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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 12

    Hope I'm wrong but I had the same thought. Ever hear the term 'Judge shopping'?
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    Confusion

    I was so bummed when Josh got kidnapped last chapter but WOW! That escape was awesome the other Josh or "other me" as Josh says is one badass.They are going to have to find out who's responsible for all the disinformation. My only disappointment in the chapter is we didn't get the scene where Elenore get ripped a new one.
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    Confusion

    You say that like it's an unusual thing
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    Chapter 18

    I wanted to leave an angry emoticon at first but the scene with Dailan changed that. I'm hoping with Creek's mom it is more of a cultural thing and ignorance by not having too many interactions with gay people but jeez enough time should have passed for her not to believe all this nonsense. He’s Asian too. Chinese American. Was that mentioned before? I don't recall. Well here is another possible dumb ass issue .Historically Japanese and Chinese people have had some animosity toward each other from what I understand from the Japanese military actions in China during WW11. This may sound lame but the Bruce Lee expressed that sentiment.My long winded point is will Creek's family have a problem with Dailan because he's Chinese. Given how they reacted to Marvin you can't rule it out
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    Chapter 24

    Does the baseball coach still want to speak with Joel after this? If he's able to get Joel to join the team then he's in the wrong business .He should a peace negotiator for warring countries
  6. Hunter's dad mentioned scholarship students from poor areas so I was thinking that .True one has to be exceptionally smart to get a scholarship at that place but intelligence doesn't mean character they could still have a clique mentality with not good intentions.But after reading that snippet again I now think not and Miguel did use the word cute so that might be a clue to the group of boy's motivation
  7. There was no one else to leave me with – other than my elderly grandparents, but I couldn’t imagine a more boring lifestyle depending on what one may have gone through I bet boring would be AWESOME A lot to take in this chapter so I'll reserve comments as we readers get as been mentioned in the chapter "The lay of the land" Interest how a group of five Colombian teen boys sought Hunter out.I can't help but think they made the equation gringo equals money(Although Miguel have something else in mind) Maybe this wouldn’t be a disaster. Hunter is apparently unfamiliar with GA stories
  8. I'm sure you're going to explain everything in the story but the danger you describe would it have been an option Hunter's dad to leave him with relatives in the states? I assume that's where they are arriving from. It doesn't take much an imagination to see Hunter getting a target on his back
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    Chapter 17

    Guys like ArthurCreek is a good guy so he won't tear Arthur a new one but when he finds out about this there are two things I want him to ask .First I want him to say "So what you say about Marvin you're also saying about me" (That would be a hell of a way to come out huh?) and second "I have feelings for a guy who's still a teenager does that make me a pedophile predator?"( I bet Arthur would think that)
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    Chapter 16

    I agree with all the comments I have a thought in the back of my mind but I won't ruin anything by stating it,Besides I don't think this author would do that. Speaking of not jinxing anything what do you think @drsawzall Cailan or Dreek? That second one needs work
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 15

    I liked the characters Max and Art but..... PINEAPPLE ON PIZZA!!!!Kidding😄
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    Chapter 13

    I have absolutely nothing against Marvin but it's #Team Dalian .Although I hope for that if it doesn't happen would the third triplet the one that gets picked on be too young for Dalian?
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    Chapter 9

    Like @Philippe I'm catching up with this story (he'll probably catch up before I do) I wasn't going to comment until I caught up and I haven't read any readers comments until this chapter so maybe this will have been discussed in a chapter after this one. It looks like Creek is getting a crash course on possibly playing with the other team not just after kissing Marvin but also having that conversation with Dailan(BTW is it pronounced Dylan?) he's not even sure if he can make that leap yet and he might already have a triangle forming. Can't wait for the scene where Marvin and Dailan meet. There is also nice girl in the mix Kate. Boy Creek is covering all the complications isn't he. I hope nobody gets their heart broke but I can't see how it won't happen . BTW in with @drsawzall # teamDailan. I was going to say Creek is Pan but @CincyKris term demisexual works also
  14. “I am not coming to this church again,” my southeast Asian mom stood up and walked inside. You take that and how things went down on Easter Sunday with Bruno in the mix and I have to say they don't know everything what the Catholic church actually says. While I don't agree with the church position they DO state that Catholics should treat gay people with dignity and respect. Ollie's mom and Bruno among others missed or ignore that part I burst out laughing. “No way… Logan hates my guts ever since I got together with Cody... Oh my God...” I can literally see the light bulb go off over Ollie's head
  15. Aadan tells Nina about his home situation but can't talk to Jake about it? He then says this at Emma house in front of her dad“It’s alright. I prolly should get home soon. Dad might be in a foul drunken mood as usual. I'm glad he did say that the more people know the better but still is contradictory to how he was with Jake “Shit... Aedan...” she hugged me. “I didn’t realize it was that bad. You and River are way too young for this.” I nodded silently. It's happened to River also? “I didn’t see him do it…” the coach said. “You’re out of here, Jackson. I gave you a second chance and ya blew it, kid. OK he didn't see it but he did see Vincent try the same thing minutes later.Uh Coach don't you realize now Aadan was telling the truth? And he would be your best punter but no.The Coach is a moron
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    Chapter 11

    So, what’s the stupid bastard done this time?’ she asked, before letting out a rather large sigh. ‘Ma’am?’ ‘It’s okay, detective. You don’t have to sugar-coat it. That son of mine is going to be the death of me, I’m sure! Lord only knows he did a good enough job of putting his own father in the ground. If Jarvis mother is not aware of the details of what he's done Would the Inspector,Helen and Rick would tell her what he's done? That might not be a good idea given they want to keep the boys location secret. It does sound like the Mother is inclined to tell them where Jarvis is. As I mentioned in the last chapter comments do Azzopardi and Ryan know Helen and Rick has been by to see Shane? There should be a plan to assign them somewhere out of the way so they won't know Shane has left the Hospital.As it is precautions should be taken to be sure that nobody is tailing them when they bring the boys to Martin's Parents
  17. A lot of GA stories about gay kids are a lot of elements in common.This is not a criticism I enjoy stories like that but there is a cookie cutter sameness to a lot of them.That is definitely not the case here.These characters are a lot of fun .Think Mel Brooks at his best (he 's has some bad one)only he writing for kids. At times it seems like it 24/7 party time but it is equally tempered by buy issue like how difficult a private school could be and the usual issues of school but only it's all day since you don't go to the sanctuary of home at the end of the day. But especially the mental health issues in this story,You'll find that you will think of things that you never considered before.It was very well done.
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    Chapter 45

    A lot to look forward to. Will Nick figure out a way to to have Mr. Bojangles at Harrison West? I sure hope Miss Clarice is still there Perhaps Tommy is Pan.But I can't see this lasting with long distance texting. Will there be a surprise way Tommy ends up at HW? Reforming Noah will be a challenge for the author Looking forward to it
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    Chapter 10

    You'r right my bad but IMO this is even better. I picked up the wrong scent🤔That doesn't make any sense,(Bet you're sorry for pointing that out now huh?)
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    Chapter 25 S3

    That emoji is the typical expression of a GA readers after they read a @Lee Wilson chapter
  21. I'm not even sure if taking the plunge with the Coney Island polar bear club (thats a real thing) could help articulate any thoughts after that
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    Chapter 10

    @dhphllps stole my thunder about te Get Smart references ‘Nothing. I didn’t like the look of ‘em.’ I guess Rick And Helen thought Shane wasn't going to tell the "cops" anything but they still should have reminded Shane not to say anything.An idea I have is they could have Shane tell them some disinformation like he knows where Jimmy is hiding and when they go there they grab them. Helen should ask if these two also asked to see the CCTV. Well I was in the right neighborhood when I wondered in my last chapter comments if Adam would take the boys.Adam's parents sounds like a great Idea. Perhaps when the dust clears Rick and Adam could be their guardians if not Adam's parents
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    Chapter 25 S3

    Honestly I forgot most of it but I do remember this Due to the lengthy dry spell since we last did this, you call THAT a dry spell Mac?You don't know how good you have it. Of course among the more cynical among us some would call that dry spell marriage
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    Chapter 25 S3

    I'm glad you're feeling better @Bill W AR-15's? WTH ??? That takes my mind off everything I was about to say
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    Chapter 9

    Forgot to add this to the comment
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