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Thankfully Nick's Mom is a doctor she may have done something at just the right moment that was crucial. I'm so impressed at how you wrote this chapter. “So, you think one day you and Jack could be in there? Immortalized forever in the sacred scrolls of gay internet fanfic?” Yeah they are definitely there and guess what Tommy......So are you.
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… Ace was so good at standing up for himself and dumping Carter, will it last? It sounds like Ace is not going to say anything about Carter.But Carter up to now seems like someone who won't take no for an answer.So if he continues to pursue this Ace may have no choice but to send Carter to that prison cell with his name on it. If misery loves company the Ace and Leo are perfect for each other now
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I thought you were either imaginary or, worse, a girl Brad must have crushed on, never to have his feelings requited. Shall we start?” Is Bella saying more than she intended to say? Also, in case you believe things have been smooth sailing... there will be a first 'rattle' soon. Things will happen, I promise! Well I would say Luke showing up at the wedding in a tutu qualifies but somehow I think it will be more than that you’d think we were rehearsing for a funeral, not a wedding.” I've been to a funeral rehearsal .....Whats that you say?....There's no such thing as a funeral rehearsal?.....I wondered why I was all of a sudden a suspect in a murder investigation🤔
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You did a great job on establishing the characters especially Helen. What can I say? I think this one has it all really. Romance! Sex! Action! Suspense! Murder! Rent boys! Bent cops! Politicians on the take! And more! You have been warned! Please enjoy! So in other words this story has everything you can see in every big city on the planet Earth on a daily basis
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My guess would be The Mardi Gras Murders have already started only The media hasn't dubbed them the Mardi Gras Murders yet and the murders must have a gay element to it.
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On him? OK. On his music? YOU'RE SICK!!!!(kidding 😄)
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Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
“I know why they were here,” she said. That tells me there is going to be some kind of revelation that Noah is unaware of and I bet has something to do with Noah graduating -
Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 5 The unwanted visitors
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Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
Normally I would be steaming mad at what the 4 bullies did but in @Lee Wilson stories the payback is worse then what they did initially so I look forward to that. Next up - “Suits and Birthdays” I eagerly anticipating that but I would be more eager if the title of the chapter was Birthday Suits -
Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Recovery and More Summertime “Fun”
Since you were only making out at least you two didn't fire your own rockets BEFORE the fireworks began -
You mean like me
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Interlude: Speaking Of Father's
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Speaking Of Father's
It seems like Brandon's father is trying for an olive branch the best he can. I hope Brandon reconsiders a least a little bit maybe this go nowhere but at least hear him out to see if anything changes. “So I figured we can’t see each other, you could at least watch me shower.” My reaction to that? TYLER BEST BOYFRIND OF ALL TIME!!!😄 -
That's as good of a support system as one could have
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You do the #Ghost genre really well.BTW is Halloween in Australia the same as the U.S.?
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He could possibly get a baseball scholarship he's that good. So I hope Trace speaks to him🤞
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How much of this is also because of Jack's so called parents letter? Is he worried that Nick will someday come to the same conclusion and with Tommy there.....That is irrational of course but Jack was acting irrational in this chapter. But I didn't grow up like him insecurity could have the mind imagining a lot of worst case scenario's I can't help but think the foundation is being laid for Tommy to make some revelation when Jack is in Seattle. especially once I mentioned the photos I’d been hiding away for a rainy-day emergency. Oh so Nick and Jack did talk about that “Pre-shredded is coated in anti-caking dust,” I said. I love the pre-shredded four cheese Mexican blend but because of that comment I won't buy pre-shredded again..... No more buying the four cheese Mexican blend🤔........Gee THANKS!!! @LittleBuddhaTW
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Well you got the anxiety part down perfect.And so far it has gone pretty well Cody's Mom had a surprise of her own and Toby was cool. But there's Garrett and his thugs every town seems to have those. It will be interesting to see how this plays out will there be an incident during a Basketball game? Or in the locker room? I could see the goons trying to gang up on Ollie 3 against 1 but here I could see Toby arriving to help Ollie with both of them having self defense skills the goons would be dead meat.....Please tell me you plan to write that...😄
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Chapter 4 The cookout continues
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 4 The cookout continues
The one twin named Shiloh? Remember a TV western called The Virginian? Well it had one last season and the name of the show was called The Men From Shiloh(It did have a cool theme song check it out on YouTube)The way Noah is talking about Shiloh in the story it won't be The Men From Shiloh ...it will be The Man On Shiloh My mother’s brother. My Uncle Mark. The only thing that was missing is the suspenseful music 🎶Dun Dun DUHHHHH🎶 -
All that damage was done by @kbois chaseing me around the room.After kbois left I put the Huskie at the door to take the blame
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They should make some kind of arrangement that Pop will be able to sleep downstairs I don't know if that means add a room and of course these seizures can happen anytime anywhere but it would be one less worry
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So what is the timeline of this does this happened before or after Lance Bass came out of course it wasn't exactly the same circumstances
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The type of justice Rufus had for Bobby Ray all rapists should get
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, while Loz was also holding a dubious looking cigarette, the smoke from which could be smelt in the air. Oh that kind of dubious looking cigarette ‘Just sayin’,’ Tugger said, with a shrug of his shoulders. ‘The future’s going to be weird.’ He got that right and speaking of the future ‘Real men don’t eat quiche,’ That was a name of a popular book in the U.S. in the eighties and this story predates that.Are you implying the saying came from down under? That and two kids named Pheonix and River seems to be a lot future references here. I was hoping Jake would find a way to stay .Any thoughts of doing a story centered around Ethan and Pheonix?
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Well he knew this day was coming but it doesn't make anything easier
