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It will be interesting to find out why Kitt is the way he is
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“No, Dimitriy. Oh, poop. I thought you were calling me Allen. Everybody calls me Dimmy though. Funny people called me that also.....I wonder what the reason for that is?
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much better than your typical sixteen-year-old answering questions from a boyfriend or girlfriend’s parents, where most responses consisted of monosyllable words at best. Miguel was polished.Is this Miguel being coached as to what to say? “And he’s based here in Medellín?” “Primarily. Though he’s almost always traveling. He has some other holdings too – real estate, a logistics company that moves freight across the country, and a few boutique hotels on the coast.” Juan Camilo raised an eyebrow. “Which cities?” “Cartagena, Santa Marta,” Miguel replied. “Small properties. Not chains.” You just know what Hunter's dad and Juan Camilo will be doing with that info. Could it be disinformation? “And now, the U.S. has decertified Colombia as a partner in the war on drugs,” Miguel added. “Which means many more millions of dollars in aid will be lost. It could destroy the economy here and worsen the drug problem.” You can tell Miguel is a smart kid so he might know this on his own or does he know this from his father? Miguel has expressed interest in leaving Columbia with Hunter.Is thier a sincere gesture about his feelings for Hunter OR is he also being used as bait? As you can tell I'm undecided on Miguel but I'm considering both scenarios equally
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Here is what I'm not getting and why David didn't at least make this argument. Why take the word of someone who is already in Juvie over the VICTIM!!!!! the victim knows who did it.
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Chapter 17: The Hard Truth
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Hard Truth
So Ollie has to maintain a 2.8 GPA? If it turns out he's one of the better basketball players he'll be surprised how some C's might all of a sudden turn into B's @Lee Wilson sounds sentimental there so I hate to rain on his thoughts. But Ollie will be roommates with Logan who had a crush on Ollie and perhaps one night with a little too much alcohol?.....Just saying. They are only human -
Your are writing Peter and Jason perfectly "Peter! The toaster has declared war! There’s smoke and everything!".....Not sure I would want to hire a lawyer who can't do toast
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Micah knows everything that is important to Killian is where they are at right now. If Micah is sincere about wanting to be with Killian and there is no reason to think he isn't then the right decision will be made. When @Summerabbacat mention Seth it got me thinking perhaps Fletcher might be able to see Seth also. Or if Fletcher dies he would see Seth that way also.......hmmm....How about and scene where Killian and Jacy are talking to each other and then Seth and Fletcher show up at the same time I see after I posted this @refueling835 had some similar thoughts
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Oh no you wrote at the end of Never Alone that Flecther was going to return but you didn't say just for the prologue I hope I'm premature on this. Perhaps Jacy still communicates with Flecther only a different way.I guess it makes sense if Flecther is dead how else would Killian get into this story. Still hope I'm wrong🤞
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Sitting On Pins and Needles
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Sitting On Pins and Needles
There has never been an active player in the NHL to come out as gay in 2021 a player under contract to the Nashville Predators (unfortunate name yes) came out but has only played minor league hockey. In 2016 a retired player named Brock McGillis came out perhaps you can have Darren mention that -
Sitting On Pins and Needles
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Sitting On Pins and Needles
So, on June 22, 2029, Darren, Luca, Esteban, Aurora, and Angel flew to Seattle to witness the NHL draft the following two days. Oh man thanks for the date of the draft now I can set my DVR -
How has Brick not worked for a certain individual I'm thinking of. “It’s so quiet here,” he murmured. “The quiet is worse. It makes the noise in my head louder. Like… like I can hear my own blood screaming.” “Hear it? It’s like a metronome,” Jason chuckled, the sound low and surprisingly warm. “The bedsprings, the little huffs Well the answer to the quiet is obvious .....Do more whacking
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I have been thinking Adam parents know Ross is leaving so what is the point of telling Adam never to see him again. Unless they are thinking of this as a preemptive strike
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How did I miss all these notifications? I almost missed the most dramatic part.Now for the fallout
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Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 17: Summer of Jaedan
“Ship name?” Jake giggled. “You say that as if we’re in a teen romance story.” This would have been a good chance to break the third wall and have River say 'Well we are aren't we"? -
Chapter 176 Stepping Up to the Plate
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 176 Stepping Up to the Plate
Having Rory mad at him (If it's temporary I hope it is) might be just the thing for Robbie needs to pull his head out. "You did that on purpose. It's rude to sneak up on people." And it's also incompetent to not realize someone is waiting since it's part of your job “So, you want me to lie in the interview?” “Not lie, but there are bits you don’t need to mention, like your mom being there. It’ll sound more dramatic if it’s just you. They need a hero who the kids can identify with, someone their own age who goes to the same school. Not to mention being on a billboard shirtless to get the girls and gay guys attention Mr Andrews patted me on the knee. “I understand. I’ll let the council know about your decision. They’ll have to find someone else to give that money to.” My ears pricked up as he walked away. I didn’t realise I would be getting paid. “What money?” “They don’t expect you to do it for nothing. The council have a big budget and pay handsomely.” “How much is handsomely?” “A lot.” Notice how Mr. Andrews didn't mention the money part until AFTER Robbie said he wasn't going to do it.I wonder if he was trying to get Robbie to do it for nothing and also he doesn't answer the multiple attempts about how much money -
Hope you are well
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The Return From California
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Return From California
The controversy about Michael not being allowed to swim I would think would make a great court case.The Media would sure be all over it being that Michael is so good.....Let's call 60 Minutes -
The Return From California
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Return From California
Am I going to be cruel and have something bad happen to Michael? Do you really want us to answer that?...Hell do we even HAVE to answer that -
Will the foursome cross paths with The Warlock and Carel?
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So I'm guessing Andrew has suspended going to law school? This is quite a project they are working on. The front end was twisted, the airbags a ghostly fungal bloom from the dash. That reminded me of a conversation I had with my sister ,She borrowed my and then a little later on she called " I got good news and bad news" I said "Okay tell me the good news first" "The airbag worked just fine"
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Loved the POV change S: They didn’t take my watch. Track me. One of two possibilities. 1. If the bad guys didn't take the watch then they are incompetent or 2.It's a trap
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Thanks to your mistake and @Ticklishboy30 comment we got a little bit of a spoiler “Come on, guys. Let’s go upstairs and chat until the food’s ready,” Jaxon urged. Chat?...OH! yeah, yeah chat “Ok, boys, come on downstairs, because we’re going to have dessert now.” Didn't they already have dessert?🤔
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once you vacuum out all the cocaine from the trunk, you’ll be all good.” That depends on who buys that car someone else might use their nose instead of a vacuum
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If misery loves company these three are an orgy The air was thick with the sweet-sour stench of melted ice cream and unwashed laundry. Interesting I once lived in an apartment that smelled just like that
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For some people I know every day is world pizza day
