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Well Maggie at least admitted what she had done wrong. Although she will never understand the gravity of what she did to her son. It seems she only feels her guilt. @Libby Drew thank you for a wonderful story. We will be waiting with "anticipation" (Rocky Horror pronunciation) for the follow up stories! Thank you!

With all of the confrontation I loved that the people in the diner stood up for Marc. It really shows inclusivity which you don't find in small towns in the real world. Jonathan is a predator and wants whatever he could get. Notice Maggie didn't come with Jonathan because she has no voice? So long, farewell, auf Wiedersehen, goodbye! They were never parents anyway just biological contribution. The Adventures of Tom and Huck really pulled at the heart strings. To me it was really the major point in the chapter. It brings proof that they were both loved. Not one over the other, but both. Maybe bringing two brothers to accepting each other over a life of a dysfunctional childhood. @Libby Drew what another wonderful chapter! I love your writing! Please let there be more stories beyond this story! Next chapter please!!

One, two, three,crunch! Three!

Absolutely wonderful chapter! Not where I thought the will would be, but maybe May's copy is in the red photo album? However just wonderful! I have to say I love your characters in this story and Paying the Piper. @Libby DrewI feel so attached to each of them and want to see more. Please do follow up stories for us crazy people so into your characters.

LOVE LOVE the Calhoun brothers taking about their childhood. Being adults because the things you do as a kid doesn't matter anymore. I still can't wait to see where the will is! (Red photo book!) Thanks you for this wonderful story!! Next chapter!!

Please say there is more than 3 chapters left!!! There is so much to explore heck you did 42 chapters in Pay the Piper! This story should get at least that many chapters. They are both excellent stories and completely different.

Wow such a good connection the the traveling man being Sawyers grandfather. Now where is the will? Thank you for such a wonderful story!

Honestly I love this story! It has so much realness to it. Rachel and Mrs. Wynn are very similar except Rachel was able to get away from her predator. Mrs. Wynn didn't have the ability to and lost her son. Mr. Wynn never wanted any other competition for her love. That is why Marc was never loved by his parents because his father seems to be a predator. He wants the money to help the poor in another country where he controls Ms. Wynn. He doesn't have to share his power over her with anyone. I just makes sense. The money will keep his power over her and she will never get away from him. If Marc doesn't find the will in the red photo album I will be surprised. It seems like the place that Aunt May kept her life that she could never have. I love the breaking of the iceberg for Sawyer and Finn. I think Sawyer has held on to this for far too long. They don't have to be close brothers but maybe understand that as adults the kids things don't matter anymore. Their grandfather's house is being renovated and will be far different than when they were kids. Maybe they can bring their family together with the house? Oh and what about the secret space??? What are they going to do with it? I will tell you again I love this story! Next chapter please!!

Took me two days to read all of the chapters. I think this is your best story yet!

Worth the wait!

Absolutely love this story! It kept my interest from the begging to the end.

OMG it is almost comical! AMAZING!!

Now I am intrigued with November! It caught my interest in the begging which will keep me reading!

What a great ending!

Now that is caring about your kid!! The growth in Kev, Glen, and the kids is really coming along.

I love this whole story. However I am waiting to see if Jexon ever finds a love interest?? Is he and Marcus a thing? I noticed Aggie was interested, but Jexon put that to rest in a hurry. I also noticed in this chapter how Pete was checking him out. However Pete is too young so it really has been good to see what is his actual type or will he just stay alone?

Oh how we wait! This wait is only a few steps away to lunch. However what is the answer to the five million questions? So I will wait until the next chapter to answer at least one. Excitement is building to read more!!!

Love this story! Excited to see where it goes!

I am so excited for the next chapter. I will wait!!!