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  1. It was a crude, wireframe diagram of two human skeletons, rendered with terrifying anatomical inaccuracy.Where did they get that from......A skelton porn mag?
  2. "You're going to walk through a highly fortified Veth mothership wearing nothing but a gun, a backward hat, and a pair of dirty underwear?" I don't know know pretty much a typical day for Mickey
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    Chapter 17

    This chapter and the two before it were heartbreaking.Tam and Connor really did it for me
  4. Does he have a chaturbate account? I want to see this mighty Glorb.(Hey he's 18)
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    Chapter 16

    Hey Wylan you may be a prophet but @Topher Lydon is the author so in this case he outranks you
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    Chapter 16

    I know Raymond's men are basically lunatics but I wonder were Bible's written yet at this time? If they were I know they weren't massed produced.yet. I just wonder even in their deranged starving state they have to know what they are doing goes against any teachings of God
  7. Here's what I don't get Kyle has a human form except for the antennae and he communicates in a language that can be translated so why do these guys think of him as a pet? The Veth might be advanced but they are as ignorant as the most racist human. I want Mickey and Isaiah to get back together but maybe still have Kyle be part of the crew
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    The Stand Off

    Outstanding story .Only one tiny flaw.Remember the scene in Spacebars where the combination was 1-2-3-4? And Dark Helment said 'WHAT KIND OF COMBINATION IS THAT? That's what I thought of when Jerry typed the combo 9-1-1😄
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    Chapter 20

    I got itWhen they go to trial send Noah's attorney that chapter that should help
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    Chapter 15

    I didn't know he was a hooker
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    Chapter 15

    I hope they got to Ishan in time
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    Clarity

    The Senator might get killed because some dumb ass 15 year old didn't see where he was going
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    Chapter 19

    If Brett really didn't burn down the tree house then his anger is justified. But if he did shut the F up hypocrite. Although I do think Colt and Noah shouldn't have done it. The customer who ordered the slightly scrambled eggs probably ordered eggs sunny side DOWN and then complained the yolks were broken
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    The Call

    You packed a lot in 1,209 words in this chapter
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    The Call

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    Chapter 14

    "God has struck the infidels! The city is broken! The Lord has delivered the fire of heaven upon the wicked! Praise the Lord! Praise the Lord!" What are all of you going to do when you find out Ishan did it?
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    Chapter 14

    What are we to make of this post? He Will Drown in Dust.......But he will have his coffee first
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    Chapter 5

    Having never to experience something like that from Either Matt's or Levi's point of view you covered things I would have never thought of. You don't have to comment on this if it's too personal but it sounds you or someone close to you went through this
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    Chapter 18

    @mastershakeme said she already finish the story depending on what she wrote you might have her rewriting that part. That means the story might be delayed.....gee THANKS @drpaladin(kidding😄)
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    Chapter 18

    Colt didn’t know if he could go through with it. He didn’t know if he even wanted to. But he knew he’d keep planning, keep researching, keep showing up at midnight, because Noah needed him to. I see that as an encouraging sign that Colt going to pretend to be on board with this while trying to think of another way. Colt breaking his promise not to tell anyone what George is doing is far better than murder even if George does deserve it. But who does he tell? If it's Michelle she may try a conventional way to deal with it even you go around the corrupt sheriff the authorities have a spotted record in dealing with this kind of stuff. Do you tell Vincent? He's the one who said stuff about doing something you can't come back from unless he or his partner have a devious mind and have have another plan to set up George I'm not sure.I'm 50/50 about telling Vincent. The only other I would even consider is Amy.She sympathetic toward Noah and seems have a level head. Any idea she could come up would still be a hell of a lot better than murder.
  21. Most of the staff lack personality. I have to hire it separately." Unlimited snacks and The Gremlin is there.....A salary would be cheaper The Gremlin tried to wake you up this morning by sitting on your face. Best way to wake up...er...uh....So I've been told
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    Chapter 13

    With Libbet on their side the enemy is toast Give my warmest, deepest affections to the terrifying woman For Libbet that's romantic talk.....Why do I think there's a future for those two
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    Chapter 13

    I'm taking a guess here the solution might involve Ishan
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    The Talk

    We needed more Little B... Hope he shows up in the next chapter. You mean you don't know yet?......And you're the author?🤔 Who is buried in Grant's tomb? What color is George Washington's white stallion? These questions and more will be answered. Cool I always get laughed at when I ask people those questions
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    Chapter 1

    Since when does @mastershakeme stories have anything to do with reality🤔 (kidding😄)
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