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6,666 words? in a story with demons in it? You had to of planned that.What did you? After you were done you saw it was 6,668 and then you went "I can change "would not" to "won't" that will make it 6,667" . Now to find one more word to delete"
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Wow I have to admit I didn't anticipate the being watched part. The very idea that those four thugs Kent took care of was some kind of set up is appalling.
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The fitting was a surgical procedure. The components of Riley's new identity were laid on the bed with the reverence of a knight arming for battle. A black dinner suit, tailored from wool so fine it felt like a structured shadow. A dress shirt with front pleats like a secret cypher. A black satin bow tie. And the glasses. I'm surprised Riley didn't break out in hives You know I wish I had that terminology when I was a kid. "Where were you tonight"? " I was involved in an data exchange"
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Bless me Father for I have sinned I didn't return a shopping cart
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Just thought of something you know when parents before they go out for the night tell their teenage kids "Don't burn down the house". With Cecil it would not be a joke. "These are the souls of people who don't return shopping carts." I've done that before......Should I be worried?
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The Space Between Breaths
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Space Between Breaths
I’d been starving for that kind of contact since Ken died and hadn’t known how deep the hunger ran until it was being fed. After that thought I wonder how Kent sees Marvin,Is it as a possible significant other OR as a brother replacement for Ken? If it's the ladder that isn't fair to Marvin. Devon knows Kent has been through some stuff such as Ken dying.But is he aware to what extent? Does he know about the PTSD? I know it's a private thing that Marvin shouldn't reveal but perhaps he should tell Devon about that in case Kent has an episode at dinner. -
Not a bad theory but PLEASE NO!!!!! That would put a stop to my Kasy or Jillian fantasy. Your comment about Ricky being in the Wong place at the Wong time reminds me of this Q: Why is it difficult to make a phone call in China? A: There are so many Wing's and Wong's you might wing a wong number
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Chapter 3: Bryan Falls Into The River
weinerdog commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 3: Bryan Falls Into The River
The name of the story is Ruin The Friendship...If Bryan had died that would have definitely ruined it -
Who would have thought the equalizer would be Riley's familiarity with gay sex. He was clean. He was safe. He was fed premium, nutrient-dense cardboard. I'm not so sure if that's a metaphor or if it really is cardboard The radio, when found, was preset to a classical station playing something mournful and complicate “I get the code to the Telly, the one that lets me watch what I want.” Riley narrowed his eyes. “270275” Ben said softly. “Deal?” Ben gave him the code to the Telly but notice he didn't give him the code to the preset on the radio. I guess Ben doesn't want to take a chance on hearing Oasis
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There is no reason for me to think this since there was no mention of anything like this but I remember a previous trip where they were being followed. If something happens where Devin and/or Mac have to shift it would be very difficult to explain to Lonny,Clint and Daniel
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Which means THAT"S exactly what you did😄
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I must be losing it missed yesterday's posting without realizing it. I'm disappointed @Topher Lydon you had the deal take place in front of a McDonald's and you didn't answer the question I had in a previous chapter comment "How many souls for a Big Mac"?
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I double checked and I was wrong it was TWO members that died that way.Duane Allman and Barry Oakley, Here the eerie part both ran into vehicles with their cycles.Almost a year apart and less than two blocks from both accidents.If was their record company I would have put a no motorcycle clause in their contracts
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I wonder who the ghost is😄 It is way too early to predict what is going to happen but do you think that is going to stop me from doing so anyway?......Of course not I can see the one of the finalists who didn't get chosen trying to kill Nigel and the ghost warning him about it
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A member of the Allman Brothers died that way if I'm not mistaken
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Only one chapter left😭 Will it include Killian getting his gun license AND his first gun. I loved to see Kaplan's reaction when he finds out that out😄 You would also have a great scene when Kaplan arrives at a crime scene after the first time Killian uses the gun after getting it
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As @Philippe and @Joseph OHara mentioned Seth and I agree with what they said I too would like to see more of Seth but I believe he knew White Deer and to a lesser degree Jacy had him covered so no reason for him to show up. Interesting that Jacy had the same dream Killian had and while I so hope there's a Kacy or Jillian there will be some kind of relationship between those two regardless. Since they had the same dream I wonder if Jacy might be able to see Seth in the future
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So that means what?......Be is still a monster ,but he's Riley's monster
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Marvin seemed to know all about Kent and what he was doing and not doing. Did Marvin himself go through this or someone close to him who he lost?
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Happy New Year Across The Globe
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Happy New Year Across The Globe
Howard Cosell used to do that in one broadcast.....After the first quarter -
Happy New Year Across The Globe
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Happy New Year Across The Globe
Great story the only part I was a little saddened about was Art remaining single.But it more accurately reflects real life along with Seth's drugs problems then they all lived happily ever after. -
The Drop In Centre 3
weinerdog replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Ohh that could explain what happened in the kitchen the other day.The Cheerios box was among the things spawned out on the floor. That's what I'm going to tell my roommate at least and I'm going to use your comment as proof. Oh but how did the moose get in?...... Aha he left the door open again so it was his fault -
I'm going to mention @kbois right now because she loves meAnd she's going to check this out. One of two things will happen @Josh Aterovis either you'll be permanently on her s__t list OR since she wrote some excellent shift shaper stories she might run with this idea
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Do you have an image of Riley freaking out? Because after what happened with Keith no way would Riley have his usual expression
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Chapter 27: After All These Years
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 27: After All These Years
What do you mean j/k ? That's what what would have happened if it was your story
