weinerdog

Here is what I'm not getting and why David didn't at least make this argument. Why take the word of someone who is already in Juvie over the VICTIM!!!!! the victim knows who did it.

So Ollie has to maintain a 2.8 GPA? If it turns out he's one of the better basketball players he'll be surprised how some C's might all of a sudden turn into B's @Lee Wilson sounds sentimental there so I hate to rain on his thoughts. But Ollie will be roommates with Logan who had a crush on Ollie and perhaps one night with a little too much alcohol?.....Just saying. They are only human

Your are writing Peter and Jason perfectly "Peter! The toaster has declared war! There’s smoke and everything!".....Not sure I would want to hire a lawyer who can't do toast

Micah knows everything that is important to Killian is where they are at right now. If Micah is sincere about wanting to be with Killian and there is no reason to think he isn't then the right decision will be made. When @Summerabbacat mention Seth it got me thinking perhaps Fletcher might be able to see Seth also. Or if Fletcher dies he would see Seth that way also.......hmmm....How about and scene where Killian and Jacy are talking to each other and then Seth and Fletcher show up at the same time I see after I posted this @refueling835 had some similar thoughts

Oh no you wrote at the end of Never Alone that Flecther was going to return but you didn't say just for the prologue I hope I'm premature on this. Perhaps Jacy still communicates with Flecther only a different way.I guess it makes sense if Flecther is dead how else would Killian get into this story. Still hope I'm wrong🤞

There has never been an active player in the NHL to come out as gay in 2021 a player under contract to the Nashville Predators (unfortunate name yes) came out but has only played minor league hockey. In 2016 a retired player named Brock McGillis came out perhaps you can have Darren mention that

So, on June 22, 2029, Darren, Luca, Esteban, Aurora, and Angel flew to Seattle to witness the NHL draft the following two days. Oh man thanks for the date of the draft now I can set my DVR

How has Brick not worked for a certain individual I'm thinking of. “It’s so quiet here,” he murmured. “The quiet is worse. It makes the noise in my head louder. Like… like I can hear my own blood screaming.” “Hear it? It’s like a metronome,” Jason chuckled, the sound low and surprisingly warm. “The bedsprings, the little huffs Well the answer to the quiet is obvious .....Do more whacking

I have been thinking Adam parents know Ross is leaving so what is the point of telling Adam never to see him again. Unless they are thinking of this as a preemptive strike

How did I miss all these notifications? I almost missed the most dramatic part.Now for the fallout

“Ship name?” Jake giggled. “You say that as if we’re in a teen romance story.” This would have been a good chance to break the third wall and have River say 'Well we are aren't we"?

Having Rory mad at him (If it's temporary I hope it is) might be just the thing for Robbie needs to pull his head out. "You did that on purpose. It's rude to sneak up on people." And it's also incompetent to not realize someone is waiting since it's part of your job “So, you want me to lie in the interview?” “Not lie, but there are bits you don’t need to mention, like your mom being there. It’ll sound more dramatic if it’s just you. They need a hero who the kids can identify with, someone their own age who goes to the same school. Not to mention being on a billboard shirtless to get the girls and gay guys attention Mr Andrews patted me on the knee. “I understand. I’ll let the council know about your decision. They’ll have to find someone else to give that money to.” My ears pricked up as he walked away. I didn’t realise I would be getting paid. “What money?” “They don’t expect you to do it for nothing. The council have a big budget and pay handsomely.” “How much is handsomely?” “A lot.” Notice how Mr. Andrews didn't mention the money part until AFTER Robbie said he wasn't going to do it.I wonder if he was trying to get Robbie to do it for nothing and also he doesn't answer the multiple attempts about how much money

Hope you are well

The controversy about Michael not being allowed to swim I would think would make a great court case.The Media would sure be all over it being that Michael is so good.....Let's call 60 Minutes

Am I going to be cruel and have something bad happen to Michael? Do you really want us to answer that?...Hell do we even HAVE to answer that

Will the foursome cross paths with The Warlock and Carel?

So I'm guessing Andrew has suspended going to law school? This is quite a project they are working on. The front end was twisted, the airbags a ghostly fungal bloom from the dash. That reminded me of a conversation I had with my sister ,She borrowed my and then a little later on she called " I got good news and bad news" I said "Okay tell me the good news first" "The airbag worked just fine"

Loved the POV change S: They didn’t take my watch. Track me. One of two possibilities. 1. If the bad guys didn't take the watch then they are incompetent or 2.It's a trap

Thanks to your mistake and @Ticklishboy30 comment we got a little bit of a spoiler “Come on, guys. Let’s go upstairs and chat until the food’s ready,” Jaxon urged. Chat?...OH! yeah, yeah chat “Ok, boys, come on downstairs, because we’re going to have dessert now.” Didn't they already have dessert?🤔

once you vacuum out all the cocaine from the trunk, you’ll be all good.” That depends on who buys that car someone else might use their nose instead of a vacuum

If misery loves company these three are an orgy The air was thick with the sweet-sour stench of melted ice cream and unwashed laundry. Interesting I once lived in an apartment that smelled just like that

For some people I know every day is world pizza day

Don't forget rule #5 in @AquariusGuy stories the one after explosions .Nobody really dies in an @AquariusGuy story.So it still could be Noah's mom on the road incident Where was the security that was following? Speaking of the security at the park they had their shirts off wearing tiny shorts?....Are they being paid for something else besides security?

One takeaway everyone who reads the chapter comments should have is if you ever father a son don't name him Bubba

I hate that Tarquin got away but all good serials need a bad guy and Tarquin is The dark side Darth Vader and The Klingons rolled into one