Seraph28
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Right on time indeed...now I can head off to sleep...Was only waiting for the notification that you had updated ..haha Thank you for the update!
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Oh my!..that last part just made shudder...I mean the word consequences..haha...Look forward to the next offering
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It most definitely will not be....he is after all a fledgling .
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What a way to leave us hanging..😀😆...Just a personal opinion...Aaven is quite annoying...and on the verge of being unlikeable for me.Which sucks since he is our protagonist.haha Thank you for the update!
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[Memory, Freshman Year, October] – The Extra
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, October] – The Extra
This is when your style of writing shines best😀...Alexander is going to be my newest favourite character- 20 comments
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"That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
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Now is as good as confession time on my part. I only started following this story about a fortnight ago. I found it one day while browsing through your stories and binge read the first chapters to catch up. Each time I get a notification for chapter update..always have this in my mind...is Bunny boy going to finally reveal himself. You can imagine my personal frustration each time it doesn't happen😉😆😆... And my God....Jamie..eh..he is clueless much..haha
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"That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
Whenever I get a new notification of a chapter update, am always excited for two reasons. The first being the chapter update ..and the other being your analytical breakdown of the chapter. The state of mind of the characters and their motivation at that particular point in each chapter update . Thank you! -
"That Place Only We Know (Part 2)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "That Place Only We Know (Part 2)"
You are devious...in a good way😆😉.Though now am filled with trepidation ..that the end of this journey is nigh.I do not want it to end but as all good things come to an end..I must get used to it. Thank you! -
Well..what a delightful way to wake up!..Am glad the new series did not take long like you had stated. I like how the dynamics of the group are evolving.I like that Danae was given prominence in this chapter.Now everyone has had their moment in the sun so to speak 😉 Is this one going to follow the same update schedule like the other two chapters? Thanks for the update!
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"That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "That Place Only We Know (Part 1)"
You are something else!..Two chapters in the same day is just such a delight for me😀😉. This is such a poignant chapter of a story about the complexity of human emotion!.The previous chapter was just so bleak. I know it's just a story but personally for me reading is like going on a trip, sort of a journey .When you encounter something unpleasant along the way, it kind of kills the vibe..Look at me being melodramatic all of a sudden😆..Let me sign off lest I make a clown out of myself. Thanks for the update!- 21 comments
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"Adrian's Eleventh Hour"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Adrian's Eleventh Hour"
Personally...sometimes I skip the sex scenes...like this one...I knew what was coming the moment the paper rolls came out -
So good to finally get another update.It had been so long I worried you had abandoned the story.What a way to come back!..A blood bath..eh. Thank you for the update!
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"Adrian's Eleventh Hour"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Adrian's Eleventh Hour"
You were right to add that trigger warning at the top of the chapter.This chapter is just so...dark and you have written dark before. Adrian is just an abyss ..there is nothing really there.. You ever read a character before and got the feeling that no amount of rehabilitation that character was put through would ever change your mind on that particular character?.Well Adrian is it for me. Thanks for the update ! -
Wouldn't that be a hoot😀
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Eh...how on earth did you come to that conclusion?😀
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Well...there was a warning before the chapter.😀..It definitely means we are about to be put through an emotional wringer in the upcoming chapters😀
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I feel like this new story ,unlike the others,is going to be a case study of the human psyche!.You did after all give us fair warning in the beginning.Nothing is really as it seems
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Blimey...now will have to wait anxiously for the resolution of that cliff hanger😉😀.... Thank you for the update!
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Maybe you can try food but when it's pulverized.Take it like you starting anew...small portions of what you like with a serving of the fruits you like
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Exactly...that's why was like am just so fed up of nefarious people messing with them
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Oh at least lawyers are mostly competent.....these Fae ones are just terrible
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More likely squeal ...they wouldn't want to have their nails dirty 😉
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You have this knack for writing pretty detestable characters .I mean Ash said the Fae court was a despicable nest of vipers...these Fae elders are just the worst!.I rarely do this but pl here is to hoping there will be a way to revoke those stipulations.I find myself wishing for a resolution to that...Keiran and Roy have been through a lot already to be ensnared again by some nefarious characters . Thank you for the update ..now let me sleep off😀
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"The Quiet Ache Of Autumn"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Quiet Ache Of Autumn"
It seems between you and @Casualwanderer82 there is undeclared 'battle' going to see who can outdo the other in 'psycho-analysis' of our protagonists 😀..I for one am not picking a side .hihi. Like always thank you for the thorough psycho-evaluation @Cane23
