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Thanks for commenting, WolfM! The supernatural is still a secret to the general human population, but you can always find information at your local library. Well, this story is complete. I'm still working on Rising in the Shadows, then I'll get started on Death in the Shadows. Then... It'll be done. Anywho, glad you are liking the story!

Thanks for commenting, centex! I'm excited the scenes was up to standard! I think completing the bond is what Vincent needed before handling all of the upcoming land-related issues. Cyrus finds his investigative duties are not yet finished. Rumors can easily be ignored, but these seem pretty damning.

Vincent was jostled awake. What in Dinbe’s name was that? He craned his neck and saw Mason squirming. Prepared to rise and assist his mate, Vincent halted as the larger man sighed and resumed his peaceful slumber. Rolling his eyes, he dipped into the shadows to leave the bed and reemerged in the kitchen. From the oven’s digital clock, it was quarter after three in the morning. He grabbed a bottle of water from the fridge and sipped. I must have fallen asleep early. I’m pretty energized! Us

Alternating POVs between two primary characters is a solid move, and won't go out of style anytime soon. I'm happy to hear you've broken your "posting" mold. You picked a fine site with a strong community.

We're introduced to another character, whose problems may not be as severe as Mike's, still problematic nevertheless. Looking forward to the next installment.

I agree, great start. This is well-written and there's enough plot to leave the reader wanting more. I'm interested in this world you've built, considering the human, Mike, knows of the existence of Lycan. Most shifter stories don't do this, so I appreciate a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!

As a Kentuckian, I've had to do my fair share of research involving Sheboygan and Wisconsin. I was pleasantly surprised at their summer tourism crowd and some similarities in speech patterns as my area. Lots of suss on Baxter being a replacement third member for Eike's group. Very interesting... I like Ken. He's going to be a blast to write for in the coming chapters. A deer's senses are slightly more acute than a wolf's, so I'm thinking Shea is underestimating his own abilities now that Cyn's been one-upping him. Ken's egging isn't helping much. MIS6? Also pronounced with a silent S... This made me giggle. I'm curious how he would find Eike and Hauser. Also, you garnered a second giggle for the word, "douchery."

Doc, your comments are golden. INTERSPOL?! That's just hilarious! I imagine there'd be several extended branches of services throughout the world to involve the supernatural. SCIA (pronounced see-eye-ay since the s would be silent) comes to mind. I'm trying my best weekly chapters. Every now and then, they might be a day off, but I really appreciate this comment

Shea woke to his phone's nearly silent alarm. He reached over and instinctively hit the snooze button. Just a few more minutes. Returning his arm to its rightful place, he held Cyn in place. "Sheamus?" The sweet voice broke the silence. Grumbling, the wolf peeked at the back of Cyn's head, "Yeah?" "Are we getting up?" "In a little bit. The bed's too comfy and I want to keep holding you." It had been several days since he slept in his own bed. Having his boyfriend with him w

I think xenophobia has already appeared. The passing comments concern me, but the fact the Kardoval want to meet Essell is the attention-grabber for me. While Garjah says there is no harm, I'm not so sure. Another grabber for me was Garjah's dismay for not having Essell ask him for food. “We are bonded. What you need, I will provide.” I am to assume there is a sense of reliance for the bondmates with the Four-Arms. Garjah must feel the need to serve his mate, and I'm guessing Essell will either feel that need or is to be expected to pull his weight soon. This story is gaining plot traction and I can't wait for more!

I'm putting this in the top five comments I've ever gotten.

Forgive me, I was very sleepy when commenting earlier. I don't think Stuerm would be stupid enough to challenge. It seems everyone's in favor of Bartlett and Ashford. Maybe Cyrus is waiting to play his cards... Lots of relationship progress going on! We'll definitely meet all the interested parties. Thanks for commenting, centex! A lot is going on, and moves will be made. If you're referring to McCabe and Bartlett wanting distant lands, a change in scenery might be the answer, but we'll have to wait and see. An interesting point regarding the EC! Is the government biased? Who knows? Next chapter will be coming in a week or so. Just gotta be patient @Philippe...

Thanks for commenting, and glad you like the chapter! I think Mason and Vincent will always be horny for one another. That may be a negative, but I don't think Stuerm would be willing to face Ashford if it came down to a fight. He's got to be something fierce if the Electric Panda has the willies... Oh, no doubt! I think that's Vincent's goal: be as diplomatic as possible, but rub some dirt in Stuerm's eyes for being a dink.

I'm glad you liked everything that happened in this chapter! I know there was a lot to digest, but we're in the second half of the book. Time to spice things up a bit! In regards to your P.S., I'm so happy I can help take the insanity away, even for a brief moment! The next few chapters are in editing, but statements like that make me want to post them with reckless abandon. Try to hold on until next week, buddy! Getting a wee bit personal, I generalized a group of people in my life and created this character, Stuerm. They are obviously wrong, but in their mind, they will always be both right and correct. From their life views and opinions, to butting their way into the spotlight. Now, now. Don't count Remis out! Let's wait for their meetings to see the new faces. But Mason and Vincent have to do something before they take another step forward... well... two things. Oh, Patch! You're making me blush! And oh jeez... another side-story for the In the Shadows universe added to my "to-do" list. They keep piling up and I don't know which one to do first! 😫 I need to make a numbered list and roll a die when this, Cernunnos, and my next secret project is done.

His. I’m his! A euphoric sensation flooded Kaplan’s chest. Staring into the shiny emerald eyes gave him a sense of worth. Cyrus wants me to be his! The lycan scoured the half-naked man atop of him. He’s so much bigger than me! Power and authority just oozes from his body. Reaching up, he put a hand on the white tattooed bicep. He watched the green eyes glow brighter as their skin made contact, “Cy?” Hearing his name forced a low rumble to echo in the panda’s chest. My bear, what do we do he

I'm still waiting for the "Hot and Bothered" reaction on GA. You go, Essell! Hopefully, Essell will calm down around other people now. Again, great chapter, Cia!

Oh, there are plenty of firsts left to go! I wonder which ones he will tackle next. Val! Don't you think our heroes deserve a day off, particularly Cyn? He's been busy understanding things since day one. I'm surprised his head hasn't popped. Eike and dingus will get their dues. Things will fall into place soon enough. Thank you, Patch! I don't think there will be any lightning here, but I like the idea. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Oh, Cyn would be such a Disney fan! Although, he might be a little critical over Bambi. Teehee!

Riding in the car became one of Cyn’s favorite activities. The rushing scenery through the windows captivated him for the duration of the car ride. Everything flies by so fast! It’s much faster than when I run as a deer. Several minutes passed before Cyn had the wherewithal to ask Shea where they were going. He was right, I could use a nap right now. The lycan’s hand fell on Cyn’s, instantly putting a smile on the deer’s face, “We’re heading to my apartment. I know we could head back to Ar

Vincent does use his GPS to get to some places, although he can't accurately use it since it probably can't keep up. Google Maps would say. "What?! Two states in less than a minute?" The author must research and ponder.

Interesting! But, Vincent hasn't even met Stuerm yet. Let's see how a meeting between them will go.

Oh, boy. We don't need Vincent fighting alphas left and right and amassing more land... I am interested in seeing where y'all think the story is going to go. Oooooh! Sneaky! I like this.

After reading Running with the Pack numerous times, I finally decided to read the next story in the series. Chris, in the first book, caught my attention numerous times as a villainous character. Utilizing him as a main character through a journal gave me trepidation before committing to a thorough read. This journal dives deep into a young man's flaws in decision-making. It dives further when he realizes those flaws. Diving further, he comes to terms of why he made those choices, and how he can begin the healing process. The author's research is impeccable, and the understanding of depression is something to revere. I loathed the concept of taking the point-of-view of a despicable character from the first story, but the entries turned my opinion quickly and abruptly. Wholesome. While Chris' journey in recovery is filled with self-hate and other psychological conundrums, I can not find a better word to describe this adventure. I personally believe there is no one stronger than someone who has been broken, but then rebuilds themselves. Prior to my former belief written above, Chris is a deserving character who needed to have his story told, even if there are others from the first book who could have theirs told instead. If any RwtP fan hasn't continued the series, you must. This journal is intense, more than I gave it credit for when I viewed the summary page. Like the reviews below, I recommend this story, and I am kicking myself for not starting it sooner.

True, but our heroes want what they want. Perhaps our shadow mage is going to use it for power in another way... Kaplan and Cyrus are forking adorable! Hehe! I'm glad you've claimed this chapter as yours, Patch. If anything more happens when you "go gray," I might start to worry about you. Umm, Philippe? Gonna say it again: I love your comments! Vincent's always been the lonely wanderer, never owning much. Now with a whole city, he's lost and must turn to his friends. Cyrus' panda seems to have turned adventurous as of late. His human mind surely sees how fast he is falling for the attorney, compared to his previous statements.

I wouldn't use the term, "intolerant." More suiting words will come around soon enough... I'm sure this concept of Vincent ridding himself of the territory will become a hot debate in the comment section. I know I'd be looking to get rid of a city if it dropped in my lap. I got books to write, I ain't got time for that!

Vincent stared at the extended manila envelope. The severity of his fight with the Alpha came crashing down. I...I have the territory? Breathing heavier, the mage fluttered his eyes as he tried to understand Bylus’ statement. I now have...all of Mesker Park City. That...dwarfs Owensville! He looked to Mason for guidance but saw that his mate was going through the same emotions. Mace...is scared? I’ve never seen him scared before! I...I don’t want it. I don’t want the territory! No like! No