire Gett, Fuct and Stayfuct. Now that's one I never heard before .Is it an original? Very good😄

You'll know when I type That's two

That's one.BTW when am I telling you these things?

Eric might be in the position where doing the legal thing might F up M/M as there may be a warrant out for him.And anything else he does like keeping him on the ranch would be illegal.He absolutely can't be enrolled in Troy's school and if Eric wanted to adopt him the uncle stuff would have to be settled first. As much as I would be scared sh--less to do so its time to talk to a lawyer

And I bet 25 of those will be @chris191070 asking for the next chapter

As soon as Morgan/Miles what started telling Eric and Carson his story I just knew the chapter was ending before we would hear the response. Obviously Eric is going to respond positively otherwise the story ends here. But what does Eric do? If he notifies anybody that Miles is 16 then there is the problem with the situation with his uncle.Does Miles keep working imagine the mess if a 16 YO Miles gets hurt like he almost did today. BTW while we of course knew a stampede can be dangerous the way you described it was very suspenseful

I don't do explicit scenes featuring those who are under 18. It's a hard line for me. It was also hard for Morgan/Miles and Troy

mon Dieu. Je me serais chié dessus,” she said with a straight face. Did you get that from our residence nerd? I figured you would know the French word for that.

When @Mark Ponyboy Peters asked last chapter what you're posting scdedule was you responded Wednesday and Saturdays. Roughly around 8am-ish EST. I always wondered how many minute was in a "ish" now I know in your case it 55 minutes....ish. BTW good morning❤️

If the romance box is checked and the unit (Julian) has an...uh ..unit. What substance would be squirting out of if.....

Hey. About next week. Courtney and I have a thing on Saturday. If Kevin cancels on the girls can I bring them by? I need to know by Thursday. This comment would make more sense if I had said it last chapter because it looks like some progress was made but here goes Kevin always bailing out should be an issue between Kevin and Diane but it isn't because everyone Kevin does it's Ben that has to cover.Kevin looks like a lame father who can't be bothered with HIS kids. I see a scene where Julian asks Sophie why her Dad is always busy and Sophie saying something like Diane always says "Okay I'll get Ben to do it" So does Julian get involved in that? On one hand it's supposed to Diane's business but it does affect Ben which is Julian's purpose for being there. Now that may be a complication as far as the company goes.

GO ANDREW!! although there are still some chapters to go so I'm sure Merrick has a counter. There is no doubt Tanaka can match Merrick in ruthlessness but can he be that evil? Where as Merrick would not think twice about killing someone what is Tanaka view I'm know he could if he absolutely had to but would he if he doesn't have to?