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"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
I actually like it. I usually re-read a chapter twice since this is pretty subtle work to discern in one go.Your dissections help me understand better. Among CasualWanderer82's body of work, this is the most cerebral piece he has produced. For folks like you who have had the fortune of reading Freud and Jung, this is pretty easy to understand😃 -
Personally,I would suggest that you use what you feel works for you.It will be good either way since it's a stand alone story .
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"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
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"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
You are doing it again;that wonderful thing of dissecting the chapter thoroughly.I for one am all for it.I know it's a ride but are we 'allowed' to get in-universe and just smack that 'oaf' Adrian😃.Not that I condone violence but he really could use a psyche adjustment of sort . -
"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
I was thinking along the same wavelength regarding Adrian. I guess we will just have to wait and see since so far we only have Bobby and Nick's perspectives.We are yet to 'immerse' ourselves in Adrian's psyche so to speak . -
"Takes Three To Tango"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Takes Three To Tango"
For some reason,I feel like Adrian is just beyond help. Like he comes off like someone too oblivious,if that is even possible ,and self centered. At least that is to my understanding..Maybe yours differs -
"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
Blimey!..I think for this book..you have decided to outdo yourself with each preceding chapter😉😃.Each chapter ,so far, seems better than the previous one.I cannot help but feel as though am a fly on the wall, witnessing this story happen in real time..I am now wishing this ride never comes to an end .It is that phenomenal for me. Thank you for the update!..Blessed Day to you!- 31 comments
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"Takes Three To Tango"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Takes Three To Tango"
I am in total awe of how you dissected this chapter.Have always wanted to try Jung but always deemed it too cerebral for me...Now,you have given me impetus to finally get started on it . Thank you! -
"Takes Three To Tango"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Takes Three To Tango"
What on earth did I just read?..You must have had a hoot conceiving a character like Professor Nick Morrissey!..He is a scary person!..Reading this chapter made me think of Col.Hans Landa from Inglorious bestards . The raging storm under the veneer of polished calm.Soft-spoken,calm and yet dangerous. I never re-read stories but have had to re-read the first two chapters,and now this ,just so that can understand Nick. I must admit though it's so far an exercise in futility! On the other note...this story is somewhat educative and I would be loathe to admit it openly but I now understand why people cheat😃😉 -
"Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Well, has anything ever phased you before?😃.. If you do not mind my asking . ..what is the intended schedule for the updates? -
"Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Had to read it this chapter thrice ..the last part of it at least. That is an exercise in restraint ..eh. I read all your stories but for the first time ,even though it's just at the beginning, wish the main character would just leave,take the high road. Adrian and Bobby are despicable in my opinion and you have really written nasty characters over time.😉 .cheating is bad ,always been bad but to drug someone so that you can cheat is just ..plain evil . Thank you for the update....going to anxiously wait for the next offering. blessed day! -
What If You Like It Complicated?
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What If You Like It Complicated?
Just curious ...Is Jack speaking in a Brummie accent?.😉. Am never going to tire from thanking you for keeping Jack around..He is just so...motor mouthed.haha.. Thank you for the update! Blessed Sunday to you- 27 comments
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Is there such a thing as Beautiful angst?😃😉.Am asking because this is a full course meal of angst served beautifully. Imagine getting out of bed to get a notification to such a beautiful serving..Thanks for the update ..it has most definitely made my day! Blessed Friday to you!
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Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Seraph28 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
You must have missed the emoji at the end of it..that was meant in jest. Of course no one has a bearing on what and how @mastershakeme she writes. -
Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Seraph28 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Oh it's more than okay ..you worried for naught...I hope the next chapter is not crazy ..I seem to have noticed a pattern. When the previous chapter(s) are calm...then the preceding one(s) are anxiety inducers.😉 I for one am glad Keiran apologized to his brother .Thank you for the update!- 14 comments
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Beyond all Misunderstandings
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Beyond all Misunderstandings
Well ...this is definitely a fairy tale.. why is Danny refuting it😃. Thank you for the chapter.- 31 comments
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Good things come to those who wait....patiently I must add 😉😃
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Oh .My!.I am rendered thoughtless! .I had to read this thrice .It was that good an epilogue😉.. I take back my word.Even though our protagonists are in peril, introducing Prince Otello ,who is an astute fella at that, makes me somewhat relieved!. Dropping that familial bombshell of Josel's Uncle is icing on top of what was already a hot cake. Thank you Lupus!...Hopefully don't die of anxiety waiting for the 3rd series😃😃
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Whoa ..it's such a hoot getting an update !.It has been a while!. Hope you are fully recovered now? My question for today..Are there therapists in this universe?.😉.I am just asking because Lachlan really did a number on Keiran. Do not even get me started on the damage Oeus wrought on poor young Desmond and the Queen.That family has lots of trauma to deal with . Thank you for the update!
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I was just thinking the same too. He really could use some attitude adjustment...I know Lachlan was a jerk but he is long gone...so Keiran has no more reason being an asshole towards his young brother.
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Thank you!..I must admit that last bit of the chapter today had Jane Austen vibes..😀😃.
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Is it possible to swoon through reading a line?.haha...Because 'his heart beat with a precision of a machine,but Ryder was sure it could have skipped a beat' is just class A swoon material .😉.. Thanks for the update. Blessed week to you..
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Oh..you did not just go there!..You introduce a character who could be relatable,likeable and you off him like that.That is an unacceptable😀😉..More so during Easter holidays. Bashar reminds of a current head of state,who I shall not name, who uses big gestures to hide his inadequacy and ineptness!. Always blaming someone else for their failures .ring a bell?.haha Thank you for the update...though am gutted that just as we we learning about Malik ,he is offed.one good thing is at least now we know the magnitude of the fight that awaits our heroes. Will anxiously wait for Chapter 19!
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First, I want to say it's really great to have you back albeit in a somewhat limited capacity. Hopefully the pain is not as intense as before? Now that one hell of a way to enter a weekend!....that was a wonderful chapter....Glad you never killed of Ash. Blessed Friday to you
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I really hate it being a reader sometimes....we know Renn is dangerous but our heroes have no idea...it is one of those times where one would wish to enter the story and warn our protagonists😀.. Just curious, do you already have the next series already ?...I for one ..cannot wait Thanks for the update and here it to blessed Easter holidays
