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You'll just have to read the next couple of chapters to find out whether Kemi is successful or not!
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Good point made there at the end. Thread won't start falling for several months at this point. Hiking across the mountains to Benden is a risky prospect made still more dangerous when Thread is around.
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All will be revealed in the next couple of chapters. There are a few to go yet!
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Thank you. It's always good to know someone has been introduced to a new genre.
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The hardest part for Kemi will be getting away from the Hold. Jevikel and Kadin are often sent out and about to work, so it would be much easier for them and more time before anyone missed them. But as you will discover, there are other problems, too.
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I’m afraid you'll have to wait and see about that. 😉
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Their nearest Weyr is Benden. At this point in time (towards the end of the Long Interval) Benden is the only Weyr on Pern. It's totally not fair to either Jevikel or Gatri, which is why he was trying to let her down lightly. Everyone deserves better than Pinnacle Hold!
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The first night at the Hold after being up in the hills always felt strange. Getting used to the chatter of folk after the silence; the closeness of walls, no matter that it was still warm enough for the doors and shutters to be open. This time, there was something else; the need to conceal his relationship with Kadin. Long before they’d begun to drive the herds back toward the Hold, Jevikel had discussed what they must do. ‘Everyone knew you and I didn’t get on before we left. Now, it woul
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Coming from what is effectively Pern's version of a city is the reason why Kadin is better educated and informed about the world. It may well be that the larger Holds such as Bitra are more tolerant than those small, tucked away in the back of beyond places such as Pinnacle,
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Glad you're enjoying it. There are plenty of twists and turns to come as the story unfolds.
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Such a touching chapter. Ned knows what he must do and that there is no way they can escape their destined roles in the ritual. The description of the old settlement, the hot day and those fleeting hours of pleasure were beautifully written. I hope Peter is right and they will find each other again (presumably at the end of Ned's long life).
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Colin is one of those people you find in every job; they bitch about the company, the people they work with and how life has treated them unfairly. As for whether he is capable of taking action, you'll have to wait and see.
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Glad it's keeping you guessing.
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Yes, Dan is sensitive to the feeling over the well, and so must a few of the customers as there is wear in the carpet where they subconsciously avoid stepping over it. Colin's never got over Jenny choosing Trevor instead of him. Colin has a lot of issues.
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I don't know why, but I'd been expecting a phone call from the cinema on Thursday. Perhaps Colin wouldn't turn up for work, or something would go wrong during the day? But it obviously hadn't and my day off remained undisturbed. I wasn't sure if this was good or bad. It's a nice feeling, being indispensable. Therefore it was Friday lunchtime before I was due back at work, which meant I had sufficient time to pay another visit to the library and check my emails. I did my share of hovering be
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It's a mash up of 'The Sound of Music' and as @centexhairysubpointed out, 'Brokeback Mountain'.
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I've just finished reading Never Rest by Marshall Thornton. It's described as a modern take on Frankenstein but it could equally well fit in with the zombie genre. It's told in the 1st person POV of a 19 year old gay guy dying of leukemia. His mother is so desperate to save his life she signs him up for a very questionable experimental treatment. As he gradually realizes exactly what has been done to him he is also falling in love with another of the patients, Goth, a boy who is dying of cystic fibrosis. There are some truly horrible and memorable moments in this book and the ending will leave you thinking for a long time.
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This chapter takes place the Turn before Thread starts to fall. So in terms of Benden Weyr, R'gul is still Weyrleader as Ramoth hasn't risen to mate yet.
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Kadin has had the advantage of an education in Bitra; not just learning the ballads by rote, but also able to discuss them with the Harper who taught him. Jevikel's granny only taught the parts she remembered and education isn’t exactly prized in Pinnacle Hold if it's got no practical application. It's going to be very tricky for them back at the Hold, especially given their age and the whole first love experience.
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Very poetic!
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mawgrim commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Love the excitement of posting a new story. Think I’m going to go back and re-read 'Boss Nanny' now as well!- 57 comments
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Any sympathy he felt dispersed over the next few days. He’d been attempting to show Kadin the basics of beast care around the Hold before they were sent off into the hills. Having someone along who had no idea would be worse than having to cope alone. Kadin just didn’t seem to listen. Worse, Jevikel had come to the conclusion he was doing it purely to irritate him, perhaps to see how far he could be pushed. He didn’t like it. A part of him still felt sorry for his cousin - for the whole sco
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There definitely seems to be cause and effect in practice. If the sacrifice is made, everyone stays well; if they don't provide what Mithras wants, people die. Mithras is obviously a powerful entity, possibly this new planet's equivalent to our Mother Earth and in the past our own ancestors used to appease gods with human sacrifices. I'm hoping we learn more about what happens to those who are chosen.
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The dream could have been prompted by Terry's imagination going to work on all the facts he's unearthed so far. Or it might have been something else...
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Maurice has moments of clarity and Terry feels a bit sorry for him. His main problem is going to be working out how much of what Maurice says is reliable information.
