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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    The debate was hard for Taine ..no no what I mean is....In politics its not good to appear stiff..NO! NO! I mean......I'll get back to you
  2. It explains why Dylan seemed to be bummed when Peyton came over. I remember when Ollie told Dylan he is gay he sort of had a standoffish reaction .I wonder if his mixed signals have something to do with his family. When Peyton mentioned she had a twin sister who is a lesbian I thought she and Ollie had a basis for a friendship sort of like kindred spirits.But at the end of the chapter we found out she had sex with Toby.It seems like after flirting with Ollie and then finds out he's gay it's like she then thought "Hey his twin brother is straight!!!!. Something seems shallow about that
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 44

    Well if you were a stand-up comic and got the reaction you got here so far well.....Let's just say nobody would be rolling in the aisles laughing (I still love you)
  4. . But something in him needed to see the park again with the new knowledge he carried, to understand the place he had stumbled into by accident. I was so worried Kitt was going to cross paths with the wrong kind of person luckily Tom and Harbor came along instead.I hope Kitt isn't still curious about the park even if he is only going there to observe it can be still dangerous,
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 44

    Anybody recall any author around here getting nothing but angry chapter reactions? As I'm typing this that's All there is so far
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Sounds like if you want people to know about something tell Sarah and swear her her to secrecy
  7. weinerdog

    Prologue

    I'm really curious who these blackmailers are and what is their motive. It was Tim and him. Gee you're a poet and you don't even know it
  8. weinerdog

    Prologue

    Interesting where I live there's an area called Hillcrest and it just happens to be the gay neighborhood in the area🤔
  9. weinerdog

    Prologue

    Get well soon
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Never having to experience this my first thought is buying a new property to build and open a new store would certainly keep quiet time at minimum but there is still a lot of time to be alone with your thoughts. Can't wait to see how this develops
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    He had other appointments tonight. A trans man named Alex was about to wake up in the body of his neighbor, a loudmouthed jock named Darren who'd spent the past year making Alex's life hell. Darren, meanwhile, would be waking up in Alex's body—a body he'd mocked, objectified, and dismissed as "less than." Now that sounds like a good story in it's own right The one running for Parliament on a platform that, from what Taine had gathered, consisted largely of blaming everyone else for everything. So in other words your typical run of the mill political campaign The last time you tried, you set fire to the toaster." Just like Andrew in Carter's Echo.....are those two related🤔
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Last chapter comment you wrote i am already working on a second one of these: Charlie vs the Coven of Love So it sounds like Old Charlie will not return to his body .It will be interesting to see how you handle this
  13. weinerdog

    Prologue

    I love how this is starting. Are we going to have scenes of Charlie in Professor Taine's body?
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Then I remembered that Lily had no gifts, and Jacy's didn't deal with the dead. That makes me wonder if Larry might visit Killian. The sound of his hand connecting with Healy's face was unmistakable, however. I always loved Jacy as a character but from here on out he's my favorite character no matter what
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    I know @Josh Aterovis has all of this already written but he can edit this to have someone call him that😄(perhaps you can say the other word besides backside)
  16. weinerdog

    How It Began

    Look ,But Don't Look, Look. In other words who you (and me)did in the PE showers
  17. weinerdog

    How It Began

    for those of you who are younger this a 45 record You might have seen something bigger than that.That would be an album or LP because it could play multiple songs .Can you imagine that?
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    A lot can happen in two years and a lot HAS to happen in two years. But the right people are there to MAKE it happen. Thank you sir
  19. How long can this go on? Matt… you’re the only person he trusted. The only place he felt safe.” This tells me Kitt's Mom knew how overbearing his Dad was but yet did nothing
  20. This would pretty much have to be under the table because Kitt hasn't had to fill anything out or jump through any hoops if he doesn't give a name or gives a phony name it will be that much harder to find him. This being a Mexican restaurant and how lax they seen to be it reminds of a time I went to a taco shop I frequented.This one time there was only a boy behind the counter and it wasn't an adult midget it WAS a boy.Looked to be 10 years old or so.I was thinking to myself this has to be illegal as hell he was the only one in here .I was hungry so I ordered a burrito.The kid had to stand on a milk crate to be able to cook at the grill. Guess what? It turned out to be one of the best burritos I ever had.Still is to this day
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Status quo isn't working for him so........ Jamal's first kills and justifiable ones
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    "Then why not come to me up front? Just like you did when the site was first disturbed? Perhaps Fletcher would not have been attacked if he had....jackass. "Either way, you're no longer welcome here. I will not cooperate with you any further, and I've instructed my crew not to speak to you." spoken like someone who has something to hide. I really hope Lily ISN't diplomatic when they speak to Healy.If Healy is rude to her I hope Jacy steps in and says that will not be tolerated
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 38 S3

    “I’m surprised they didn’t call for a padded vehicle so they could take her to the funny farm,” That might still happen if @Bill W writes it that way (hint,hint) I think it's a shame Louella wasn't invited to the wedding.......
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 43

    “I was going to sell everything on Facebook Marketplace, but that takes time and effort. This’ll be faster.” OMG time and effort????? We can't have that now can we. I see yet another possible hurdle Imani might notice the cut marks on Jesse
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    If Aidan found condoms what would he label those?
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