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"After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
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"After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
Doha commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
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A short tale filled with the full gambit of human emotion, Boundaries: An Old West Tale, allows us a brief glimpse of life and love in the old west. Virgil and Wyatt meet under tense circumstances and their emotional responses to one another and the subsequent character development is simply marvelous to witness. A must read, whether you like westerns or not.
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I loved every moment reading this tale. A lovely Saturday afternoon. Some new additions for Larkspur 😊. I do hope you will consider continuing their story.
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Even so much!
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This would be a great starter to a longer tale. 👍
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A great chapter. Wyatt is stoic, Virgil is astute, Lukas gives himself away and the scales fall off the eyes of the townfolk. Great writing. I'm sure that Wyatt and Virgil are going to be a super team.
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Yep, I reckon so.
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Yep. Often we are too close to the wood to see the trees. Takes another person to point it out. Then it is as plain as day.
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Well I suspect that the elderly where has something to do with whatever is going on. She is not going to let the rejection just go. Let's see. Virgil and Wyatt will be good for each other and seven years is a blink of an eye.
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Yep, it is like that. In Afrikaans rhey say "Soort seek soek soort" or "same seeks same".
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The Sidewinder stories are 2 of the best on this site.
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I was so pleased when I saw a Headstall story. I love your writing. Let's see how Virgil and Wyatt get on. Virgil and Wyatt both need someone, although for different reasons. Perhaps they will be a good fit.
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Well my 5 chapter binge is finished and now I must wait. Oh no! I hope Cameron is able to escape with Elijah and Tyler. It will be a big boost to everyone if they can bring one of the pups home. Those wispy tendrils in the chest again. 🤔 Kage at work in Elijah.
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A nice new addition to Elijah's box of talents. Pity it came to him through Kage's death.
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A great chapter. Quiet and giving space for Tyler and Elijah to process the horror of what has happened.
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And we nod them so well. Wisely, even.
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And we nod them so well. Wisely, even.
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What a killer of a cliffhanger. OMG. These 2 are doing well as sleuths. Thankfully I held back for a few chapters and can now just move on. Yaaay.
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I know. It's a nightmare.
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A great chapter as always. Tyler and Elijah handled the situation with a grieving mum really well. It's getting real now. Fingers frosted for our boys.
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Agreed. Some special new ability will emerge I'm sure.
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. We are starting to see a much more human side to Jonathan's parents. Maddox and Jonathan are stronger now than ever, Jonathan can return to Sunny Hill. 🌞
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Yes. For sure. He has a great group of friends now and should be able to weather the storm.
