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Lot of times Road trip in title of chapters mean chaos But Darren and Luca are too young for that right.....RIGHT?????

An hour later and after one of our biggest fights, he made me promise that I would stop sharing my journal regarding stories about our relationship with Susan. Well now that promise was broken the minute you started posting this story wasn't it This chapter, by far the most experimental I've ever written, grew so big, I broke it up into two parts. Okay so this chapter was 3,885 words so that means you end up writing somewhere between 7,500 to 8,500 words........ That's a mini chapter for @Krista

I think that comment serves as a pretty good brief epilogue .Thank you

Thank you sir for an excellent story

Would you and I and anybody else for that matter apply what we learned after seeing Alex naked.BTW how come it wasn't NerdStar

I never got any notifications for chapter 4 and 5 for some reason. I clicked following the story in addition to already following the author I hope that solves that🤞 It was revealed that Helen saved Alexis from the streets so one has to wonder did Alexis in those days cross path with Jarvis? Making Jarvis connected to Alexis death? As mentioned I didn't get notifications for the last two chapter I looked through all of them🤔 I did notice in the chapter 4 comments a couple of readers were expecting me to come up with my usual harebrained speculation.Well I can tell you everything that happen in chapters 5 and 6 I would have predicted spot on.....Actually I probably would have said stuff that would have led to an entirely different story if true😄

Bet you like me better now huh? Oh wait I shouldn't have said that your Husband already did enough cussing for a Sunday for you to add to it

What? you only have one chapter left?

I hope these five stars gets the attention of readers who haven't read this for this is a story worth reading. But I caution everybody this story is very dark.If it's not the darkest story on GA it is definitely the darkest I ever reviewed. I can't put into words the raw honesty this talented author has put forth but I promise you that you'll be blown away. This may be difficult to read at time but trust me it is well worth it

When I checked in to GA this morning I had four pages of notifications of comments on other stories and I guess this got lost in the shuffle. I wonder if Simon had played the message when he first got it and hearing Rowan saying not to blame himself would have made Simon's actions different? This was absolutely worth the wait

@Laura S. Fox Is right there is a lot of hating on Brad but fair is fair he did do Lyn a solid no matter what the motivation.

A lot of very interesting developments in this chapter I'll withhold comments until I read the extra innings stories for now just a few reactions to comment in the story “First time’s always the worst,” Mom said, squeezing my wrist. A lot of that depends on what first time thing your talking about I’ll launch mine, and boom – we’ll have the Donahue OnlyFans Dynasty! Matching Lamborghinis, joint interviews, maybe even a Netflix docuseries. The Kardashians won’t know what hit them!” Hmm Donahue OnlyFans huh?..... When does Christian turn 18?🤔......Oh no reason just asking

Jonah forgot a few which I will add Back at home, we rotated between TV, tossing the football in the yard, and letting Jonah run monologues about random things like: “Why do hot dogs come in packs of ten, but buns come in packs of eight? Is that just Big Hot Dog trying to screw us over?” “If we’re mostly water, does that mean we’re basically cucumbers with anxiety?” “Do you think dolphins ever get embarrassed about all the weird noises they make?” “If ghosts can walk through walls, do they fall through the floors too? Like, is there a basement full of ghosts under every house?” “What’s the deal with toothpaste flavors? Why can’t we brush our teeth with Cool Ranch Doritos?” “And honestly, if cows could vote, don’t you think they’d totally ban hamburgers? Moo rights, man. Equal burgers for all!” And now for the added ones "Why do you drive in a parkway and park in a driveway?" "If the opposite of pro is con then is the opposite of progress congress?'

NOBODY!!! is another Jonah

Isn't it little too soon to be called a traitor it is only it is only the second day of school? Possibly getting into a fight with the school's starting quarterback? Well any chance of not being known will surely end then. Oh I know they get into a fight and Joel hurts the QB so he's out for the year that would add some drama huh? Then Joel will feel obliged to Play QB for the football team since he has a good arm and.... OK I'll stop here Not as late as I thought it was, but late enough to know that seven o’clock was going to come too damn early. Uh ....doesn't seven o'clock always come too early everyday?

I wanted to leave the sad reaction but this chapter was very well written (Like all of your chapters) Props to Jason he did the right thing. The title of the next chapter has me wondering will Konstantin be coming back? If not I could see two scenarios the other Jason shows up out of nowhere or...well NerdStar is available Come on, it doesn’t take thirty minutes to take a piss, not even with a urinary tract infection or some other horrible sexually transmitted disease I’m hoping beyond sanity he doesn’t have. Well I could never work for Jason that used to be my go to excuse (You should have heard some of my other ones)

Although I left a ha-ha reaction I do like your ideas. Especially the Mr Bojangles one but I suspect the custodial staff might object

“Sorry,” Logan blushed. “You were the next best thing for my first kiss. Someone already stole my crush,” Logan scoffed. Next best thing to who…? I thought to myself. Man, Logan is WEIRD… Jeez Okay 1. Oliver know Logan is ticked at him for some reason 2. Logan kisses Toby and said he was the next best thing to kissing his Crush 3. And Oliver wonders who?Oliver HELLO!!!! Logan kissed your TWIN BROTHER who would be the next best thing?????? There is a stereotype that all Asians are smart but it sure doesn't apply to Oliver

Jason is writing in a journal right? Why does he keep writing "Hip upscale restaurant (oh in Palo Alto)🤔 an emotionally unstable addict is that Hip upscale restaurant best choice for assistant manager

Little Brody blinked up at his dad. “Daddy? What’s the hokey pokey?” Brody choked on air. “Uh—” “That’s a talk for when you’re older,” Uncle Matt said quickly, 🎶And that's what it's all about🎶

Boy that assistant is sure a piece of work.He has the right job title the first three letters describe him perfectly. It sounds like Peter would have a chance to be among the top echelon of models and it would be worth a lot of money but that would also mean more separation from Marty.This use to be a saying years ago and it was a commercial slogan " Is it true bones have more fun?" Max said he had heard that they might make them all blonds, which Peter thought could be fun. This use to be a saying years ago and it was a commercial slogan " Is it true blonds have more fun?" Perhaps Peter heard that saying thats why he thinks it could be fun..... OK sorry for that😄

Happy Thursday. Until now after you revealed this I think Chuck Mangione might have been the only person to know it was saxophone day (Yes I know he didn't specifically play that)

Join us for the next chapter when a picture says a thousand words. Are we actually going to see a picture I see this as a temporary delay but then that could be my wishful thinking🤞 No, I was late because I was celebrating the Chargers win at the Old Pro Sports Bar with a bunch of straight jocks. after what you said to @Krista about her having "sports ball teams" in her story I must say I'm surprised you did a sports reference

Before this chapter I had no reason to go to Michigan. But I checked out Halo Burger online and they are only located in Michigan.I'm making travel plans now You’re way past that stage, bro. We just want you to stop smelling like a depressed raccoon. Or worse – like Mr. Johnston after gym class, who probably takes his showers in vaginal excretions. If that Mr Johnston part of the comment doesn't want someone to take a shower nothing would Christian grinned. “Wait till you meet our other little brother. He’s starting eighth grade in the fall. He’s a total nut-job.” More of a nut-job than Jonah?🤔 is that even possible? But if anyone could do it it's @LittleBuddhaTW Honestly, I think part of his excitement came from the idea that he might catch even the faintest glimpse of my boyfriend’s junk. The kid was shameless.

Just throwing this out there how about Tommy going to their academy and he hooks up with Jonah.Yeah I know Tommy is straight as far as we know but after Christian in this chapter......... And I like your other ideas also