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Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
Throughout the comments left behind, I've said I appreciate all forms of feedback. It's through feedback that we become better authors. I appreciate you sticking up for me @wb22860, but it's not needed at the moment. I welcome all comments, positive or critical. All I request is an overall positive interaction in our community. I hope you've been enjoying the series thus far! -
Thanks for commenting, @Yeoldebard! Wolves use their numbers and hunting tactics to catch deer, but in a pure speed test, deer are superior. Kara just might have wanted a new running partner, or see if her gift of running shoes were for the right person. All aboard the Arric/Kieran ship cruiseliner! Honk Honk! At least he had a mental breakdown and realized it, instead of accepting and continuing. I'm so happy you're enjoying this! This has been such a fun project, and I'm glad I plunged into this little world.
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Shea took off, following Arric and Walter. His wolf's pride was riding high. I am one of the pack leaders now! Following the white wolf without question, he surveyed the area in front of him. He spotted a few non-shifter rabbits along the way, but kept to the direction. No more hunting. Especially now I have my mate. Thinking of Cyn, he only wished to be running with the cernunnos. Kara, Jaime, and Orson have him. No one would dare land a paw on my Cyn! A huff from Walter pierced his
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I love how Axel is the debate king! It makes perfect sense, and it's just the funniest. I can only imagine some of the things he has to say and how he words them. Adam's new position and "partner" has me somewhat worried. Chad stated he's used to getting what he wants, and I'm concerned he's being corrupted like his predecessors. With this worry, I fear with Adam's access to the Council's network and data filing systems that something bad will happen. On the bright side of thinking, if Chad's a good boy, I'd dig this 'ship! And I mean 'ship! If Chad was attracted to Adam on first sight, then they might be more than just friends. Great chapter, Grumpy!!
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
I forkin' love your comments, Philippe! This was so analytical! I enjoy reading these so much. -
This was a fun read! Like Jeremiah, I don't handle storms very well on the account of having my parents' home destroyed by a tornado when I was little. A lovely prompting, Val!
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Timok not reporting testing information? I smell a baddie! Neejah'al. I'm elated we have a replacement for Four Arms. Wonderful work, Cia!!!
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Are we to expect an interspecies threesome in the future? I certainly hope so! I loved Adam's innate ability to organize. He seems like the type of guy who would have it. I am concerned that Chad might abuse Adam's ability for his own laziness. All of the cubs need extra parental supervision involving the internet. Also, has it been stated if any of the supporting cast obtained any of the new cubs? Another wonderful chapter, Grumpy!
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Lovin' your comments, Onim! I'm hammering away as much as possible. Just got home from the first day at my new job, so I got an hour or two before I head to bed. Almost have a chapter for both stories finished up. ❤️ -
Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
It's all good, take your time reading! I love McAlpha, and I can't wait to bring some of his charisma to this series. Thanks for commenting, Clancy! -
Another great chapter, for both Adam and Axel, and Alexei!
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Hmm, looking for something to worry about? Time to get writtin'... I'm happy you're enjoying the ride, mikedup! Thanks for commenting! Skulduggery! I had to look that one up, but very accurate. I'm excited to get into Ty's investigation... -
Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
I do not envy possible future owners. Thanks for reading, Dad! Glad you had fun! -
Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
I wanted this scene to be meaningful, and I'm glad I was able to accomplish that. Vincent has plenty of support when it comes to alpha-wolfiness. I'm sure Ty, Lei, and Mason will be able to teach our hero about how to utilize his stature. I loved this comment, and I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. -
Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Whaaat? Future drama? I don't know what you're talking about... Cyrus' ability to plot amuses me. I can only imagine what the Lightning Panda has in store. I love your impatience, Patch! More stuff is coming along. -
Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
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The next week was rough for Mason. He knew Vincent wasn't hurt or anything, but watching him move around like an elderly grandmother was unsettling. His wolf wanted nothing more than to force the mage to stop. It's necessary. He has to learn it, or risk being exposed to possible foes. No like. I don't like it either, but he's improving. His mom hadn't given Vincent any slack. The first few days were gentle, but then the whip was cracked. Weeks flew by and Vincent's pacing g
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Axel's story is riveting, and I can't wait for more! With tragedy and devastation left, I'm scared to learn of Igor's fate.
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Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
I didn't take it as snarky. Expressing emotion, particularly in a comment section, can be difficult. I've been very appreciative of your comments, and I'll continue to be so. Like I said before, i welcome all kinds of feedback. I try to be careful with words, but my editors keep pointing out misuse from time to time. -
Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
I've said it countless times. I love writing for Cyrus! In regards to my spelling of tuchus, when writing it, I consulted the internet. https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/tuchus I'm assuming using the "u" instead of "a" is the English iteration. -
Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
Yep, there's a lot going on, just like the real world! In regards to Mesker Park being an "orphan pack," it's unclaimed territory; no one's claimed it before. Cyrus was a fixer for packs, but with him taking NYSP, he won't have time to work for the EC. I'm unaware of the all-peaceful place in fiction, but I imagine it's somewhere between the baby books and young adult books. Without conflict, there would be no plot, at least in my opinion. -
Learning of Axel's history is simply fascinating. I foresee some relationship issues with Adam being a blabbermouth though. Another wonderful chapter, Grumpy!
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Prompt 774 - Proper Path
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 774 - Proper Path
I love these prompts! It can take a minute to find one that speaks to me, but they're so much fun! Glad you're liking them, Patch. -
Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 892 - Wiler's House
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Reader! I was in a way of sorts when I learned Comicfan passed. It was a few days before the announcement I posted this, and although I never had a personal conversation with him (outside of LPW), the news hit me hard. The first prompt I responded to would be one of the final ones we would see from him. It helps me knowing you believe Comicfan would approve of Wiler's House. For those who open the fridge must have a curious mind. Did the relatives of Mrs. Wiler have the sense of cleaning it out after her passing, or no? That's the thieves' gamble. All minds must go to strange places when wondering about the contents of an abandoned house's fridge, and even stranger places for the freezer. -
Prompt 774 - Proper Path
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Prompt 774 - Proper Path
Thanks for reading, Gary! This was a super fun prompt to write with. I'll probably turn this into a small series later down the road.
