James Baxter

I'm concerned about the lack of empathy for Liebe's nanny, Infanta. No one has yet mentioned that she will be fired when CJ and Owen move back to the States yet she is told that she is not to blame for letting Liebe get kidnapped. I think she needs some reassurance that no one thinks that the kidnapping was her fault. How about a compensatory payment to her of a year's salary even though her services will no longer be needed. Just a thought of how to somehow put her mind at ease.

Once invited in I sometimes stick around. I'm quite glad not to be treated with your false venom as you sling with some of your other followers!

I feel very sad for the Lars in college; being to!d by a classmate about some blogger who looks just like him. He then investigates and discovers that the brother who left him has resurfaced as a star and even brought along some of their childhood friends. I suppose when his parents took him away from his neighborhood he must have left behind several playmates that he was forced to just forget about without even getting a chance to say goodbye. He must have felt unjustly betrayed by his twin brother for getting the chance to keep their mutual friends.

I'm comfortable standing in the yard. I am quite amazed that Lars carries with him an attitude about wanting to meet up with Loren; wasn't it Lars who has already been sighted ghosting Loren at several football games? It would seem he'd be welcoming a face-to-face with the brother that he's been showing such an interest in.

I think the word for what I feel is great trepidation to even leave a comment at this stage of the story. I fear so much for Wes and Isaac and the danger that they are in that I fear that even a comment about it will influence a bad outcome for the two of them. Please, Comsie, have mercy on we dedicated followers of your every word and allow the two boys to escape from Cyrus in any way possible. I wait patiently for your next chapter.

Thanks for another great poem! I'll say it again, Phillipe, you honor the story author with your thoughtful talents and you keep me impressed. Great job!

What a great poem, Philippe! Imaginative and follows the events of the chapter. Thanks. You've honored the story author with your thoughtful talents.

NOW, after hours of watching internet cartoons I'm an Adventure Time fan!! Thanks imogene_arant! James Baxter

imogene_arant; That horsey voice is not mine. AdventureTime.org is for kids, not me. I'm a 69 year old retired school bus driver and I have no grand children who could use that site. Sorry.

I'm not an Adventure Time fan but since you said so I'll have to investigate! Is it AdventureTime.org?

I've NEVER been asked to comment on ANYTHING! How did you even know I was monitoring all the fabulous posts that come from the followers of your stories? This was a great chapter to be commenting on; it may be your finest of all! I certainly think it is.

I love your poetry to sum up the chapter! Thank you very much.

Thank you, Comsie, for making my morning wonderful and extremely bright! I've been wishing so hard for Zack to escape from his prison and now that he's broken out fighting all the way I couldn't be happier. I'm so glad that he has Brody, Adam and Sam to celebrate his freedom with and his future looks all bright and exciting. He and Brody can now be epic boyfriends and they'll be able to handle anything that comes their way. It did take a long time but I'm happy to see everything resolved in the end. Now to get part 5 released on Amazon and we can be all satisfied.

Alec will suddenly start feeling glad that there is someone who wants to be his friend. Alec probably doesn't know that he's not a friendly person. He thinks he is, but he's really not. Learning how to be friendly is really hard when you've been so isolated from others and have developed no social skills. Finn presents to him the perfect opportunity to be schooled in socializing; Finn's a pro at it and it just comes naturally to him. Alec is lucky to have found such a competent social coach if only he can shelve his doubts and allow Finn to work his magic.

Altimexis, Thank you for writing such an exemplary description of your writing! And thank you, too, for writing so convincingly that we all must take a pause and ask you what parts of your fabulous story can we believe in and what parts are pure fantasy. You do more than entertain us that we have to have clarity of when you are educating us. I trust so much of what you have to say.

My favorite author for the sexy, racy scenes comes through again with a perfectly paced and believable first time for a boy in the old west. Thanks again, Comsie!! That is if you accept this "vampires walk among us" concept in GFD.

Brilliantly stated!! My accolades go out to Canuk.

When Andrew does finally f*ck with Chris it's going to be EPIC!! If only he can sidle up to him slowly instead of barrel him down like a pack of wild horses it's going to be great to watch. Can hardly wait!

Vicke is such a high upstanding teacher who loves and cares about his students that he must be devastated to have to take the abuse that Charlemagne (a$$hole) has to dish out to him, but he must take it nonetheless. He is destined to be misconstrued even by the straight and shallow vampires in the dark world and he's finding that there are no words he can use to change any of that. I just hope Vicke has the stamina to continue the good fight for all of the countless millions of voiceless free thinkers who must daily suffer the abuse of the many. We may be the minority but we are on the right side of this endless battle.

Now that Henry and J.J. are an item, finding themselves an older apartment with a terrace and a view was just ideal. What could be better? Well, I'll tell you. Discovering their neighbors on a two-apartment floor are a couple of gay guys with a history complimenting their own. Max and Gideon are a match made in heaven, a little older than our friends and able to kindly and intelligently guide and nurture them as they make their newcomer transition to life in the big city. I think this new friendship will help them avoid the many pratt falls that are so common to new arrivals to New York that could leave them devastated and scarred for life. I look forward to their fresh discoveries in their new environment including the introduction of Franklin to their circle of friends.

I've been waiting for this moment for a really long time--but now I'm just scared. I think that's just how Justin feels. I'll keep my fingers crossed until the next installment.

This story just keeps getting better and better and Henry and J.J. are, indeed, the perfect couple. They're going to drive everyone in New York crazy with envy. I'm not traditionally a fan of the upper class but to find that ideal apartment in N.Y.C. with both a view and a terrace I'm going to be glad that J.J. is a billionaire. Keep my fantasy world alive with a couple of new friends for the boys that are neither snooty nor upper class but progressive rebels at heart and I'll be satisfied and out of my mind.

Finally!! Something to go right with J.J.'s sex life! His personal love for Henry since they've worked together on his math homework years ago will actually be realized in their relationship into the future. I've loved Henry myself since I learned about his misguided suicidal fantasies in his adolescence that mirrored my own fights of depression at an early age. I can't think of a more satisfying outcome than for him to fall in love with the boy who saved him from himself. What a great life they will have with each other! Thanks for a great turn of events in this most enjoyable of stories. My favorite from GayAuthors website ever.

I love Liam so much, I don't even mind crying over him.

What an unexpected ending to Landry's store! I wasn't ready for any of this!! I'm glad Noah is going to be ok and I'm pretty sure that Seth will be found unharmed. I hope he's the one who called the police. Can't wait for a continuation.