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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I guess I'm going to be the first to do this ..Morgan/Miles.. I just going to call him Miles but lets hope Troy doesn't slip and call him that within earshot of anybody
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    The chicken sandwiches Mrs. P made were still warm. Mine oozed with gooey cheese and grilled onions. Oh man @kbois is killing me
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    ZZZZZZZ- wha? Oh yeah you're right but it's not like I stayed up all night to make sure
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    Good Morning😀 (yeah believe it or not I'm resisting the obvious)
  5. "Yeah. Decent." Cal took another sip of wine. "In a company where decent isn't always the default. That comment and the conversation Orion and Julian had tells there's going to be problems. Julian paused. He hadn't thought of it that way before, because loneliness required a frame of reference that he hadn't had until three days ago. In the facility, the absence of connection was just the default. If Halcyon decides to remove Julian than could be devastating for him.I don't know if there would be any recourse because I assume legally Julian is not human so no rights and no laws being broken He does not challenge. He does not push back. He does not tell anyone they're wrong.Well sadly that is going to delay the stuff Julian is going to say about the Mason,Rachel and Mom situation
  6. First week. Day two, maybe? I come home from the grocery store, and Orion has reorganized my entire kitchen The only reason why that was a problem is Cal probably couldn't find where Orion put the Twinkies
  7. The only flaw in the chapter is Marcus got off too cheap. Topher write it so Marcus cellmate is Bubba. Now that this part of his scheme failed what will Merrill do to counter?
  8. I'm surprised you didn't make this connection.Marcus was acting like a Therapist but he was really The-rapist
  9. Been there done that @spyke
  10. Now all we have to do is wait for @Mrsgnomie to comment
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    I Swear that isn't what I meant to text that time
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    Geez she's such a slacker huh?
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    When you mentioned Romania the date coincides with a story my Mom told. She was in a movie house with her sister in Romania all of a sudden the lights went out. A military person told the moviegoers they had to evacuate they were taken to a truck and transported to Austria. My Mom and My Aunt were the only ones in the family that got out of there before everything hit the fan
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    Why does Esca need Kevin's help🤔 he already knows Andy is here
  15. weinerdog

    The Union

    I think the Goblins,Dwarfs and Trolls made it happen
  16. That's guaranteed because your new chapter will be dropping
  17. So Julian wanted to hold Ben's hand? So does that mean Julian has an arousal program? ...If Ben is a hottie and his towel accidentally drops after a shower Julian might short circuit
  18. Next time you write a kitchen cooking scene @mastershakeme looks like you'll have to do more research😄
  19. The other two reviews pretty much said it all perfectly.I'm just adding another 5 stars so people will notice and say " Hey three five stars reviews this must be good"
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  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    What's that saying about working in mysterious ways
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 22

    Nope although I lean toward Casey being bad news it would not shock me if it turns out he isn't. That how well @Mark Ponyboy Peters has written this story
  22. Was so sad to hear about Darius a true victim from the get go Why did Torys LLP collapse? Simple it was @Topher Lydon way of getting Will in the loop to help Jason. Ok maybe that wasn't the reason but it looks like things might happen that way
  23. I love you, but there’s no way I’d crash a classic Mustang into a field, nearly freeze us both to death, just to see you naked." Andrew said that like it was something irrational .....I don't get it🤷‍♂️
  24. weinerdog

    Knots

    I was thinking the same thing maybe the joking around is a defense mechanism. Will Danny and Ryan fooling around on Jake start something where Jake and Danny have harsh words? If that happens that could trigger something in Danny
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 22

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