Seraph28
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You have surprised us a day earlier.. I really had hoped we wouldn't encounter death till further ahead . .. Thanks for the serving as usual.. and can't wait for the next offering
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This is definitely a slow burn tale and am all for it.. hihi Going to wait restlessly for the next offering..
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I like this .... a lot .. thanks for this offering. I will wait anxiously for next Thursday. hihi
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I will echo Drown's comment from before.. it's really a compelling start... I for one look forward to this adventure you getting us started on.. Thank you.. If you don't mind me asking.. is there going to be a posting schedule like say a chapter a week or something like that?
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Why must you always torture us?hahaha....this is really awesome..I personally like how you have structured the story in that we get a perspective of each of the main characters .Thank you!
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First let me let that last part settle in..haha... Well Marsha is turning out to be a pest...damn... As for Elliot he really is in a bad place at the moment...so much angst there...Hopefully it will be resolved soon. Thanks as usual Take care!
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I have been remiss in my feedback lately..in my defence...life has been crazy. haha.. I am in awe of Zain...you have literally created a character that is both powerful.and vulnerable...and am all for it... I had to re read the last part thrice just so was sure my mind is working well..hihi That cliff hanger is unlike anything ever seen before...can't wait long enough for the next offering.. Take care
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Damn..Zain has got sass?lol.. Thank you for this update!... Blessed week ahead!
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consider me your new follower..haha..thanks... just started this..and will be looking forward to your offerings
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I ran out of what to say anymore @Demuirge.haha.. You have taken us on a wonderful ride in this universe through these books and I for one couldn't be anymore pleased. You deserve your long awaited break. Thank you. I speak for myself that I will still be here waiting should you one day get a stroke of inspiration to delve into this world once more..haha. Blessed September and weekend to yours truly!
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This chapter must have been hard for you to write.I mean to get into the minds of Alauis siblings at that particular point must have been really really testing.I for one thank you all the more of it. Thank you and blessed September to you !
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Finally get to check in with our beloved crazy family..haha...It's been a while. This chapter is excellent in that it helps us get to check in with our other crazy family members and get to know what they are going through. On a sad note,I feel sad that Wyn is getting jaded so young.I guess when you realise that people you placed on pedestal,people that you thought we're infallible are just normal and flawed,it can totally throw you back. Thanks for the update@ Demuirge
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I agree with the opinion from a few chapters back..Regardless of the fact they are our heroes,they are a pathetic lot indeed.haha
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Teenage angst is such a beast..!. hormones over power rationale with the end result being a lot of chaos. I just hope Seth finds his way out of this emotional labyrinth he finds himself in!
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Damn..what a cliff hanger!..hihi. Thanks for the update
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Chapter 1: Welcome to Mateo's world.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Welcome to Mateo's world.
Damn....what a sad new start!. That's one gilded cage our protagonist is in.. Thanks for this..had been a while since I last 'paid a visit' to your universe. haha Blessed weekend! -
I guess that answers my question..haha
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Thanks for the update...hehe just curious...am I the only one who is not on team KyaPer(Kyan+Perry)..?just asking..no lobbing off my head..please?😂😆😆
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Damn...it's one of those instances where life is really unfair...really. Being almost 24 with kids,widowed and not employed..That must be a lot for one to take in
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For the first time since I came across this universe....am left without words to say.haha. I had to read this chapter thrice just to make sure I was not imagining our Little prodigy Meep had really done all that. You would think the enemies had by now learnt that messing with this family never ends well..but they just keep coming like cockroaches from wherever ..and the family is ever so grateful to drive the lesson home.. I am with @Geemeedee ,we don't care how long this is.. haha. We hope your inspiration doesn't waver and you keep on 'unleashing your magical ink'. I for one will keep anxiously waiting on you . 🤗 Take care!
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I can only say thank you..Father Alfred is who a person dealing with angst should talk to.haha
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@Stellar....thanks for this update. been checking here almost everyday for any updates. The encounter between the herald and Shay's group reminded of that scene in Black Knight...the one where the joker was telling Bruce Wayne/Batman about what happens when an immovable force meets an unstoppable object. It takes some sort of fortitude to really have an opponent like Shay and his group are facing in the Herald..The thing just keeps coming and coming.Anybody else would have surrendered already. Konstatatin has always been an astute person..I guess one has to be if you are in charge of being your race's defence against annihilation. Thanks really for this update...will keep my fingers crossed for the next offering...Blessed weekend ahead
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Reading this chapter brought back the lyrics of that Christina Perri song.The one called human.I guess we all are deeply flawed beings underneath ..even the ones that appear to be strong and have all their shit in proper place. This chapter,to me, is really a study in the intricacies of human relationships ...They are messed up most of the time ...and yet they always have a significant impact in our lives. I guess all am saying you have become sort of a teacher in some ways@Demuirge..hihi. Anyway...am just glad that my favourite babies(Meep and Suman),after the dynamic trio(Eon,Kalian and Talon) are getting some 'more strong love lately🤣🤣.. Thank you!
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You would think by now Talon and Eon had grown on each other...it seems they are both acquired tastes for each other..hahaha.. Thanks as usual @Demuirge
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Thank you for this latest offering..Is Vanus ever going to get a break?
