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    Chapter 16

    Bridgit Foxwell? That sounds like a less risqué name of some of the Bond girl characters remember Pussy Galore and Molly Goodhead? But those ladies were smart so the similarities end there.Bridget sounds like the stereotypical blonde "Did you win the lottery and not tell me? You just bought the building and had it renovated, and now you want to buy me an expensive desk too?" "How about if you leave the finances to me, huh?" I don't think that exchange was put there for no reason. You don't get rich from a policemen pension and of course it's possible his P.I. business has done well and he invested wisely. But I hope you're not setting us up for in a future story or maybe even this one that Novak is involved in something hinkey. When we reached the parking lot, Jacy caught my arm. "Hey, Sherlock, you want to take my bike?" I bit my lip. The offer was tempting, but I knew it wasn't a good idea. "Not this time. We'd better use my car." "That's cool. I was just offering." Me thinks Jacy wanted an excuse for Killian to have to wrap his arms around him.....WHAT!? Okay,okay that's something I would think of only I would ask if he would like to drive so I would be the one wrapping my arms around him.
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    Chapter 14

    Your mismanagement of these Pieces has jeopardized the integrity of the entire Game. There are a lot of words you can say in regards to the game......Integrity is ABSOULUTELY not one of them
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    Chapter 14

    The evidence was fabricated with chilling ease: a timestamped photo, pulled from a compromised school security camera feed, showed a figure matching Justin’s build entering the autoshop after hours. A can of accelerant, purchased with a pre-paid card whose transaction record was digitally planted at a gas station Justin frequented, would be found near the scene. A single, stray hockey keychain, identical to the one on Justin’s bag, would be ‘discovered’ in the aftermath. I don't know it's all circumstantial a good lawyer could stop this in its tracks......Does Andy know these guys
  4. WOW!!!! finally.I initially was mad at Tom but when he said why he did what he did it made sense. Well it looks like there isn't a way back to Lakehurst at least not a way that's apparent as long as Stephen is in the picture. Kitt could get a scholarship if he could get back to swimming it is still early in the new school year.But how? Can't wait to see how it all happens. And speaking of Stephen I thought maybe last chapter he was slowly moving in the right direction but then this happened “Listen here, young man,” Stephen snapped. “The reason Kitt left in the first place was because of you and the influence you had over him. So do me a favor and stay away from my family. I don’t need you telling me what to do,” he said in a low voice, pointing his finger at Matt. He still as big of Jackass as ever . I would hope Stephen could be put up on some charges because he had to of broken some laws. “He will come to his senses soon. Matt's mom is quite naive
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    Chapter 1

    Gee..........which part?
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    Chapter 1

    I don't do that with a keyboard but some of my hand writing resembles that
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    Chapter 1

    Ok be honest how many of you looked up "使用权.
  8. The solution you wrote is the best one especially since Maggie said "Well, if my son wasn't a homophobic jerk, but before she said that I had other thoughts in mind.You never gave any details like if the house was close to being paid off or if Phil had any savings or investments (Of course he would have to be a non imbecile to have that so probably not) even if the house was paid off I think you have to be a senior to do a reverse mortgage.
  9. Well, it looks like Sam and Virgil can resume the sexual part of their relationship. That is of course unless or until I think of another twist. Why that thought never crossed my mind
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    Prologue

    Taine commented, wholly invested in his boyfriend’s career, and an avid amateur wrestling fanatic. (It definitely had nothing to do with the shorts his boyfriend wore in the ring.) Although the shorts don't hurt
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    Chapter 15

    OH MY! Good catch. That would make sense. That would be yet another reason to not go with Micah......You know there are times that love doesn't conquer all and this looks like one of these times
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    Chapter 13

    They were cheering for the tragedy, placing bets on the outcome. The sheer, inhuman cruelty of it filled him with a rage so vast it was dizzying. “The one that protects the school from liability, Take those two statement from parts of this chapter. These evil morons should realize a suicide could bring unwanted scrutiny to what happened which could lead back to them. They should stop this to cover their own miserable ass but it looks like they are out of control
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    Chapter 49

    Please have Bobby plan sone very stupid revenge to where he gets arrested.....Perhaps he and Erin can be cellmates. I think it would be cool to have Imani show up in typical metalhead fan gear
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    Chapter 49

    Did you miss the flight? If you did at least it was for a good reason........ Maybe you can bill @mastershakeme for the ticket😄
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    Chapter 12

    No you didn't you rented for the first time yesterday when you turned 18
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    Chapter 15

    Micah's pulling out all the stops. "I just talked to a buddy of mine, who said he can qualify you for your gun permit if you meet him at the range around ten. Would that work for you?".....Why do I think Killian is going to have to use a gun before this story is over "No, but I've always wanted to be a PI. I love true crime. Are you sure I couldn't have a gun?" I bet she was disappointed when she saw Novak didn't look like Magnum P.I.
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    Chapter 6

    Well Lonnie's better then I could ever be, These conversations with Leo I would always be replaying especially the line “I didn’t choose to leave you.”
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    Chapter 16

    The warlords info might be the difference
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    Chapter 13

    So what happened to Taine's old residence?
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    Chapter 13

    Tell her what?🤔
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    Chapter 12

    The GM knows every one of Tim's moves and Tim knows the list of possibilities is short so you would think he could figure it out. they’re always timed perfectly. When your dad is out of town. During your debate finals. Right after a big win or a loss, when you’re emotionally vulnerable. They know your schedule, your life, like they’re living it with you.” Doesn't all that sound like it's Tim's Dad? Or perhaps someone who is always around Tim's Dad🤔
  22. Actually the clues are right there ,Bryan breaks up every two month like he's hoping THIS girl will ignite the feelings that he hasn't been getting from the other girls. The consider the alternative isn't in Bryan's vocabulary yet. If Bryan had just went with Cooper's kiss back when they were 12 at least Bryan wouldn't be kissing like a cold fish
  23. This is the first time I sampled this author I like what I'm reading.'m following the Author and the story
  24. While all this is happening has ANYONE reported Kitt as a missing person or a runaway? If it was mentioned I missed it.Kitt is under 18 right? So what gives?
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    Chapter 14

    You mentioned your age once and you have some years on me but I was in the same general neighborhood.You know rotary dial phones, rolodexes only 3-5 TV channels available.....I bet some readers are wondering "What are those two senile idiots talking about?"
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