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  1. Seraph28
    Oh yes...I must have forgotten to quote them .😆
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    Breaking Apart

    Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Breaking Apart

    Now is as good as confession time on my part. I only started following this story about a fortnight ago. I found it one day while browsing through your stories and binge read the first chapters to catch up. Each time I get a notification for chapter update..always have this in my mind...is Bunny boy going to finally reveal himself. You can imagine my personal frustration each time it doesn't happen😉😆😆... And my God....Jamie..eh..he is clueless much..haha
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    Whenever I get a new notification of a chapter update, am always excited for two reasons. The first being the chapter update ..and the other being your analytical breakdown of the chapter. The state of mind of the characters and their motivation at that particular point in each chapter update . Thank you!
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    You are devious...in a good way😆😉.Though now am filled with trepidation ..that the end of this journey is nigh.I do not want it to end but as all good things come to an end..I must get used to it. Thank you!
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    Chapter 1

    Seraph28 commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well..what a delightful way to wake up!..Am glad the new series did not take long like you had stated. I like how the dynamics of the group are evolving.I like that Danae was given prominence in this chapter.Now everyone has had their moment in the sun so to speak 😉 Is this one going to follow the same update schedule like the other two chapters? Thanks for the update!
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    You are something else!..Two chapters in the same day is just such a delight for me😀😉. This is such a poignant chapter of a story about the complexity of human emotion!.The previous chapter was just so bleak. I know it's just a story but personally for me reading is like going on a trip, sort of a journey .When you encounter something unpleasant along the way, it kind of kills the vibe..Look at me being melodramatic all of a sudden😆..Let me sign off lest I make a clown out of myself. Thanks for the update!
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    Personally...sometimes I skip the sex scenes...like this one...I knew what was coming the moment the paper rolls came out
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    So good to finally get another update.It had been so long I worried you had abandoned the story.What a way to come back!..A blood bath..eh. Thank you for the update!
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    You were right to add that trigger warning at the top of the chapter.This chapter is just so...dark and you have written dark before. Adrian is just an abyss ..there is nothing really there.. You ever read a character before and got the feeling that no amount of rehabilitation that character was put through would ever change your mind on that particular character?.Well Adrian is it for me. Thanks for the update !
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    Wouldn't that be a hoot😀
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    Eh...how on earth did you come to that conclusion?😀
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    Well...there was a warning before the chapter.😀..It definitely means we are about to be put through an emotional wringer in the upcoming chapters😀
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    I feel like this new story ,unlike the others,is going to be a case study of the human psyche!.You did after all give us fair warning in the beginning.Nothing is really as it seems
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    Chapter 6

    Seraph28 commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Blimey...now will have to wait anxiously for the resolution of that cliff hanger😉😀.... Thank you for the update!
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    Maybe you can try food but when it's pulverized.Take it like you starting anew...small portions of what you like with a serving of the fruits you like
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    Exactly...that's why was like am just so fed up of nefarious people messing with them
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    Oh at least lawyers are mostly competent.....these Fae ones are just terrible
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    More likely squeal ...they wouldn't want to have their nails dirty 😉
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    You have this knack for writing pretty detestable characters .I mean Ash said the Fae court was a despicable nest of vipers...these Fae elders are just the worst!.I rarely do this but pl here is to hoping there will be a way to revoke those stipulations.I find myself wishing for a resolution to that...Keiran and Roy have been through a lot already to be ensnared again by some nefarious characters . Thank you for the update ..now let me sleep off😀
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    It seems between you and @Casualwanderer82 there is undeclared 'battle' going to see who can outdo the other in 'psycho-analysis' of our protagonists 😀..I for one am not picking a side .hihi. Like always thank you for the thorough psycho-evaluation @Cane23
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    MOMy.oh.my!..I cannot even.I have been looking forward to get a glimpse of who Adrian is. You did not just give a glimpse...it was a full blast of chaos and damage. Lorenzo(from one one your earlier stories),was a mess but Adrian must be a close second. It makes one realise that humans are complex indeed. we all come with our individual neuroses and psychoses. This chapter was just so rich.It gave us a back story. What a rewind that was!.However what made it really rich for me, what the last part of present day!.I dare say Nick has finally got his brand of catharsis! so to speak. Thank you for the update!.
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    Chapter 5

    Seraph28 commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Now that is a really fun and cool format of making a character backstory..😀.. At least now we know something about our protagonists...thank you for the update!. Blessed week ahead!
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    Am of that same thought line actually
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    You just know when I could use a light up moment..This was it!. I like how you have made Desmond the focus of this chapter.We had never really known him before,other than being a prodigy priest and all .Reading the scene of his meeting with the priests reminded me of how most of the time ,priests/religious persons are actually uber judgemental and so unforgiving. Thank you for the update . blessed week ahead!
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    Finally Danny has decided to cross the Rubicon so to speak.I for one am all for it...sometimes it's just best to just take the plunge😃.. Thank you as usual @Laura.Now all one has to do is patiently wait till next Sunday .😃😀. In the meantime,here is to wishing you a blessed Sunday and new week ahead!
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