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Rita is definitely up to something. She’s got away with it in the past and is assuming she can pull the same tricks again. Hopefully, Rick will see through her schemes.
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I’m getting worried about Beryl, but glad that Kevin and Steve are now together.
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F’drun got knocked back after the failed mating flight with Prideth and Ryth's injury, but now he’s finding new ways to gain influence. T'bor not being a very strong Weyrleader is good for him in Southern.
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‘Mark my words, there’s going to be trouble.’ R’feem refilled the cups with fresh klah. D’gar and B’lin were both in his weyr for a meeting. ‘No-one’s pleased about that mess-up in Southern, least of all the Weyrleader.’ B’lin picked up his cup. ’So what are they going to do? Abandon the place again?’ ‘That’d be the most sensible course, but then Prideth would have to come back here and I’m told that both Ramoth and Lessa are very much against sharing their Hatching Sands with that one.’
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Perfect Halloween fare to give me nightmares.
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Really interesting opening chapter.
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Very perceptive comments.
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Find out in the next chapter!
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‘It was the dragons who warned us. I mean, there were a couple of folk on duty watching the north-eastern approaches, but the dragons got restless before anyone even saw anything.’ H’rek still sat on the firestone sacks next to D’gar. B’lin and F’nor had just joined them. D’gar had no doubt that F’nor would report everything back to the Weyrleader. Tell Rioth to tell H’rek not to drop anyone in it. We aren’t alone now. Will do. Herebeth blew water from his nostrils as if in acknowledgem
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Mauder on the Dance Floor
Mawgrim commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Mauder on the Dance Floor
Really glad Kevin owned up about Maude. Yes, he's definitely learned water and electricity don’t mix. Seems like everyone in the household are becoming more honest with each other. -
Great card.
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Heinrich senior is ostensibly retired but just doesn’t want to let go - either of the business or of Rick’s life. I can get why Rick doesn’t want to stir things up with his dad, but sooner or later he will have to make a stand or never get out and live his own life.
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Suderoth’s clutch of twenty-three eggs raised everyone’s spirits, coming almost two sevendays after Valli and Kadoth had gone between. One of the eggs had the unmistakeable golden sheen that meant there was a young queen dragon inside. ‘And thank goodness for that.’ Agarra carried on chopping root vegetables, the knife flashing as she worked. Sitting in the kitchen took D’gar back to his younger days. Life had been so much simpler then. ‘That should shut them all up.’ After Valli had gon
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I was wondering this all through the chapter and waiting for the moment when Kevin realised Steve had uploaded the wrong video. Pleased that it turned out the way it did, thought.
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D’gar woke, alone again, save for Herebeth’s sleeping presence at the back of his mind. Not quite the same as having H’rek sharing his bed, but reassuring in that at least there was someone in his life who would never leave him. He could do this, he told himself. He’d coped before, after S’brin died. At least H’rek was still alive and well. At least there was the possibility, however remote it might seem right now, that he would come back. Threadfall today. A late one, which he always hated.
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“NO!” they said in unison
Mawgrim commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in “NO!” they said in unison
This is really taking some unexpected turns. Can’t wait to find out what happens next? Will gran relent? Will Kevin manage to lure Jason into his room? -
I Don’t Need Your Protection
Mawgrim commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Don’t Need Your Protection
Gran is definitely being mean. Just because she's annoyed with Daniel she's chucking Jason and Colleen out. Hopefully this was a knee-jerk reaction and she'll reconsider once she's had a chance to think about it. -
Really hope Kevin doesn't post that on YouTube.
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Anne and Todd McCaffrey already did it in 'Sky Dragons'. I have also read a few fanfics where green dragons lay eggs as a result of not being given firestone early enough to stop this happening. I'm not sure if it's reversible - once they've had sufficient firestone bang goes the chance to breed.
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Well, I’ve caught up now and can’t wait to read more. You have a real talent for description, both of places and situations. Just hope the boys have a smoother ride from now on as they've both suffered a lot of trauma in their lives so far.
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Very perceptive.
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A well written story with believable characters. I like the way you have transitioned smoothly between the present and flashbacks to what previously happened as the story develops.
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Thank you. That means a lot to me.
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I was wiping away tears as I was writing it.
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Rita is the sort of person who has to try and change everything and everyone. She's definitely using Rick as a way to get her scheme underway, regardless of the consequences. Still, at least he's met the piano teacher again.
