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The ability to see everybody's knack is amazing. Does this mean they are knackers?? This new ability is going to make the difference they need. I still feel somehow that knowing Urvan's true name - Leemus - is going to be useful. A wonderful chapter.
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I think you're right @akascrubberKyan needs to find some kind of work outside the home in order to feel he is contributing.
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I'm seriously worried that Kyan will feel he is a financial burden to Perry and be unwilling to go into a relationship where he feels it could be viewed as a financial transaction. The timing of that money question was bad. We finally learn the truth about Dayna and that even her parents were aware of her faults. I'm glad they are open to Perry and Kyan being together. Now Kyan just has to be open to it.
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They are learning all the time. I'm sure that in the next chapter they will learn something pivotal in the nether. The degree of loyalty between them is admirable. It truly is "one for all and all for one".
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Instead admit, I jad rhought how kn earth steak could survive for 4,000 years. I suspect the ancients were a little ahead of where we are right now but it's not too far fetched that in some scientific process food could be unstructured molecular, stored to be incorruptible and rhen reassembled.
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They are becoming adept at figuring out the machines of the ancients. They have certainly infuriated the Leemus Porva Lodda Urvan gang. And survived another thunderous attack. I'm watching their victories with glee.
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Who are you again?
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Be gone!!
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A wonderful chapter. Gravin discovers one of the benefits of the ring Crillis gave him. Now that they are on the subway/metro/tube... they will get about quickly. Loving it. ❤
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Meeting Rusty's mom for the first time gives us insight into his messy upbringing. Dad who is trying to put some rigor in, albeit from a distance emotionally and geographically. Mom who is awash with self-pity and most likely suffering from some kind of depression. Possibly bi-polar. I understand why Rusty didn't want to take Matty home, but actually, Matty would have found that, with respect to Ruaty's mom, he would become the protector in the relationship. They both need to make their moves quickly. They will be stronger together.
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Yeah, 2 really super moms and one who is languishing in some kind of self-pity.
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Lol. We have a silent agreement regarding Rusty. He's mine obviously.
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What a battle scene. This team of intrepid warriors have come on in leaps and bounds. A few more magic spells and I think they will take Urvan by surprise.
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A fascinating chapter with a lot that has been observed and learnt. They all seem to have some ability with magic and this is just making them stronger and more formidable for the time when they meet Urvan.
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This is exactly what I thought when they entered the Fire House. This is a story set in the future and WE are the ancients who wiped themselves out.
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Given the danger that is becoming apparent, I suggest that the prince's tiny willy is the least of their worries. Perhaps a side effect of saving the world from Urvan, will be the restoration of the Prince's dick, but I suspect it will not remain the main objective of this band of warriors.
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I think you are right. Pandora's box is being opened and havoc will result unless our little band can stop it.
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What a narrow escape. Thank goodness for the wolves and thank goodness they have fingers!
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The whole castle, room of stars and rocket scene made me think that the worl we currently live in came to an abrupt end and humanity re-established itself in a magical form. Perhaps we are the ancients and this story is taking place far in the future.
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Jamie did a lot of magical research in this chapter and it left him exhausted. They have certainly faced a range of challenges and succeeding if Urvan is somehow observing their progress he will be hopping with rage. I hope he is at any rate. Some excellent new magical abilities across the group. Thank you for this great chapter.
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Well they are there. They have seen those awful demon creatures again and what they can do.. Geert will need to use that protection spell soon I'm sure. This latest bout of attacks is certainly for Urvan/Leemus to get revenge for being humiliated publicly once and defeated after a second attempt. He is definitely after Jamie.
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😆 🤣 😂 those spots of surprise on the underwear. 😆 🤣 😂
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It's impossible. 😆 🤣 Cumcrumbcumcumcumcumcrumb
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Yes I think they are definitely going to be "caught". I wonder how the family will respond.
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