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A loud commotion erupted outside of the room. Jaime and Kara were the first to their feet, positioning themselves in front of the second bed. Cyn rose from the bed. His heart pumped with fear. Wha- What’s going on? A silhouette flashed in front of him and from the scent, he instantly knew it was Shea. The deer's eyes darted to Kara, who silently grabbed a handgun from her duffel bag. The three lycan looked at each other, only for Shea to hold up a closed fist. Both men withdrew their pisto
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Old Friends, New Revelations
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in Old Friends, New Revelations
*gasp* I KNEW IT!!! Joshua was Jay! I forkin' knew it! So Mike is beyond interested in Mr. Bear... very interesting. -
Battle Plans and Reinforcements
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in Battle Plans and Reinforcements
Those two are braver than I. Uh-uh! I couldn't do cold water like that. While the water was chilly, the scene was steamy! Might as well get as much action in before the life-threatening mission. Great chapter! -
I don't know how I glossed over this concept...
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This chapter was touching, to say the least. To have Gunnar flash back to "one of his previous lives" was a trip! Having people around the area that may recognize him is concerning, but I'm sure our werebear can handle it. Wonderful chapter.
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Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
Thanks for this comment, Patch! I knew as I wrote about Cyrus' navy blue eyes, you and Philippe would get excited for the Electric Panda. Thanks for commenting, centex! I think Tierney backed down due to being in Cyrus' condo and he hadn't seen the blue irises before. To see them and everyone's hair stand from the electricity would be a frightening sight. Mason just needed a swift kick in the tushie. He and Vincent are doing just fine... I wonder how they'll handle potty training... I doubt Stefan has interests in New York, but who knows... Blasphemous! They are delicious! Broccoli is equally delicious! I dash mine with some ranch seasoning and I'll eat it all. I wonder if Mason will hold Vincent accountable for mowing the lawn? -
Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
Listen, if I had to choose between a hot dog and some stir-fried mushrooms, I'm going with the mushrooms every single time! Vinsy probably had his own agenda to get both toddlers to eat their veggies. I have not been around a lot of kids in my life, and this has created an innate fear of them. (my opinion...) They're incredibly unpredictable, and their vocabulary is not exempt. The things I heard this past weekend from a defiant toddler... I'd say THE DEconstruction. What's with this story and moles?!?! -
Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Lowe's Lair
I'm really happy with this chapter! I was so nervous about writing for Lowe for such a lengthy period of time considering I have not been around a lot of kids Lowe's age. Luckily, I went on a weekend mini-vaca to see some friends and I hung out with their kiddo. The behaviors and speech patterns were completely on point. Who knows what that New York businessman is thinking! Who knows what else will come out of Snyder's mouth? Who knows what will happen next? ... Your author knows.- 26 comments
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Tierney, Kaplan, and Dirk walked from their parking spot a few blocks from Cyrus' condo. Over the years, he became accustomed to the bear's preference of nabbing an opening when possible. Still, we passed a few options for closer parking. Upon reaching the destination, the trio found Wagner waiting in the lobby. "Alex." With passing humans nearby, the lower-ranked lycan discreetly bared his neck, "Sirs. If I may ask, was there a reason my charges weren't mentioned?" The council looked
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Follow-up thought, don't mean to comment again but I can't help my fingies. Correct me if I'm mistaken, but was there mention that pack pets could be purchased? If so, I'm under the assumption Gunnar has some serious money if his Papa has all these properties. I would have asked for a price, but that's me thinking...
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I'm thinking Gunnar is a sneaky bear. He'll do his best to avoid confrontation against such a large pack. I also don't think he'll get the ladies involved in this mess; he'd be beside himself if one gets hurt. Looking forward to seeing Gunnar's plan!
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This made my night! I have no words for this comment.
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In Which Many Things are Revealed in the Backroom
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in In Which Many Things are Revealed in the Backroom
I'm surprised more patrons weren't eyeballing Gunnar with his out-of-place manners. It goes to prove that Gunnar is Mike knight in shining armor-to be. Excellent chapter. -
A lot of details and information with this chapter. I'm interested in the symbolism of the bands and Garjah's insistence on having Essell wear them. They must mean a lot more considering there is deeper symbolism on how they are worn and on what arms. I'll put five bucks on this...
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Do I need to send Cyrus and Kaplan a message? There might be some hidden feelings for various reasons. Kieran may be the smartest person in the pack, but boy is he dopey...
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Chapter 22: Virulent Voices
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Virulent Voices
I love this comment! I think you're going to find Vincent's wolf (commonly referred to as VincentW in the comments) is acting like a puppy, but has more adult intentions. -
Mike keeps getting put in stickier situations. Hopefully, Gunnar will be on the way to save the day... Good writing, keep it up!
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She-Wolves and Fundamentalists
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in She-Wolves and Fundamentalists
This was a much needed chapter for pacing reasons. Very well written and it was a blast to read! I can only hope the She-Wolves make a reappearance, perhaps when Gunnar takes Mike away from the Silver Bullet... -
For a literal know-it-all, Kieran needs to open his eyeballs. I wonder how long Arric's been hiding these emotions... Thanks for commenting, Patch!
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All the days are the same for this overnight grocery stocker! Every day is a teasing day. Ha! What makes you think trouble's on its way?
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The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep
astone2292 commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in The Woods are Lovely, Dark and Deep
This is a very interesting turn of events. Nick was Kane's proverbial pet before Mike, causing Kane's swaying interest. The alpha may have dastardly intentions for Mike, but at least our human may consider him an ally, of sorts. I can only hope Gunnar will come in at some point and save the day. Great work so far! -
All of the new findings were relayed to Arric and the surrounding pack leaders. From the receipts found in the abandoned truck, it was obvious the rogues were staying in Green Bay. Ken made a list of the places and had several officers canvas the businesses for statements. "Since these rogues are y'all's pack, I'll let Claude decide when to bring it up to SFBI. I recommend now so they can assist in the manhunt." Shea agreed. "Yeah, I'll call Arric." The wolf turned away with his phone.
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Another well-written and brutal chapter. Hopefully after this night, things will look up for Mike.
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Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
astone2292 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
Patch!!!! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm sure we'll see Cyrus' magic in a chapter or two... -
NSFW warning. I'm unashamed to say my appreciation for Bo Burnham, especially his new special, Inside, on Netflix. One of the two songs I've listened to nonstop for the past thirty-six hours. Edit: From the cackle leading into the third part of the song, I'm not afraid to throw Bo's name in the running to play The Joker in a future Batman movie.
